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  • My Choice (Last Spit For A While Can Yall Please Give Feed On Last? Feed=Rep)

    yo time to spit words that just bounce off the wall and hit em where it counts/
    just use an ounce of my skill to pounce on them so my name they cant pronounce/
    my love for this game has taken over my brain and has gotten me strangely insane/
    no point to complain as long as my name ends up like stars in hall of fames/
    so im writen my last spit for awhile to show you fuckers that alex is through/
    i dont mean to do this just think its right that i kome bak like mase wit a hot debut/
    i dont mean to spoil yalls fun but i think its time to kick up my feet and run/
    ive been hot before i begun to write spits off the top and shine like the sun/
    ive been straight with all the feed i get from great spitters who have high rates/
    but as i cross through the country state by state ill put up "numbers" like a "license plate"/
    so just to let yall hear this im not leaven cause of beef theres just no service/
    im an immortal yall could never hurt this but im leaven cause im gettin extra nervous/
    ive been spitten rhymes for a long time and on the way i was watchin how my skills climbed/
    and noticed that wen the my mind unwinds lines of criticism people love em cause they mine/
    it dont matter what i do because people always think what i say that im always playing/
    bloobalasoubacommmasoe just like how people dont give a fuck bout what im saying/
    im alerting peoples minds wen im converting rhymes and my mind neva stops hurting/
    i cant help it that my brains always working always diverting no fuck it im still learning/
    so its time to put this freestylin to the test and put it to rest or at least thats wut i suggest/
    hope there aint no protest as i impress words off my chest with one of the freestyles of my best......




    just to tell yall im gonna try and stop freestylin for awhile so this is gonna be a last spit for awhile.............and i liked to say thnx 2 urban aka given me explanations on how to make my stuff better......so props to him.....but ya im gonna take a break IM NOT leaven the board im just taken a break from freestylin............anyways can i get feedback on my last spit?
    ~Lyrical Bloodz~





    when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
    the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

  • #2
    damn dawg you write like 24/7 damn take a break I've read every one of keystyles there good but freestyles are supposed to be in the freestyle section mayne because we need the battle boards for battles
    I'm super-cut-lery-alistic-leaner-ala-docis

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    • #3
      ya well thats why i said LAST SPIT FOR AWHILE!! neways uppin this....and the reason i dont really post in the freestyle forum is because barely anyone leaves feed there......uppin this....
      ~Lyrical Bloodz~





      when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
      the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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      • #4
        this is absolutely terrible, the worst ive ever seen u do....lmao j/p 9/10

        PS I expect Rep Points

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        • #5
          8/10 you had excllent flow also expectin a rep point
          I'm super-cut-lery-alistic-leaner-ala-docis

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          • #6
            ight thnx 4 feed yall.......and i gave yall reps.......uppin this....
            ~Lyrical Bloodz~





            when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
            the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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            • #7
              yo time to spit words that just bounce off the wall and hit em where it counts/
              just use an ounce of my skill to pounce on them so my name they cant pronounce/

              nice multis and i like the name part

              my love for this game has taken over my brain and has gotten me strangely insane/
              no point to complain as long as my name ends up like stars in hall of fames/

              nice multis again...but every1 wants to be in the hall of fame so its not as deep

              so im writen my last spit for awhile to show you fuckers that alex is through/
              i dont mean to do this just think its right that i kome bak like mase wit a hot debut/

              lol i like this line

              i dont mean to spoil yalls fun but i think its time to kick up my feet and run/
              ive been hot before i begun to write spits off the top and shine like the sun/

              simple but gets the point done

              ive been straight with all the feed i get from great spitters who have high rates/
              but as i cross through the country state by state ill put up "numbers" like a "license plate"/

              like the plate part and like the part that is about ppl like me

              so just to let yall hear this im not leaven cause of beef theres just no service/
              im an immortal yall could never hurt this but im leaven cause im gettin extra nervous/

