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    PLZ DONT MOVE THIS INFINITE
    (first verse)
    im sarrounded by monsters that are hoarded by flame...
    i live for the darkness where im tortured in pain...
    misguided angels fall from the sky where we hang by the chains...
    i walked a mile in a maze just to find out i was inside of a cage...
    arteries draining into a heart that i bled on a page...
    u dont know about rage...when ur brain is stuck on my aim...
    my closest friends havnt seen me for days...
    i pay shadows to keep me comfort it was the way i was raised...
    correction it was the way i was made...
    my life is like scrapeing the orb of a match...
    we live in a hole seeing the world through a crack...
    circling the earth traveling in our own tracks...
    hell is just a place placed by fictional facts...
    sitting like pidgeons on a throne while the builders live in a shack...
    patiently waiting for there time to attack...
    all the real weapens we hold are already intact...
    attatched to your existence...not sumpthin strapped to ur back...
    the mind is not sumpthing u can see up a sleeve...
    once u let go of the bubble u are just learning to breath...
    being free is like mother nature pissing on tree's...
    after i speak its like temper but missing the T....
    when i glisten u listen believe...
    hope is inside a room but u missing the key...
    breed wit the incubus fistin a sheet...
    creating a beast that cant control its own feet...
    the truth isnt hidden..its waitin' between anger, deciete...
    trying to sniff the 'ifs' out of us but we reak...
    this is just battle ground for heaven and hell when they meet...

    (chorus)
    im sarrounded by monsters that are only letting us breath
    im sarrounded by monsters that dont let us achieve.
    im sarrounded by lies that are told to be mine
    im sarrounded by blindfolds that exist for the mind
    im sarrounded by monsters whose bellys the earth
    im sarrounded by monsters that wont let us be heard
    im sarrounded by constraints that have no limits for time
    im sarrounded by blind flolds that were meant for the blind


    heres only a lil bit

    the rest will be in audio n shit like that
    Last edited by DuPoint; 03-16-2005, 07:05 PM.
    E

    "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
    and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
    -Alex The Worm King

  • #2
    damn....thats deep. good job
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    lived life so cold i live with my wrist under a knife lived so cold that my tears turn into ice.

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    • #3
      Pretty good shit, Du. I liked how you do you multisyllabes at first but after that you kinda slacked on them... but lines like this

      misguided angels fall from the sky where we hang by the chains...
      i walked a mile in a maze just to find out i was inside of a cage...
      Really feeling that line, favorite line overall. Anyway, in a sense it's complex because I'm not really figuring it out -- the story. But my best guess is that it's mentioning some form of Self Discovery.

      Good job man, keep it up.
      I'm pre-disastrous, I fuck shit up before it happens
      Like blown engines of Airplanes with snorin' captains

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      • #4
        aight man...but next time it'll be moved, can't do it for some and not for others you know....
        I scare the shit out of myself everyday -- I am a snowboarder.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by InfiniteEclipse
          aight man...but next time it'll be moved, can't do it for some and not for others you know....
          your a good person u know that

          E

          "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
          and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
          -Alex The Worm King

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          • #6
            yea.
            see when i read ppl's bars, i spit em out instead of just readin em, and this flowed real good lol i way i did it at least.
            multies was good on it, should be a tuff audio unless u fuck up badly ^_-
            Originally posted by JMG
            yeah my shoes were 130 plus tax. i make more money than anyone in here

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            • #7
              hehe i asif make me feel warm inside


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              "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
              and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
              -Alex The Worm King

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              • #8
                shits real creative...props.....u should throw that on a beat
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                • #9
                  i wrote it to
                  IT-point of no return
                  E

                  "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
                  and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
                  -Alex The Worm King

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                  • #10
                    Just move it after a certain number of days or something, you know let people get their views in and then off to Freestyle Forum
                    I'm pre-disastrous, I fuck shit up before it happens
                    Like blown engines of Airplanes with snorin' captains

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                    • #11
                      it had good flow and excellent metaphors. it looked more like a poem, but then again i guess thats wut spitting basically is. i would rate it but idk how to rate deep stuff like this, i'd kill to see one of your disses though. i didnt notice any multis, but if this is meant to be audio, then i guess thats why

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                      • #12
                        i dont need to diss i used to straight battle

                        record is

                        wins: 50
                        losses: 4
                        tourneys wun: 2
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                        "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
                        and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
                        -Alex The Worm King

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                        • #13
                          its pretty impressive how you can spit something that deep without cussing also. props on it (ill rep ya)

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                          • #14
                            flow: 5/5 it was perfect for me
                            lyrics: 5/5 i liked em

                            favorite lines:

                            im sarrounded by monsters that are hoarded by flame...
                            i live for the darkness where im tortured in pain...
                            misguided angels fall from the sky where we hang by the chains...
                            i walked a mile in a maze just to find out i was inside of a cage...
                            arteries draining into a heart that i bled on a page...
                            u dont know about rage...when ur brain is stuck on my aim...
                            the mind is not sumpthing u can see up a sleeve...
                            once u let go of the bubble u are just learning to breath...


                            overall HOT SHIT keep droppin du
                            Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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                            • #15
                              oh shit
                              hot flow on dis drop
                              deep lyrics too and that vocab is somethin else lol

                              pretty hot. board needs more thought out topics like dis.
                              keep it up
                              R.I.P.
                              MICHAEL
                              "KING OF POP"
                              JACKSON

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