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  • Lucky vs. DerrDevil

    Rules:
    8 Lines
    No Crew/Hate/DR Votes

    Vote on:
    Punches
    Flow
    Personals
    Multies
    Wordplay
    Overall Enjoyment

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    you can't see me, so thats why he fears me.
    even the real daredevil couldnt see clearly.*
    and when I spit these words then he's scarred.
    because the only people screamin "derr" are retards.
    just look, he's all timid.
    he loves my crew, jus look at his name, it even got ER in it.**
    this faggots known for cockhandlin.
    cuz he grabs stick for a quarter, n I aint talkin bout slot gamblin.
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    *DareDevil the superhero was blind.
    **Derr.. cant you see the ER?

    & please dont do anymore plays on my name, ive seen that too many times in the past week. shit is mad played. find a new angle. thank you.
    Lucky
    ...The Kid Genius...
    6-0-6
    Wins - Loses - KO's

  • #2
    This kid said I was supposed spit first, cause I answered his call//
    When really da truth is, maybe I was gonna go first cause heís afraid Iím gonna break his jaw//

    The mothafucka donít know what heís up against, facin me seems easy donít it//
    5 votes? No need for the quince, Iíll jus KO you like I have the rest of my opponents//

    He gotta chance prove himself, but this kid genius is gonna have to prove he's lyrical//
    Ya nameís Lucky, but to beat my punches and wordplay, you gonna need a fuckin miracle//

    Sorry I just saw no plays on ya name, but I done dropped my bit//
    Cuz theyís no disqualification in dis game, if ya donít like just up and quit//

    Honestly, sorry 'bout the play on the name, but I didn't see it 'til I done typed up my shit.
    Good drop man, it's pretty hard for me to make any points across in 8 lines.
    --DerrDevil--

    Who Fuckin With Me?

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    • #3
      Punches- Lucky
      Flow- Lucky
      Personals- Lucky
      Multies- Lucky
      Wordplay- Lucky
      Overall Enjoyment- Lucky
      Vote- Hmmm I wonder?- Lucky

      Yo Lucky- not bad little man. Ya had some nice little multies in there and your punches were pretty decent. Some were sorta basic, but some were creative. The last 4 lines were the highlights of ya verse, the first 4 were sorta OK but nothin spectacular. Overall a nice verse.

      DerrDevil- you need to work on your multies. Multies improve the flow of your verse and lines and it helps for a reader to flow on a beat to it and shit. Also your punches and disses were very basic, nothin too thrilling or eye popping. It wasnt a great verse and Lucky got you in this man. Keep workin.

      Both need to keep workin. Lucky- u got alot of potential man, bein this young and already developing some skills needed at a young age. Very impressive.

      Good job
      The Big 4
      http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
      http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
      http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
      http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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      • #4
        flow: derr
        wordplay: lucky
        personals: lucky
        punches: lucky
        multis: derr

        vote: lucky took this one, got the most important cats, personals, punches and wordplay, multis and flow dont add up to near that, the only reason he got personals and punches, is cause he focused on dissin you, not makein a track, its a battle, not a song tourney.

        i like this line...
        his faggots known for cockhandlin.
        cuz he grabs stick for a quarter, n I aint talkin bout slot gamblin.


        nice wordplay invovled, would have like to see more fillers from you lucky, but overall nice flow.

        wasnt feeling....

        and when I spit these words then he's scarred.
        because the only people screamin "derr" are retards.


        not as good as the rest, but still ok

        and derr...i didnt see anything impressive, focus more on dissing your opponent.


        wasnt feeling....
        Sorry I just saw no plays on ya name, but I done dropped my bit//
        Cuz theyís no disqualification in dis game, if ya donít like just up and quit//

        why do people diss themselves when the battle...?
        o well, good battle yall but my vote goes to lucky
        The Underground

        SpRaYeD sO mAnY sHeLlS aT yO cLiCk LaSt NiGhT, yOuD tHiNk It WaS "AlL hOlLoWs EvE"-- AKtiviTy

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        • #5
          overall enjoyment: lucky(my badi didnt see it) and if yall want me to elaborate holla back
          The Underground

          SpRaYeD sO mAnY sHeLlS aT yO cLiCk LaSt NiGhT, yOuD tHiNk It WaS "AlL hOlLoWs EvE"-- AKtiviTy

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          • #6
            Thanks for the votes. I dont understand how you could give him flow, but ok.

            2-0 up.
            Lucky
            ...The Kid Genius...
            6-0-6
            Wins - Loses - KO's

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            • #7
              Lucky got mad tallent for his age.

              Just elevate and you`ll be better


              all except multis to lucky

              vote : lucky
              Originally posted by no good27
              I'm starting to think that X-Plosiv may be god incarnated.
              Originally posted by MEADOWS_KILLAS
              Post one more negative thing towards me and ill impregnate every fucking lizzard you have.

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              • #8
                Thanks for voting X.

                3-0 KO.
                Lucky
                ...The Kid Genius...
                6-0-6
                Wins - Loses - KO's

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                • #9
                  haha fuk i was gonna vote.. nice shit lucky.. sounds tightttt... haha how old r u mayn?
                  MIDWEST
                  MINDSET

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                  • #10
                    12
                    Lucky
                    ...The Kid Genius...
                    6-0-6
                    Wins - Loses - KO's

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                    • #11
                      nice drop lil mayne
                      Walk the path of Jesus, witness if Hell frizzes
                      The mind teases reality, crack the pieces
                      Nothin' eases, bein' chastise with blood baptize
                      Guys revise, acknowledge past lives
                      MF Grimm

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                      • #12
                        yo lucky wernt you gonna have an audio?
                        if ya got it up hook us up wit tha link plz
                        ...I sniff Ajax, drink chlorox
                        Spit fresh, every breath till a lung pops...

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                        • #13
                          all lucky
                          wins 15
                          losses 2
                          K.O 13

                          my aim s/n: BigPlayaG313

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by KonCeptZ
                            yo lucky wernt you gonna have an audio?
                            if ya got it up hook us up wit tha link plz
                            i dont want to put out a single yet. i want to drop a mixtape all together. Prolly got like 8 tracks finished already so yeah.
                            Lucky
                            ...The Kid Genius...
                            6-0-6
                            Wins - Loses - KO's

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                            • #15
                              man why is everyone like "man you got mad skill for your age" yeah your pretty good but i think these peeps is just keeps commentin on your age and shit in good ways because your urbans nephew

                              i'm 12 too, but no one ever said i was good for my age or anything like that, i've been here a while and i think i'm just as good as lucky for sure....... lol no hate to lucky or nothin tho

                              there should be a crew called "the 12 year old" and it would have me, lucky, BP, blunt
                              bitch please

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