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    Yo..

    The realest of the real, illest of the ill, my jaw-droppin rhymes gonna leave you still//
    I can convince a good samartin to steal, provoke a preist to commit a kill//
    You don't belive in magic? Here's the proof you need, there ya go, now you believe//
    Make ya worship shift over to me, bitch please, get down on ya knees and kiss my feet//
    Take a seat, lyrical bloodz ain't physically meaning but we make ya mind permanently bleed//
    I'm all you need to make up the "rapper's creed", you the lone seed, i'm the full-grown tree//
    Passionate for this rap like kobe and franchise are with the rock//
    Cuz my rhymes never end like ugly shit stays in stock//
    Finally surrend? good, youve made a smart decision//
    Cuz if you kept battlin it wouldve been my vision to make you stop livin//
    You mustve been kiddin, thinkin that you had a chance at this//
    Your on the line of death like women are at breast cancer risk//
    Yo I'm done with this shit man, stop the music//
    The whole crowds frozen from my rhymes, no it's to nobody's ammusement

    feed please

  • #2
    uppin for feed

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    • #3
      hmmm ok ok....watcha need to work on is how one minutes your using all these multies n then the next you don't use any...just use multies the way if you start out with them..but all in all it was average...6/10
      contrary to your beliefs i'm as real as you can be//
      so fuck your thoughts and your feelings ***** you don't know me//

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      • #4
        ok thanks for feed, ill work on that

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        • #5
          dawg i thought u was gunna be close to alexthgreat's freestyle he got some mean ass multis and so do you but his was longer, anyways nice shit dawg

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          • #6
            the multies weren't the best (I use about 3 multies per 4 bars myself), you use too many "I'll put an end to your life" rhymes, but other than that, it's all good. I thought you'd do better, but 6.5/10
            People on this board get payed for posting here. Fucked. Up. Take note of that.

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            • #7
              yeah wut Xplicit joker said.. the mutlies but it was good, good job.

              7.4/10
              Yur Worst Enemy

              ~ Seeing is believing No One believes me because no one can see me ~


              "I wreck thru skeptics, wreck-kids with text-bits, and leave emcee's more shaken than epileptics"

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              • #8
                good shit Holmes...

                BreathEZ


                [W-88][L-3][KO's-80]


                Originally posted by RikoChet
                LoL.. Yea I Thought Ori was the ghostwriter for everyone that ever had a good bar on this site...

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                • #9
                  thanks for feed fellaz...can yall vote on mah battle vs thuglyfe?

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                  • #10
                    Nice shit man

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                    • #11
                      thats some pretty tight shit man
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                      • #12
                        Yea work on not forcin the multis not havin alot of em doesnt mean ur shit gunna be bad. overall it was aight 5-6/10
                        Sounds Like You That Was My Intention
                        I've Paid Dues Now Dudes Pay Attention


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                        • #13
                          yeah the multis is my obvious problem, lol well thx 4 feed yall

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                          • #14
                            What i read of it was forced to rhyme in my opinion like..

                            provoke a preist to commit a kill//

                            ... commit a kill? sounds stupid.

                            Not hatin, take it as advice .. you need to find a style you like, one ya comfortable with n not force it. And if you can't find one, then stop tryna rap.

                            Street Prophet

                            Tote the best glocks sold the best rocks
                            rollin cess smoke the best pot
                            hold the sket cocked, pose a threat? no ya bet not
                            cuz no ya vest don't protect over chest shots
                            1-0

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                            • #15
                              lol thnx, i think

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