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    You motherfuckers donít know me like ya still born fam/
    Risen from the darkness to kill in da form of a man/
    Youíre whole crews full of informants and stans/
    Iíll sever arms just to show you the importance of hands/
    My lyricísĎll pierce craniumís before their contained/
    Watching that knowledge spill out of youíre ignorant brainz/
    With Innocent bystanders slaughtered and maimed/
    Youíre combined skillz couldnít bring a quarter of my game/
    Iíll plain guaranteed youíre defeat like overuse of hyphens/
    Youíll get knocked out quicker than a bruised Tyson/
    And I can tell youíre bitch in saying youíd fight em/
    Iíd swallow you up like native kids playing wit pythons/
    Hyping net thugs donít equal the shine with the love/
    Iíll blade across arteries and spray off the grime with ya blood/
    Like illegal drugs Iím that underground lethal in the club/
    Where an underhand faggot wit guns donít equal a thug/

    peace

  • #2
    ill verse

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    • #3
      daaaaaaamn nice spit man maybee u can join syndicate if u want but idk

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      • #4
        nice flow holmes...multis was tight...dawg good stuff...

        BreathEZ


        [W-88][L-3][KO's-80]


        Originally posted by RikoChet
        LoL.. Yea I Thought Ori was the ghostwriter for everyone that ever had a good bar on this site...

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        • #5
          Shit thats the quickest feedback on any site Ive been on lol. Thanx guys, gimme a few days to find my way around here and see if I stick around, I'm currently defending my title on my regular site but I'll spare some time to battle here too maybe.

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          • #6
            sweet ass flow for someone wit 2 posts hahhahahahhahahha 2 POSTS hahhahahahahahahhaha

            nice shit homie

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            • #7
              Anyone want to battle?

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              • #8
                set it up^spit first...

                BreathEZ


                [W-88][L-3][KO's-80]


                Originally posted by RikoChet
                LoL.. Yea I Thought Ori was the ghostwriter for everyone that ever had a good bar on this site...

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                • #9
                  I got a battle now, we can go after tho 1

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                  • #10
                    drop ya website link where u have ya title i wanna get a shot at it...1

                    BreathEZ


                    [W-88][L-3][KO's-80]


                    Originally posted by RikoChet
                    LoL.. Yea I Thought Ori was the ghostwriter for everyone that ever had a good bar on this site...

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by ALTE
                      You motherfuckers donít know me like ya still born fam/
                      Risen from the darkness to kill in da form of a man/
                      Youíre whole crews full of informants and stans/
                      Iíll sever arms just to show you the importance of hands/
                      My lyricísĎll pierce craniumís before their contained/
                      Watching that knowledge spill out of youíre ignorant brainz/
                      With Innocent bystanders slaughtered and maimed/
                      Youíre combined skillz couldnít bring a quarter of my game/
                      Iíll plain guaranteed youíre defeat like overuse of hyphens/
                      Youíll get knocked out quicker than a bruised Tyson/
                      And I can tell youíre bitch in saying youíd fight em/
                      Iíd swallow you up like native kids playing wit pythons/
                      Hyping net thugs donít equal the shine with the love/
                      Iíll blade across arteries and spray off the grime with ya blood/
                      Like illegal drugs Iím that underground lethal in the club/
                      Where an underhand faggot wit guns donít equal a thug/

                      peace

                      this was short and nice.. your strong point in scripts is definatly, the ability to use heavy vocab and not get readers lost in its meanings.. some hard mulites.. flow was nice.. would be better if you try to place some multies in beggining or in mid of lines, instead of just always at the end.. flow gets predictable.. Iíll sever arms just to show you the importance of hands/...that was nice..

                      one!

                      BreathEZ


                      [W-88][L-3][KO's-80]


                      Originally posted by RikoChet
                      LoL.. Yea I Thought Ori was the ghostwriter for everyone that ever had a good bar on this site...

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