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    ...Aint Wrote A Song In A Minute...
    ...So I Might Be Kinda Rusty...

    ...Verse...
    So many people in this world-just playing a part//
    Stay actin on scripts-instead of stayin wit ya heart//
    Kids try 2 be down-instead of bein themselves//
    Its time 2 point it out-cuz yall in need of some help//
    Just live 2 be felt-and every1 is so afraid of change//
    Its like ya personality lay tattered and deranged//
    I remember a time-when kids didnt pretend//
    A time where u didnt front just 2 get a friend//
    So tell me who you are-cuz I see something else//
    Trust has become impossible-so I stand by myself//
    So many cats-who say they down-but cant be found//
    When shit gets tough and beef comes around//
    Tell me who u are-the truth or are u livin a lie//
    Are u a real motha fucka-or do u get down and cry//

    ...Chorus...
    Who are u reallly?-a friend or a foe//
    Will u back me up-or run like a hoe//
    Can I trust u-or will stab my back//
    Will u be there 2 rite me when I get off track//

    ...Verse...
    So tell me truthfully-are u my friend or a foe//
    Get questioned-are u gonna shut up or squeel like a crow//
    And when I go toe 2 toe-will u be there 2 watch me//
    When I recognized will u pray or will u try and stop me//
    Shits changed-now u need 2 watch who u with//
    Cuz 'Ya Man'-might be the one whose gettin u hit//

    ...Chorus...
    Who are u reallly?-a friend or a foe//
    Will u back me up-or run like a hoe//
    Can I trust u-or will stab my back//
    Will u be there 2 rite me when I get off track//

    ...Feedback Would Be Much Appreciated...
    Dynasty

  • #2
    tight shit real deep...only suggestion i got is a real deep song like that, it's sometimes better to start the track wit the chorus and end it on a verse where the beat just cuts out.....


    but that shit is tight...

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    • #3
      You could've done better, I like the theme, but too simple and WAY too short, you coulda done better homie ------7/10, could you vote in my battle vs. faze
      People on this board get payed for posting here. Fucked. Up. Take note of that.

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      • #4
        ...Yo Thanks For The Feed Homeboy...
        ...Ill Remember That Next Time I Make A Song...
        Dynasty

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        • #5
          ...Nas...
          ...2 Short?...
          ...Nobody Gives Feed On This Board...
          ...Ne Thing Longer Wouldnt Get Ne...
          ...But I Appreciate The Feed...
          Dynasty

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          • #6
            well, I guess I should keep that in mind...you're right, if it were any longer, it would get barely any feed.....and I don't get feed in my battles vs. Faze either.
            People on this board get payed for posting here. Fucked. Up. Take note of that.

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            • #7
              ...LMAO @ DPG...
              ...& Uppin 4 Some More Feed...
              Dynasty

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              • #8
                Originally posted by G h O s T
                ...Aint Wrote A Song In A Minute...
                ...So I Might Be Kinda Rusty...

                ...Verse...
                So many people in this world-just playing a part//
                Stay actin on scripts-instead of stayin wit ya heart//
                Kids try 2 be down-instead of bein themselves//
                Its time 2 point it out-cuz yall in need of some help//
                Just live 2 be felt-and every1 is so afraid of change//
                Its like ya personality lay tattered and deranged//
                I remember a time-when kids didnt pretend//
                A time where u didnt front just 2 get a friend//
                So tell me who you are-cuz I see something else//
                Trust has become impossible-so I stand by myself//
                So many cats-who say they down-but cant be found//
                When shit gets tough and beef comes around//
                Tell me who u are-the truth or are u livin a lie//
                Are u a real motha fucka-or do u get down and cry//

                ...Chorus...
                Who are u reallly?-a friend or a foe//
                Will u back me up-or run like a hoe//
                Can I trust u-or will stab my back//
                Will u be there 2 rite me when I get off track//

                ...Verse...
                So tell me truthfully-are u my friend or a foe//
                Get questioned-are u gonna shut up or squeel like a crow//
                And when I go toe 2 toe-will u be there 2 watch me//
                When I recognized will u pray or will u try and stop me//
                Shits changed-now u need 2 watch who u with//
                Cuz 'Ya Man'-might be the one whose gettin u hit//

                ...Chorus...
                Who are u reallly?-a friend or a foe//
                Will u back me up-or run like a hoe//
                Can I trust u-or will stab my back//
                Will u be there 2 rite me when I get off track//

                ...Feedback Would Be Much Appreciated...
                nice bars and hooks....good creativity the flows was on good details...and i like the explanation of the whole rap...you mustve been in hard times writing this flow homie...the setting was tigh about the kids being wannabes..good rap...peace
                FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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                • #9
                  i wouldve liked to see more, overall, pretty tite track, im a sucker for deep songs thats why i want to see more....nice flow, off at some times a lil bit, overall....7or8/10
                  LastFM

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                  • #10
                    ...Yo Thanks 4 The Feed Realize...
                    ...Thanks 4 Ya Breakdown Of What Ya Liked About It...
                    ...Much Appreciated...
                    Dynasty

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                    • #11
                      ...AK...
                      ...I Most Deff Feel U On The Length...
                      ...Im Probally Gonna Add On 2 It When I Make It Into An Audio...
                      Dynasty

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by G h O s T
                        ...Yo Thanks 4 The Feed Realize...
                        ...Thanks 4 Ya Breakdown Of What Ya Liked About It...
                        ...Much Appreciated...
                        you dropped some bars of platinum...now ghost stand up and pop that collar homie...that rap was nuclear
                        FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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                        • #13
                          *Stands Up And Pops The Collar*

                          ...YAY...I Feel Cool Now...
                          Dynasty

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                          • #14
                            Yeah, I would have liked to see more, but what was there, I liked. I really can't gripe, because I liked the theme, and all that shit, can't wait to hear an audio.
                            --DerrDevil--

                            Who Fuckin With Me?

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                            • #15
                              tight shit, except to short but nice spit i spotted some nice multies nice shit homie

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