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    ...Iight U Said U Wanted 2 Hear It On Audio So Here It Is...

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/goodfellarecords.htm

    ...Lyrics...

    ...Chorus... 2x
    Tell me who u are-cuz rite now I dont really kno//
    U say that ur a friend-but turn around and u act like a foe//
    Will u squeel like a hoe-or keep ya mouth shut//
    If shit goes down will u ride-or will u leave me fucked//
    Are u some1 that I can trust-or r u like all the others//
    Do I have 2 watch ya moves-or can I treat u like a brother//

    ...Verse...
    So many people in this world-just playing a part//
    Stay actin on scripts-instead of stayin wit ya heart//
    Kids try 2 be down-instead of bein themselves//
    Its time 2 point it out-cuz yall in need of some help//
    Just live 2 be felt-and every1 is so afraid of change//
    Its like ya personality lay tattered and deranged//
    I remember a time-when kids didnt pretend//
    A time where u didnt front just 2 get a friend//
    So tell me who you are-cuz I see something else//
    Trust has become impossible-so I stand by myself//
    So many cats-who say they down-but cant be found//
    When shit gets tough and the beef comes around//
    Tell me who u are-the truth or are u livin a lie//
    Are u a real motha fucka-or do u get down and cry//
    Shits changed-now u need 2 watch who u with//
    Cuz Ya man-might the same one whose gettin u hit//

    ...Chorus... 2x
    Tell me who u are-cuz rite now I dont really kno//
    U say that ur a friend-but turn around and u act like a foe//
    Will u squeel like a hoe-or keep ya mouth shut//
    If shit goes down will u ride-or will u leave me fucked//
    Are u some1 that I can trust-or r u like all the others//
    Do I have 2 watch ya moves-or can I treat u like a brother//

    So let me kno-are u down 2 ride-or down 2 hide//
    Will u let me c the real-or will u keep that inside//
    Can I confide-in u-or r u gonna act like a fool//
    Are u really who I think-or just tryin 2 be cool//
    Trust is a thing of the past-now u gotta walk alone//
    Kids cant keep secrets-instead talk like a phone//
    Now there some real cats out there-feelin the same//
    Loyalty is crushed-and u fakes r the blame//
    So many kids tryin 2 be something they not//
    And their life suddenly changes-when they get caught//
    Remember I was taught-loyalty and trust//
    And stand blown away by this-like I was dust//
    Makin this song 2 hopefully make a fuckin point//
    U can either be real or fake-is ya flip of the coin//
    Dynasty

  • #2
    ~hot shit dawg i thought it flowed well i was feelin this song dawg keep doin you uno~

    9.9/10 (1o1) i liked it alot though dawg
    ~Lyrical Bloodz~





    when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
    the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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    • #3
      better in text because certian mic and audio problems.....
      E

      "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
      and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
      -Alex The Worm King

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      • #4
        dis aight dawg... u remind me so much of Prodi-G taHa.. i know u wanted to give that emotional feel, but still i think u shud work on ya delivery. lyrical content was awesome. but good job cous.. but 7.5/10 for sound
        Originally posted by McWannaBe
        Yesterday, me and my girl were making out and shit like that. When
        I sucked on one of her boobs, fucking MILK CAME OUT!!


        Project certifiedô

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        • #5
          ...Yo Thanks 4 The Feed Everybody...
          ...I Aint Great At Audio, So I Really Appreciate PHs Critism...
          ...Again Thanks 4 The Feed...
          ...Its All Very Much Appreciated...
          Dynasty

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          • #6
            ^yeah no doubt cuzn... flow was pretty on point, delivery is always key ya knah.. but er'body shud peep this shit, content pretty good. deuCe
            Originally posted by McWannaBe
            Yesterday, me and my girl were making out and shit like that. When
            I sucked on one of her boobs, fucking MILK CAME OUT!!


            Project certifiedô

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            • #7
              313

              Originally posted by DuPoint
              better in text because certian mic and audio problems.....
              word.

              Soon one complex shit is coming out of me, and i think this was very nice.
              Originally posted by no good27
              I'm starting to think that X-Plosiv may be god incarnated.
              Originally posted by MEADOWS_KILLAS
              Post one more negative thing towards me and ill impregnate every fucking lizzard you have.

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              • #8
                5/10

                might be good lyrics, don't know, I got too bored...it would've sounded the same if you would've gotten one of those text to voice machines....way too monotone, you sound like a robot...put some emotion into it dawg, stress syllables and just put your heart into it, sound like you just readin off of a word document, sittin down in ya comp chair hunched over...but keep on workin, flow was ur only decent thing b/c it was on point, but was still not FLOWING b/c it was just like u were talkin....but i know ur still to this so work on those things ^^^

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                btw if u could leave feed and repay for my lead single off my mixtape song 'We're Here'

                http://www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=143689
                Last edited by PheAturE; 11-03-2004, 01:26 AM.
                Dude listen...my biggest of muscles put yo significant others under seventy-two inches...
                True Sickness has got me spittin punches too sick that they can't understand so dudes lose interest!

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