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    KIDS
    I woke up this morning an went straight to school
    I seen this kid jonny an I hate the dude
    I went to um an shoved um an then made my move
    Then started choking him until his whole face turned blue
    Let um up an everybodys pointing an laughing
    We had no idea he had poisonous masses
    Constructing his brain, so when the boy got his ass kicked
    He gave in to the tiny voices that gas him
    next day, he came to school with a shotty packed
    his voice made it clear, that hes leaving in a body bag
    he told me shut the fuck up an cocked it back
    I seen pain in his eyes when the shot-gun blast
    It hit my chest an I was tossed back three feet
    He started screaming none of yall should have teased me
    I was lying there bleeding wheezing while im freezing
    I knew id be leaving soon to greet Jesus

    (Hookx2)
    I dont know what life is bringing
    I dont know what life im living
    While the light is getting dim an
    I cant see my sight is vivid

    Now hes in a rampage shooting the place
    He popped three kids in the back, two in the face
    4 in the chest, cuz I made a stupid mistake
    he shot lilly in the leg to loosen his rage
    he told the principle back up its personal
    trust me I dont want to but I will murder you
    he could give two shits if swats lurking threw
    each room an the hallways, hell hurt them too
    his only plot that day was reach an early casket
    an take the kids with him that watched him get his assed kick
    send um home to there loved ones in plastic
    I guess its my fault for being such a bastard
    I thought about while I was lying there dying
    hearing people screaming, running and crying
    with my vision fading, while something is shyning
    infront of me blinding, guns blasting an sirens

    (Hookx2)
    I dont know what life is bringing
    I dont know what life im living
    While the light is getting dim an
    I cant see my sight is vivid

    News all over bodies slumped in the grass
    Jonny running round school pumping a gat
    I wish I knew sooner I aint fucking with that
    He approached me, put another slug in my back
    It Just goes to prove that karmas a bitch
    Jonnys wearing Teflon he armored his ribs
    only motive is going round harming the kids
    But now hes slowing down, his arm pit got hit
    Red dots on his krown, cops all around
    Popped um four more times he dropped to the ground
    Swat all around now stomping him down
    Jonny let loose an popped another round
    He put a bullet straight up threw his jaw kid
    His body lied motionless slumped on the lawn dead
    An ever since that one day jonny lost it
    I still feel its my fault,cuz Im the one who caused it
    (Hookx2)
    I dont know what life is bringing
    I dont know what life im living
    While the light is getting dim an
    I cant see my sight is vivid
    Last edited by C*A*L; 03-14-2005, 03:30 PM.
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    VOTE 4 BRIX You have to go to www.DJKurupt.com go to "Streetz Iz Talkin'" and then click it. Then go to choose "cast your vote".

  • #2
    wow, shit was pretty deep.

    best shit i've seen from you ever. on the real, you need to record this. when first started reading and got a hold of the subject i thought it was gonna be mad cliche, but you definately made it interesting thru the end. flow seemed perfect when i read it, no awkward pauses and extra syllables. some nicely placed multies too.


    fav bars:

    "next day, he came to school with a shotty packed
    his voice made it clear, that hes leaving in a body bag
    he told me shut the fuck up an cocked it back
    I seen pain in his eyes when the shot-gun blast"

    "It hit my chest an I was tossed back three feet
    He started screaming none of yall should have teased me
    I was lying there bleeding wheezing while im freezing
    I knew id be leaving soon to greet Jesus"

    "Now hes in a rampage shooting the place
    He popped three kids in the back, two in the face
    4 in the chest, cuz I made a stupid mistake
    he shot lilly in the leg to loosen his rage
    he told the principle back up its personal
    trust me I dont want to but I will murder you
    he could give two shits if swats lurking threw
    each room an the hallways, hell hurt them too
    his only plot that day was reach an early casket
    an take the kids with him that watched him get his assed kick
    send um home to there loved ones in plastic
    I guess its my fault for being such a bastard"


    ^^^ yea basically the whole second verse, but i couldn't leave none of those bars out.

