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    aight heres a trak i made a few weeks ago, like to hear some feedback, wut u liked, wut u hated...its all good haha, i never end up gettin any feed in the audio section so thats why im postin it here... fuck it, let's make this a sing along...

    http://s14.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=4...66E56C0CD12B84


    touch up/ in love

    hook

    damn ya fine, i wanna get with you/
    i wont mind, sharin a bed with you/
    what you mean, wut did i say to you/
    damn chik ow bitch, dont dare front boo/

    why must I, always fuck things up/
    mean to say sorry, but it comes out slut/
    maybe its this bottle, thats fukin my luck/
    cuz d fresh is with my lady and hes tuching her up/


    fuck a love song, my tongues rung like sponge bob/
    this mickey got me tipsy, so fuck it lets have sum fun hun/
    walk in the door, popping a fourty like a parent/
    drunk, i keep restatin wut im saying like a parrot/
    i spot u with ya friends, my lens is gettin shakey/
    you call me over, once, that ass is gonna make me/
    tasty, when ya eyes sparkle/
    ya lips cherried temptin grow, spit a poem like shakespeare when i talk-to-you/
    i reach for a hug, spill ya drink, and feel dumb/
    apologize, saw ur eyes wide and laughed it off/
    we conversate, i wanna wait, great i make my move/
    try my hand for ya shoulder but i miss and reach ur boob/
    i retreat quick, aint leavin with the chick/
    cuz u swung fists at me and yelled that the t's sic/
    u make a scene quick, everybody starts laughin/
    cuz u kick me in the sack, attack and start slappin/

    hook

    second chance at romance the dance is our setting/
    the plot's abit distraught, but for now im just sitting/
    spikin the punches, bikin with lunges, to get abs/
    spot my victim and chickin out, come on get set trav/
    okay i take a breath, and ask this girl to dance/
    she looks around, frownds, and walks right to my left/
    starts talkin to d-fresh, ignore the horror and keep searchin/
    see a hottie eyeing me, i eye back to be certain/
    she smiles, i smile back/
    been a while since i have mackd/
    been a while since i attacked, this girl at the summer dance/
    we start grindin, the strobe lights are shinin, my retina inside and
    i think im going blind and/
    i figure this it it, so i reach for a kiss/
    2 hours later i wake up with an indent of a fist/
    on my lip, now what the fuk happened this time/
    ask my man brett, he sed, dude u tried to make out with a guy/

    hook

    (talking)
    girl i love you and i just wanna tell u one thing, come here

    fuck uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    i wanna juggel with ya jugguler/
    pull it like a tug-a-war/
    u wanna play with my heart then take it bitch.. it is yours/
    it fukin hurts, to know i could never be good for u/
    mrs.beautiful, and every night its you i kill/
    in nightmares, like kruger with a machette to/
    slice down ur BACK until THAT spine is set in two/
    not letting you, trap me again, i feel pathetic oohh/
    why am i stressing u, cause i want the best for you/
    dont wanna haved sex with u, i wanna molest you/ hahah
    i beat you til death comes thru, teach you a lesson boo/
    and right before i drop the sludge haMmer to scatter ur brains/
    i'll ask if u want me to change..huuh huuuh?/

    hook2

    i swear i wanted the best for you/
    but ur love has haunted, infested thru/
    the omens heart and it be best if you/
    run as far as your ass can do/

    i thought/
    we could have something/
    but bitch start running/
    because im coming/

    i warned you/

    baby, we could have been one/
    but now you're dead hun/
    and i want to say/
    thati love you/

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  • #2
    Hey Oman I lIke The Other one Better But It IS Good

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    • #3
      HAHAH DAMN THIS SHIT IS SICK !!

      luv it
      Originally posted by no good27
      I'm starting to think that X-Plosiv may be god incarnated.
      Originally posted by MEADOWS_KILLAS
      Post one more negative thing towards me and ill impregnate every fucking lizzard you have.

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      • #4
        ^^ I wouldn't say that much.. your delivery, your emotion, and voice, ruined the song for me. Sorry. Flow was on point, and lyrics were ok at best, but I wasn't feeling it. Chorus was too repetitive in the beginning.

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        • #5
          that thing wit heart wa the best...third verse i luv it
          Originally posted by no good27
          I'm starting to think that X-Plosiv may be god incarnated.
          Originally posted by MEADOWS_KILLAS
          Post one more negative thing towards me and ill impregnate every fucking lizzard you have.

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          • #6
            aight thanks for the feed u guys... ya i can understand wut u mean urban, i didnt make this beat so at the start it kicks in and has the chorus going four times... so i just made the first half of the chorus go 3 times then the end of it once, sounded better..im just warming up u know?haha but ya thanks for the feed, glad u like it x...and more feed?
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