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  • Smogs Diss!!

    not of great quality..wrote it last night

    [Intro]
    its not bout race-color-or-creed, not tryin ta degrade-others-ta-beef/
    its about findin rubbers, dirty covers, n your fuckin mother-wit-me/
    i'll give you slumber-wit-keys, get you faggots tucked-in-tha-dirt/
    only time u got, your lines cocked, is when i come thru n fuck-wit-your-verse/
    this cat is nothin-ta-merk, im rugged creatin wruckus-wit-words/
    come-n-get-served, i'll leave ALL you bitches-slain/
    n throw an abundance-of-hurt, its like im pitchin-pain/
    tha kids-deranged, watch me script-this-plague/
    its like i got tha flu, wit a ps2, im so sick-wit-game/
    my penus, should be a fuckin genius, tha way its gettin-brains/
    E spits-insane, its a viscious-reign, fuck tha holy father/
    i drink rap-n, speak acid, n fuckin piss out holy water/

    THA GOD!!

    this cat is learnin, im a furnace, n E's sober-still/
    a line, from this mind, blows your fuckin motor-skills/
    its an over-kill, tha way i murder this stupid-fuck/
    i dont jus eat tha meat, of an emcee, i chew-it-up/
    your crew-is-tough?, i dont believe-that-shit/
    any femcee, tries ta hem E, i'll fuckin beat-that-bitch/

    u wanna diss me, bitch dont clown-around/
    id take it ta prodi g, like i was countin-down/
    u barely out-tha-house, your gay-in-ryhmes-dude/
    u could set tha fuckin studio on fire , n still not flame-tha-mic-boothe/
    u right, its insane-ta-try-you, n im not going all-out-dawg/
    but if i wanted ta face a real emcee, i should of called-out-prod/

    aint got nothin tightter?, neither does your bitch,-fag/
    me win tha cypher?, u got so many riders, ima start callin u six-flags/
    flip-this-tricks-tracks, your lines-is-nothing/
    id rip-this-kids-ass, but then id have ta fight-his-husband/
    your ryhmes-is-rusted, u need ta change-ya-spits/
    of course this kunts, nuts, tha way he hangs-from-dicks/

    your ryhmes-is, what reminds me your spineless/
    tha time,-it takes u ta write,-is longer then your fuckin lines-is/
    your out your mind-kid, my shit is classic-ta-you/
    smog couldnt drop ill, if he collapsed-from-tha-flu/
    cut this fag-in-two, this shits jus not-fair/
    he's battlin god, n im facin d12world's version of choclair/
    Tha God

    E-D-G-E

    AkapellaRecords.tk
    EdgeMusic.tk


    Im On Some Other Shit..

  • #2
    damn nice shit dawg you killed this rookie smogs.....~uno~
    ~Lyrical Bloodz~





    when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
    the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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    • #3
      Damn Damn Damn.....
      I'm pre-disastrous, I fuck shit up before it happens
      Like blown engines of Airplanes with snorin' captains

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      • #4
        Yo....

        .. Lol.. this verse was harder then your last verse u droped..for real.. shoulda stick this in as the dam.. went hard on the multies this time..didnt chop up at any point.. and you threw in some nice ass concepts.. that abundance of hurt/ pitchin pain line was cool.. pitchin pain..def had more potential.. give your lines a bit more thought.. like..* baseball players with strept throat.. im pitchin pain.*..<-- weak.. but you get the point..'twist' ideas.. first verse..was your rawest... strongest iv seen from you.. get yeh battles like this as well.. dont drop from this level nikkkkka!

        one!

        BreathEZ


        [W-88][L-3][KO's-80]


        Originally posted by RikoChet
        LoL.. Yea I Thought Ori was the ghostwriter for everyone that ever had a good bar on this site...

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        • #5
          thanks ya'll...

          looking for a crew by the way...hit me up
          Tha God

          E-D-G-E

          AkapellaRecords.tk
          EdgeMusic.tk


          Im On Some Other Shit..

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