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  • Kanye west- Bunkin' Off..feed please

    i have my own feelings bout this...and il say after other ppl have said theres...


  • #2
    like everything xcept the kanye west down his back. looks kinda un-proffesional

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    • #3
      kk thanks for the feed...

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      • #4
        yeh apart from the text on his back, the tracklist is way too big. and you need to dnld some more fonts home boy. oh yeah and kanyes distorted. good colour tho
        THEY SCARED TO DEATH, THEY SCARED TO LOOK, THEY SHOOK...
        CAUSE AINT NO SUCH THING AS HALF WAY CROOKS


        BATTLES:9
        WON: 9
        KO'S: 9

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        • #5
          kk thanks....by tracklist you mean going up to 20? or the font?!....im going to try and correct it...

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          • #6
            I ain't really feeling it, Kanye should be placed a lil more to the left and the font needs work. Keep it up

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            • #7
              IMO theres not enough room on the cover to have a tracklist on it.. takes away from it all..BUt yea I like the colors a bit. Though the purple grass idk whats up with that.

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              • #8
                Promising title, could have provided you with a good theme, but instead you went for the PSD over boring background option. The PSD is stretched, the wall is the most boring wall I've ever seen and the text is awful. Start experimenting with styles!

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                • #9
                  hes at a wall cos hes bunking off school...DJ do you ever give anyone any advice or postives?..you just come in every thread and slag ppl off...i know i aint the best but id like to think im impoving....and i quite like this piece...and i will take on board ppls constructive critisims and try to improve the cover...thanks...

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                  • #10
                    Dude, if your work sucks I'm going to tell you, even if it's not what you want to hear particularly. Work like this is not worth going through thoroughly, so that's why I tell you to step your game up first, and experiment with different styles, because all I see around here is the same old rehashed shit, same rehashed PSDs, same ghetto backgrounds, same lack of any imagination or creativity. That's the only constructive critisism I can give, and it will benefit you much more in the long run than anything else that has been/will be said in this thread. And if you regard that as slagging you off, it is what it is.

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                    • #11
                      well sed n*gga...
                      THEY SCARED TO DEATH, THEY SCARED TO LOOK, THEY SHOOK...
                      CAUSE AINT NO SUCH THING AS HALF WAY CROOKS


                      BATTLES:9
                      WON: 9
                      KO'S: 9

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