    "News all over bodies slumped in the grass
    Jonny running round school pumping a gat
    I wish I knew sooner I aint fucking with that
    He approached me, put another slug in my back"


    @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

    again, one of the best things i've read on this board or any other. now if yall know statez, yall know he aint easy with the compliments, but this piece deserves it.

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    • #3
      thanx homie...preciate it....
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      VOTE 4 BRIX You have to go to www.DJKurupt.com go to "Streetz Iz Talkin'" and then click it. Then go to choose "cast your vote".

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      • #4
        now THATS some unique shit. havent seen anybody cover this topic before and actually do it wit taste. checks dis shit gets two thumbs up from me. ya multis are perfect, nothin forced. u didnt need punches in dis cuz u delivered this perfectly wit content. cant wait for the audio homie

        def keep me posted on dat.
        *pulls 5 bucks out wallet*
        if dis is da bside to ur album u already sold urself a single
        R.I.P.
        MICHAEL
        "KING OF POP"
        JACKSON

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        • #5
          damn nice deep shit i was really feelin this song CAL cant wait to hear it on audio

          *pulls 10 dollars out of wallet*

          GIVE ME THE SINGLE ILL PAY MORE THAN DIRTEMIND!
          Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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          • #6
            haah thanx homies..apreciate the love...mad love an respect dogs...
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            VOTE 4 BRIX You have to go to www.DJKurupt.com go to "Streetz Iz Talkin'" and then click it. Then go to choose "cast your vote".

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            • #7
              This shit is serious. One of the best drops I seen from my niqqa checks and I see a lot of this niqqaz shit through AIM. Yall be sleepin on my dawg checks. A real deep piece, real creative, and you brought good imagery to a story. You didn't have any forced multies or anything, it sounded like everything was so natural. Good job. Props.

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              • #8
                word thanks homie...much love to you man..appreciate it urban....
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                VOTE 4 BRIX You have to go to www.DJKurupt.com go to "Streetz Iz Talkin'" and then click it. Then go to choose "cast your vote".

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Urban AKA
                  You didn't have any forced multies or anything, it sounded like everything was so natural.
                  And thats what he does best, I love it .

                  next day, he came to school with a shotty packed
                  his voice made it clear, that hes leaving in a body bag
                  he told me shut the fuck up an cocked it back
                  I seen pain in his eyes when the shot-gun blast
                  ^Imagery, you gotta love it.
                  sigs cause cancer - a wise man once said

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                  • #10
                    thanks homie...preaciate the love prime...
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                    VOTE 4 BRIX You have to go to www.DJKurupt.com go to "Streetz Iz Talkin'" and then click it. Then go to choose "cast your vote".

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                    • #11
                      uppin yall
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                      VOTE 4 BRIX You have to go to www.DJKurupt.com go to "Streetz Iz Talkin'" and then click it. Then go to choose "cast your vote".

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                      • #12
                        Wow.... That shit was hard and deep as fuck. Damn kid, that was ill. Had way to many tight bars to point out, topic was always on point, nothin forced, everything was consistant. You painted a picture in each bar, if you record this with a nice beat and quality it will be nice. Props C*A*L.
                        To the British, I'm Ghandi/
                        To the Japanese I'm an American pilot flyin over Nagasaki/
                        To the AIDS patient I'm your last antibody/
                        Sittin and waitin for a cure from modern biology/


                        -Canibus

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                        • #13
                          thanx homie...preciate the love fam...
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                          • #14
                            you know how I feel about this bro... geniouss... PURE GENIOUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
                            Last edited by .::spoken:..; 03-14-2005, 08:28 PM.

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                            • #15
                              unique and a story ...propz....
                              I scare the shit out of myself everyday -- I am a snowboarder.

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