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  • Vision Scrutenized (*Vision Diss*)

    Sooooooo look who stepped up to get recognission/
    Do you even know what you just did? your blind you aint got no *ViSiOn*/
    your rhymes is weak drop your mouse faggot shut the fuck up and listen/
    what a dence motha fucka im jus realin him in ill use yo eye ballz cuz ur bate to go fishin/
    weak ass punk ima hard motha fucka das righ u need viagra cuz u gettin soft my rhymes are jus stiffin/
    Your to stuck up to see me coming up motha fucka you abracrombian fitched/
    crooked prep you just jumped into a hell hole cuz u know theres nuttin left I'll have yo eye lids stitched/
    Cant even make a whole diss about one person cuz u know I'll leave you flinched/
    The question isnt Do You Got It the question is What you doin!?/
    You tryna diss me and act all tough cuz i stood you up Who you foolin?/
    How you gunna diss Beenz when your just makin yo self look bad your just as WORSE!/
    Lets see you have *Vision* when I KO yo ass and leave yo eyes closed as dey put u in a fuckin HURSE/
    Yeah we can waste a battery but whod wanna waste you!?/
    Sayin you'll never lose your *Vision* well u neva had it in the beginnin cuz you got rejected by a Crew!/
    Dissin me with an alphabet cuz hes got everythin *Visualized*/
    Dropped da soap OOPS whoa Vis u seem surprised!/
    Got yo eyes blood shot from this purple haze leavin you in a daze/
    Ima have you confused by these linez cuz im trappin you in a maze for dayz/
    Sayin RENEGADE shoutin like hes startin sum parade/
    bitch why dont you go to the gym work that fat instead of bein online gainin weight and grab a Gatorade/
    Hes got vision huh? thats why i saw his ass when he couldnt handle a loss still starin at the screen showin 'GAME OVER' at an arcade/
    Last edited by Outlaw ~C~; 03-13-2005, 08:08 PM.
    Outlaw ~C~

    ~Wins-3~KO-3~Losses-1~

    Take Over!!!

    Outlaw ~C~ Realize EvilSpecialist Grass Nasty
    We Just Own People

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  • #2
    Check it
    Outlaw ~C~

    ~Wins-3~KO-3~Losses-1~

    Take Over!!!

    Outlaw ~C~ Realize EvilSpecialist Grass Nasty
    We Just Own People

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=366475

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    • #3
      oVerall waz aiight....could of came wit way harder hitz @ him...Some of those bars were streached yo...not bad....3.5/10...hollaz..I think if DubA replys to this he'll get ya...

      ~OneZ~
      ~TriP 8 pSyChoTic~

      <>~B-LoC~<>

      >A.E.T Tourny Champion<

      >>L.M.S Tourny Champion<<

      WiNz~16

      LoSeZ~3

      Ko'Z~8

      LaSt ToMbStOnE eNgRaV'd~ThaBoyUncut-K.O

      ~BuCCz ArE 4-1 Ho~

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      • #4
        you on the wrong board playa... theres rookies 10 times better then this

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        • #5
          Prove it set up a battle
          Outlaw ~C~

          ~Wins-3~KO-3~Losses-1~

          Take Over!!!

          Outlaw ~C~ Realize EvilSpecialist Grass Nasty
          We Just Own People

          http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=366475

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          • #6
            Its spelled, hearse.
            sigs cause cancer - a wise man once said

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            • #7
              oh well its an error at least i tried
              Outlaw ~C~

              ~Wins-3~KO-3~Losses-1~

              Take Over!!!

              Outlaw ~C~ Realize EvilSpecialist Grass Nasty
              We Just Own People

              http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=366475

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              • #8
                pretty weak....nice try tho u get a "A" for effort


                Battle Record
                Wins - 4
                Losses - 0
                KO - 4

                Victims
                Evidence - LoG!C - AK-47Slim - Lyrikal Bomb

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                • #9
                  hows it weak? if sum one spit it on audio ooooo it would be good it would be HARD if they spit like DMX but if u look at these artist's lyrics its nuttin
                  Outlaw ~C~

                  ~Wins-3~KO-3~Losses-1~

                  Take Over!!!

                  Outlaw ~C~ Realize EvilSpecialist Grass Nasty
                  We Just Own People

                  http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=366475

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                  • #10
                    if u heard sum1 say the shittiest raps like shoutin it out ud think ooooo wat a diss
                    Outlaw ~C~

                    ~Wins-3~KO-3~Losses-1~

                    Take Over!!!

                    Outlaw ~C~ Realize EvilSpecialist Grass Nasty
                    We Just Own People

                    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=366475

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                    • #11
                      Im not gonna dig on you like everyone else...the thing about disses...is that your more than likely to get hate for it...just how it is...esp. wit a cat like AA that people like...shake tha hate and jus look at the good feed...As for feed from me...here it is...shorten your lines...check ya spelling cause nicca's will say somthin about spelling before they leave you feed...but overall you are tryin and if you keep tryin you will get better...Im not sayin this to be dick...but maybe you should go to the rookie boards for a lil longer and up your game...then come back when nicca's feelin you a lil more...thats when you get the good feed...any questions don't hesitate to hit me up on pm...Beenz
                      .:dB:.

                      CAPO REGIME

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                      • #12
                        thats sum real feed right there no lie^

                        keep practicing

                        ~uno~
                        Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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                        • #13
                          not to bad, not to bad, some weak lines in there though, not hating or anything but keep elevating and then one day you might be one of the better heads around here, overall i'd give this diss a 5.5/10 or so, not dissin ya skill but work on ya punchlines and try not to think of punches everyones heard of, try to think of something new that would make people go 'damn, that was a hot line', keep working at it mayne

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                          • #14
                            It was cute.
                            The Big 4
                            http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
                            http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
                            http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
                            http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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                            • #15
                              outlaw

                              u still wak
                              E

                              "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
                              and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
                              -Alex The Worm King

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