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  • Travis (New Speechless Freestyle, Peep it!!)

    Aight, i been workin on this the last couple days, leave me song feed thx...


    Intro
    "now i want u 2 stay here n wait for me while i go shooping..... ok travis ...ill be back in a little bit dont worry, ill b back just wait here ok..dont u move, dont u move from that bench travis...ill be back, im jus going to get a few things, and ... ill come n getchu n well come home ok buddy..."

    verse 1
    a beautiful breeze came threw bracin at tree's, as travis sat on the park bench waiten to leave//
    his mom left him there while she went shoppin, but travis wasnt scared cuz she did this often//
    it started raining, n he jus wished she would hurry, but after a few hours he got a little worryed//
    his eyes were blurry, from all the tears droppin', he didnt know wut do do, there was no clear options//
    travis wuz stuck with the taste of hurrle in his jaw, he thought his mom was every gurl that he saw//
    so travis layed on the bench and curled in a ball, bein ten years old he felt that the world wuz small//
    now he was open to a place he never seen alone, he got off the bench and attempted to walk home//
    after hours of bein lost he finnally got to his house, he looked in the window and seen his family moved out//

    Chorus
    abbandonment is the worst feelin u can have, theres noone to thrive to not even mom and dad
    u become ur own family and try to live but ur emotions leavin' u have nothing to give
    (x2)


    "Your mommy loves u, id never ever hurt u or leave u ....i love u ur my little baby ......dont u ever forget that ok travis"

    Verse 2
    travis closed his eyes to pertend this never happened, last night him n his family wuz together laughin'//
    and now today hes alone with no place to go, he sat on the porch buildin up the hate in his soul//
    travis waiten around hopin they'd come back for him, he couldnt go 2 his boys cuz he didnt have no friends//
    he never meet his reletives his parents wouldn'nt alow it, so all he had was himself and a rainsoaked-outfit//
    not havin' anyway to live was his main fear, so he started thinkin' and everythin became clear//
    he shattered the basement window and went inside, feelin' lonely and dead he just sat there n cried//
    thinkin' about everyone in his life that lied, he didnt wanna live anymore so he had to decide//
    to kill himself or not so he went to the corner and cried, he said goodbye and smashed his head on the wall till he died//

    chorus x2
    abbandonment is the worst feelin u can have, theres noone to thrive to not even mom and dad
    u become ur own family and try to live but ur emotions leavin' u have nothing to give


    "you listen 2 me travis, i never wanna hear u fuckin' backtalk me again, i brought u into this world and i can take u outta this world just as easy, dont u ever talk back to me"

    Verse 3
    now travis haunts the house were he used 2 live, he whispers in the ears of all the groupless kids//
    he tells them that thier parents dont love em, and if they go murder there mom n dad he wont bug-em//
    the little kids always listen to wut there told, n hes just happy that he corrupted there souls//
    now travis has an army of innocent children, they get transported threw the basement once he kills em'//
    travis always leaves someone in the house alive, so they can get blamed for the murder and get sentanced 2 die//
    after years of death noone wanted 2 buy the house, but one family didnt care & wasnt scared 2 try it out//
    travis liked this family they wasnt perfect, he wouldnt kill them cuz he didnt think they deserved it//
    travis aint a bad kid he just never had a chance 2 play, thats why i go to the basement n chill with him everyday//

    chorus 2x
    abbandonment is the worst feelin u can have, theres noone to thrive to not even mom and dad
    u become ur own family and try to live but ur emotions leavin' u have nothing to give


    Speechless..AkA SiNiStEr VeRbZ
    I got tha verbz to make or break herbz!
    Last edited by SpeechLess; 10-09-2004, 10:15 PM.
    _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

    *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

    * ReTiReD *

  • #2
    uppin...
    _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

    *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

    * ReTiReD *

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    • #3
      this flowed nice as a 2-pac sorta flo
      nice shit speech
      8/10 liked the story of it

      CHANGE YOUR AVATAR!
      ...I sniff Ajax, drink chlorox
      Spit fresh, every breath till a lung pops...

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      • #4
        ^both of u change ur avatar to fab
        Realm

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        • #5
          lmao^ soon gotta find one
          ...I sniff Ajax, drink chlorox
          Spit fresh, every breath till a lung pops...

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          • #6
            7 / 10
            LOFLZ!!!!!!!!
            Originally posted by Splackavellie
            when you eatin pussy you real close to it anyways so why not....Shit i'll eat a bitches ass with a spoon if i got to..lol
            Originally posted by Tmaka2000
            i cant wait till i get laid

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            • #7
              dont flood my thread, thx for the feed keep uppin'
              _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

              *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

              * ReTiReD *

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              • #8
                tht was pretty gd, story was cool, 8/10

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                • #9
                  lmao..i posted in this thread where he wanted feed n he gave me a bad rep point cuz i didnt leave feed..lol hilarious
                  Realm

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                  • #10
                    I don't have a Fabolous avatar.

                    I should get one.
                    WwW.ShAdYrEcOrDs.nEt


                    www.hip-hop-underground.com/forum

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                    • #11
                      yo that shit was hot i liked the whole story and the flow keep doin you 9/10 ~uno~
                      ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                      when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                      the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                      • #12
                        thx yo^ and xplicit sersiouly plz stop flooding this.... uppin for more feed..
                        _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

                        *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

                        * ReTiReD *

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                        • #13
                          nice shit, tite
                          Fo` REAL

                          LIL .M. DJMC

                          22 5


                          touneyz won: 2

                          Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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                          • #14
                            ok i givin out 2 much rep in the last 24 hours so ima give everyone rep tommorrow keep it comin' tho thx.. uppin..
                            _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

                            *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

                            * ReTiReD *

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