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    i havnt been text battlin lately or dropin any keys so i figured id drop one...

    people bite n recycle, an some of 'dont like u'/
    whats the big deal about it and including if u 'prewrite to'/
    we seperate ill from the 'weak', an cover ur mouth when u 'speak'/
    cuz some kids can do text, but cant flow to a 'beat'/
    print and revise what ive 'wrote', cause i spark fire when ive 'spoke'/
    its pretty bad when the voting here is screwed like the electional 'votes'/
    kids loose there tempers in lost battles, not remembering its just a 'site'/
    crack and say FUCK YOU like D-fusion, its not the end of ya 'life'/
    yea ive elevated 'some',people get u hyped, n look at what uve 'become'/
    people make mistakes biting, like acidently 'biting there tounge'/
    good times like in the back of the car wit ya boys an u 'smooshed'/
    time will tell if there "kerrying"(kerry), or will they hide behind the "bush"/
    ive beat the storng and weak, including loosing to 'both'/
    loosing is bound to happen, and some are better then others just for the 'note'/
    Realm

  • #2
    pretty gd, flowed well, 8/10

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    • #3
      yo dawg that was pretty good, nice flow and everything...but the rhymes were kinda simple like mine...how long have you been rappin nigga? you must be like me and juss started rappin, rite??
      record: 0-1

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      • #4
        ^nah he been rappin for awhlie.....nice shit xplicit keep doin you ~uno~
        ~Lyrical Bloodz~





        when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
        the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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        • #5
          That shit was nice and smooth like a newport...I really was feelin that flow...but what else you goin to get from tha lover's doh?
          ...THeREalM...


          Beenz Audio...Click Here

          Originally posted by DuPoint
          i have listened to all ur shit b4 its hot
          Originally posted by 50Caliber
          yo...that some hot audio you got
          .:Absolute Truth:.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by the 1 and only
            yo dawg that was pretty good, nice flow and everything...but the rhymes were kinda simple like mine...how long have you been rappin nigga? you must be like me and juss started rappin, rite??

            no i been rappin for a while...a keystyle for me is simple..its rite off the top off my head..my battles are way better
            Realm

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            • #7
              Originally posted by the 1 and only
              yo dawg that was pretty good, nice flow and everything...but the rhymes were kinda simple like mine...how long have you been rappin nigga? you must be like me and juss started rappin, rite??
              he is actually a veteran at this site....i'll read that spit and giva ya feed in a sec Xplicit
              bitch please

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              • #8
                yeah that shit was pretty nice, nice flow, some good lyrics and shit

                "time will tell if there "kerrying"(kerry), or will they hide behind the "bush"/"

                ^i didnt really understand the part that says "time will tell if there carrying, i get the wordplay but i dont understand what that would mean if it wasnt wordplay......please explain...

                "kids loose there tempers in lost battles, not remembering its just a 'site'/
                crack and say FUCK YOU like D-fusion, its not the end of ya 'life'/
                yea ive elevated 'some',people get u hyped, n look at what uve 'become'/
                people make mistakes biting, like acidently 'biting there tounge'/"

                ^i liked these 2 bars for some reason

                i know your better than me but i think you should make your multis more and advanced, for ex. instead of havin somethin like just the word "daze" rhyme with "rays" have like "grab ya neck till ya days" rhyme with "electrical rays" lol i probably didnt need to explain all that but i did anyway for some reason LOL

                tight spit man
                bitch please

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                • #9
                  ^yea most people say that so it nuthin new..but thanks for feed
                  Realm

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