"Game Ova" Renegade and Beenz AOL Keystyle (Antics Diss)

[RenegadeD12]

aight I told yall I was done cuz Mafia didn't stand up...well Beenz didn't want to let yall off that easy so we back...Mafia STANDIN UP....Strictly AOL keystyle that took about 10 min total...

Beenz - Blue
Renegade - Orange


**HOOOK***

...Time to squad up, cause ya Antics is ova...
Time for yall to grow up, an act a lil older...
Mafia rippen you worse than torn ligiments, in stars shoulders
Message sent...Game Ova



...Fuck it, lines been drawn in tha deep sand...
aint no one out there, within reach of a fallen hand...
Antics ya disses played out, an taste a lil bland...
They still dissin mafia...i don't know why they persist...
yeah dirt threw warning shots, cuz all his punches missed....
...Fuck what you think, I've taken on tha best an Im still standin...
Taken every shot on tha chin that's been attempted, and landed...
Mafia shot shots leave yall wit no sense and little understanding...
Ayo Ren...They mad at us cause we put back a crew that was supposedly dis-banded...
Everytime yall drop a diss, I gotta step back an smile then ask what is this...
I just dissed Mafia...so now I got Prime beggin me to ghostwrite his next diss...
Next time yall drop a diss, don't be like Alexander The Great, you better plan this...
Take Prime and unwind him nine times, from around Punchlinez...
Prime ya weakest link, he need some assists...and I ain't talkin bout droppin dimez...
There's hard an then theres fake, and Prime just crossed tha fine line, of tha white chalk line...
Punchlinez and Dirte step back, Im tha new Cap P of this board...
I'll rip ya style, tear through ya flow and restore order....
Don't ask Punch to go to war...they don't do that north of the boarder...
A Canuck an a Jerzee fag, add tha rest of tha crew and you might see a gay pride flag...
Hitten em so hard, sendin shock waves all through Urbans flab...
Fuck yall bitches, I'll woo you wit tha gift of a playa's gab...
Prime from Cali but he never sees the sun...
When ya life that bleek, it's always rainin where ya from...
Yall fags...homos that share the same mind...
Prime wanna have 3 heads so he put them in his avy, so he could give Antics all BJ's at the same time
Got nicca's in DY wantin to get at chall so bad, they beggin to write my diss lines...
snitches, fakes, lies...why u namin yaself Prime when urs flew right past you
See that you got that shook kid Trem, left Mafia as soon as beef began...
No heart, lil soul and no glow, I told him to join Antics cause his loyalty was a no go...
He hoppin on a boat that's sure to sink...
Prime's happy now...cuz he's no longer the crew's weakest link
Ya leader drops every sixteenth week, only come back to defend the weak...(yep)
Only time Urban come around when I step up an speak...
LOL @ You...you ain't a gangsta, just a computer geek...
Ain't neva felt no burner, seen ya boy laid up in garbarge streets...
Urb always come around bitch and drop a frown....
cuz he dropped all his cash on a website that can't get off the ground
Like soundwaves on tha radio, Cota Records make a actual sound...
Who really can beat Urban, when it comes down to pound for pound?...(Really How?)
Antics on top? Nah those days are long gone...
Mafia era has been born...and yall better hop on board...the new order has offically been restored

[Punchlinez]

Nice shit. Beenz came pretty nice so did Ren, enjoyed this. Good to see the beef's still on but

Punchlinez and Dirte step back, Im tha new Cap P of this board...
^^^*opens up lawn chair and puts it right on Mafia's dick*

[Prime]

Prime wanna have 3 heads so he put them in his avy, so he could give Antics all BJ's at the same time
^nice flip

snitches, fakes, lies...why u namin yaself Prime when urs flew right past you
^seen this many times, the flip was alright though. coulda related something to the "flew right past" part.

Nothing else really stood out that much, and I seen nothing good from Beenz to be honest, his was more like just stating facts. Ren came solid.

[RenegadeD12]

good looks on the feed....repped...

[Beenz]

Punchlinez and Dirte step back, Im tha new Cap P of this board...
^^^*opens up lawn chair and puts it right on Mafia's dick*

LMFAO...You like that Punch?...


Thanks fo tha feed...Im bout to get tha rest of Mafia in this...Beenz

[DCC]

Mafia still reppin!! Some really good bars in there.

[Aleksei]

Check ya PM's DCC.......regradin the diss, some nice bars and punches in there,l was feelin rens more

[Beenz]

Bump

[Beenz]

Ren hit me on aol...Beenz

[RenegadeD12]

chea

[Beenz]

Bump

[Urban]

*claps* coo diss. Beenz you should try to use more multi syllables, I used to say they don't mean shit, but i believe it'd make your disses hti harder. Shit was straight tho.

[Beenz]

use more multi syllables.

Can you give me an example?...Beenz

[bloc8882000]

Shit waz fuckin tight....MaFiA Up!!!....fire..

~OneZ~

[Urban]

Like wit ya 1st bar.

Ya original bar was..
...Fuck it, lines been drawn in tha deep sand...
aint no one out there, within reach of a fallen hand...
Antics ya disses played out, an taste a lil bland...

My version
...Fuck it, it looks like ya lines been drawn in sand.
aint no one out there, within reach of a fallen hand...

fallen hand.. drawn in sand... are both multi syllables, shit sounds a lot harder when multi syllables are involved, the more time you give it in creating them, the more natural they'll come when dropping a diss/song/whateva. Now, I don't even try when it comes to multies, they just come.