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    The feed on the 'folio design is what i'm really after, as i already know most the faults on the poster, just posted it for the sake of erm something
    If you're going to bad rep me, atleast leave your name, faggots.

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    The first one, Is to cluttered, a real mess, Not my style of graphic.
    The portfollio is dope. But I dont think its the most eye catching design ive ever seen.

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    • #3
      Ima have someone go sick with the flashwork on the template. It will be crazy when finished
      If you're going to bad rep me, atleast leave your name, faggots.

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      • #4
        The poster, like those CD covers, seem extremely random with no sense of a final goal. Portfolio site is nice. Some people say that even listing prices on a certain page will make you lose business, so having it displayed on the header may impact your business. Not sure you exact market though. I would assume its businesses and established places, seeing as how the prices are higher than your average place.

        The pattern and the "screw" - I think it's suppoosed to be metal - doesn't come across as real or crisp.

        You got a logo or anything? I'll assume it's a work-in-progress.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by ike!
          The poster, like those CD covers, seem extremely random with no sense of a final goal. Portfolio site is nice. Some people say that even listing prices on a certain page will make you lose business, so having it displayed on the header may impact your business. Not sure you exact market though. I would assume its businesses and established places, seeing as how the prices are higher than your average place.

          The pattern and the "screw" - I think it's suppoosed to be metal - doesn't come across as real or crisp.

          You got a logo or anything? I'll assume it's a work-in-progress.
          The whole thing about having a price on header, i'd defend that myself. I know alot of client's ive done or are doing buisness with prefer to view graphic sites and get a straight up price. They don't want to wait around on a return email. If you feel what i'm saying. Also it might help give viewers peace of mind, as they know i'm not going to give them one price and give the next client a lower price. If you feel what i'm saying.

          And on the price, Your right it is a little high for the cover prices and stuff. But if you think about it, these cats putting out tapes they got the money to put out a tape i'm sure they can find a few extra dollars for the price of my covers

          I'm currently working on the final logo, i'll post when finished.

          And one more thing in my defense.

          "The poster, like those CD covers, seem extremely random with no sense of a final goal. "

          Your losing me, 'no sense of a final goal'. I mean the focal point on the covers and the poster are obviously the text. Text is usually the focal point. So i've achieved 'the final goal'.

          But yeah if you could fill me in on what you mean by that.
          If you're going to bad rep me, atleast leave your name, faggots.

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          • #6
            I feel you on the price thing, I too list all my prices and have them set out straight. I just got a lot of critique from higher up professionals and thought I'd pass on the thought to you as well. And about the price, if people are buying, the demand is there, no doubt it should stay like that.

            It's hard to explain what I mean by 'final goal'. When I sit down to design something I usually have something in my head, along with a certain theme, a certain mood i want to get across, and every single aspect of that graphic is pushed towards that goal. Meaning, you won't find a random element that seems to just be put there for no reason. That's the feeling I get from some of the elements in that poster.

            Don't get me wrong though, it's definitley not as bad as some of the random brush and line work in this place, in fact, it might just be my personal opinion on this specific work. Hope I cleared it up somewhat.

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            • #7
              Aight appreciate the feedback
              If you're going to bad rep me, atleast leave your name, faggots.

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              • #8
                Feeln em both...

                with the second one... what is going to be in the section just below Cham?

                It'll be good to see this up and running in flash
                ...I sniff Ajax, drink chlorox
                Spit fresh, every breath till a lung pops...

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