              get first part but i dont get the nervous part

              ive been spitten rhymes for a long time and on the way i was watchin how my skills climbed/
              and noticed that wen the my mind unwinds lines of criticism people love em cause they mine/

              nice multis and tells good story

              it dont matter what i do because people always think what i say that im always playing/
              bloobalasoubacommmasoe just like how people dont give a fuck bout what im saying/

              haha nice

              im alerting peoples minds wen im converting rhymes and my mind neva stops hurting/
              i cant help it that my brains always working always diverting no fuck it im still learning/

              nice line good multis good that u realize ur not the best

              so its time to put this freestylin to the test and put it to rest or at least thats wut i suggest/
              hope there aint no protest as i impress words off my chest with one of the freestyles of my best......

              i like this line as and ender good multis

              i liked it

              but i still didnt see those really deeep lines that i like

              but

              8/10

              come back soon

              i am considering u for syndicate
              E

              "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
              and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
              -Alex The Worm King

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              • #8
                thnx dawg for the explanation thats the kinda shit i like..........uppin this.....
                ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                • #9
                  Damn very nice multies good spit overall too

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                  • #10
                    thnx dawg...uppin this....
                    ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                    when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                    the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                    • #11
                      yo time to spit words that just bounce off the wall and hit em where it counts/
                      just use an ounce of my skill to pounce on them so my name they cant pronounce/

                      Eh aight flow and multis liked the first line, multis seem kinda forced

                      my love for this game has taken over my brain and has gotten me strangely insane/
                      no point to complain as long as my name ends up like stars in hall of fames/

                      Multis are less forced here and the flow gets better

                      so im writen my last spit for awhile to show you fuckers that alex is through/
                      i dont mean to do this just think its right that i kome bak like mase wit a hot debut/

                      Kinda threw off the flow here and what happened to the multis

                      i dont mean to spoil yalls fun but i think its time to kick up my feet and run/
                      ive been hot before i begun to write spits off the top and shine like the sun/

                      Nice line, Shine like sun is kinda played but fits here, Multis and flow back on track

                      ive been straight with all the feed i get from great spitters who have high rates/
                      but as i cross through the country state by state ill put up "numbers" like a "license plate"/

                      Nice punch here, not the best flow or multis but thats made up by punch

                      so just to let yall hear this im not leaven cause of beef theres just no service/
                      im an immortal yall could never hurt this but im leaven cause im gettin extra nervous/

                      Liked the rhyme and had good flow

                      ive been spitten rhymes for a long time and on the way i was watchin how my skills climbed/
                      and noticed that wen the my mind unwinds lines of criticism people love em cause they mine/

                      Liked this line, good multis and flow, no punch tho

                      it dont matter what i do because people always think what i say that im always playing/
                      bloobalasoubacommmasoe just like how people dont give a fuck bout what im saying/

                      Haha liked this line good flow no multis

                      im alerting peoples minds wen im converting rhymes and my mind neva stops hurting/
                      i cant help it that my brains always working always diverting no fuck it im still learning/

                      Deeper line here, nice multis and flow

                      so its time to put this freestylin to the test and put it to rest or at least thats wut i suggest/
                      hope there aint no protest as i impress words off my chest with one of the freestyles of my best......

                      Wouldnt say it was ur best but aight line



                      Aight freestyle, not best but better then others, 6.5-7/10
                      Sounds Like You That Was My Intention
                      I've Paid Dues Now Dudes Pay Attention


                      q


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                      Velvet Revolver

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                      • #12
                        thnx 4 feed and explanation..........uppin this.....
                        ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                        when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                        the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                        • #13
                          it was pretty tight, especially the "bloobalasoubacommmasoe just like how people dont give a fuck bout what im saying" line lol.. you had a good flow, and real hot multies, so overall i'd say it's a 8.5/10
                          SpurattiK

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                          • #14
                            thnx homie.........uppin this...
                            ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                            when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                            the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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