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  • Illusory Quick Hit The Brakes! (14 Lines)

    this bitch 'wont shYne' even if he 'rhymed while in captivity'
    leave illusory silent like he plays the part of realm's activity(realm is barely active)
    spits will 'make ya back-flip' like ya 'practicin gymnastics'
    have ya 'vision smell death' and dawg 'i aint bein sarcastic'
    your name 'fits ya right' you're nothin 'but an illusion to me' (illusory means illusion)
    your 'spits arent an ART' cause 'they aren't aMUSEin to me' (Muse Deals With Art)
    like 'you another version of G H O S T' your 'fame is invisible'
    even my 'name is vision' and your 'skills still are not visible'
    dont worry bout ya condtion dawg cause im leaven ya critical
    no one liked what ya said in english so ya changed to spanish
    thinkin it'll make ya be better but ya skills continue to vanish
    ya 'act hard like ya from the streets' well 'to me ya just a skid' (skids are on streets)
    'hit the brakes' ya 'dont wanna end up like princess diana did'


    edit: one line was messed up in there i meant to take it out but it was there so i deleted it
    Last edited by *VisioN*; 03-13-2005, 11:01 AM.
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  • #2
    That Wasnt Too Bad..But Wasnt Great. It Had A Few Mistakes.

    1. Illusory Doesnt Mean Illusion. Its a Derivative (sp). I Know What You Mean Though.

    2. Furor Aequitas Is Latin, Not Spanish.

    3. Theres Nothin' Wrong With The 'Vision Smell Death' Line, I Just Didnt Get It.

    4. "even my 'name is vision' and your 'skills still are not visible'" - Why Would Your Name Make A Difference To Whether My Skills Were Visible Or Not?

    5. If The Princess Diana Reference Was About My Nationality, I'm English. She Was The Princess Of Wales.

    I'm Not Bitchin', Just Tryna Clear A Few Things Up. Like I Said, It Wasnt Bad. Not Enough For Me Too Come Back At Though.

    o1ne..
    Last edited by Illusory; 03-13-2005, 11:07 AM.
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    • #3
      im sayin your skills arent visible NO ONE CAN SEE THEM and my name is VISION which means to see

      latin and spanish eh who cares they close 1o1

      will illusory is close to meanin illusion

      and i gues the vision smell death line was a filler.....i guess i was just tryin to say sumtin serious without bein sarcastic

      ya i know this wasnt too good but i had to come back at ya since i didnt before
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      • #4
        NP Man, Gotta Give You Respect For Comin' Back..I Didnt Think You Was Gonna..

        o1ne!!
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        • #5
          word....uppin
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