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  • First Audio Track (already jumpin the charts)

    Songs called " Flatline "
    Production is wack cuss i havent gotten to work at that yet, but give me some feed on the actual content of the song. PEACE!

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/jkeith21music.htm

  • #2
    Hot track - I liked it. I'll leave you some rep for it.

    One.
    "We can't afford to live, so abortions rise
    Can't afford the truth, so we told to lie
    Can't afford a funeral, 'cause the costs is high
    God damn, we can't even afford to die!"
    - Monopoly by Papoose

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    • #3
      nice u got a good voice keep it up
      www.facebook.com/rekne6
      www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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      • #4
        thx for feed, uppin for any advice or criticism on any flaws i got.

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        • #5
          Ok I got some advice for you

          keep rapping this shit is sick flow is hella catchy
          and work on quality a little bit

          return da fav
          http://www.d12world.com/board/showth...=138351&page=1
          www.myspace.com/4dbling

          none of that bullshit low quality shit

          orginal fucking flow

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          • #6
            shit if 4dbling is callin your shit ill its gotta be fucking good homie i cant listen to it now cuz this shitty comp im usin but ill check it out later
            FullBred

            I am tha don FullBled

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            • #7
              Thx for feed, good lookin.

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              • #8
                cool

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                • #9
                  ^"cool" lol...well at least it wasnt a complaint! =)

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                  • #10
                    quality sucks, which kinda takes away from this song being a realllllly good one. The hook is catchy and u can vibe with it more and more as the song goes on. 1st verse isnt great lyrically, but flow wise its nice. 2nd verse sounds like filler, 3rd and 4th verse are nice as far as multis and flow. Overall hott peice. Return the favor when i get my audios up on this site.

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                    • #11
                      ^thx, yea post em up and ill drop feed, uppin!

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                      • #12
                        U sound like a very young Nyc rapper Named Lord Finnese. His skills were untouchable.Keep at it
                        One
                        Is It Really Real

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                        • #13
                          sound like him in wat ways?

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