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  • 'Im Trapped' (Eclipse Leave This Here...My Other One Was Flooded Wit B.S. In F Forum)

    *Chorus*
    I'm Caved In This Cave Stand Brave Instead Of Be Crazed
    If I Let Rage Raise The Praised Life I Live Won't Be Saved
    Flip The Page Skip The Rage Hope To Get Out Of The Cage
    Darkness Engages The Stages Of My Mind As It Just Ages
    Tie Up Laces Look At My Watch To Find Out What Today Is
    Been Trapped Here For Years Can't Let Go Of These Tears
    Whispers In My Ears At Evening Just Tighten Up My Fears
    Frightening How I'm Alone Not An Ounce Of Enlightening
    My Skin Is Whitening To A Pale From All Of This Lightning
    Sit Here And Reminise Waitng For The Day To Be Rescued
    Never Been Afraid But It's Bout Time That The Sweats Due

    *Chorus*
    Shocking Turn Out Only Way Out Is Blocked
    (Im Trapped)
    I Cannot Break Free The Chains Are Locked
    (Im Trapped)
    One Way Out The Cave But My Minds Forgot
    (Im Trapped........Im Trapped)


    Thunderstorms The Pouring Of God's Tears Rain Upon Me
    Through Years I Knew A Sense Of Pain Would Be Upon Me
    Now I Am In This Dark Hole Curious If I Will Ever See Light
    Desired In My Mind That My Eyes Wouldn't Just See Night
    Bumps On The Ground The Stench Like A Dead Body Found
    The Pounds Of Pressure Inside The Weather Has No Sound
    All I Got With Me Is A Notepad And A Plain Writing Utensil
    Going Mental The Voices In My Head Are Not Being Gentle
    Sound Of Death Is Now Turning Into A Classic Instrumental
    Hard To Speak With The Heat Hoping For Coldness To Visit
    Hope Not To Become A Hobo If This Is The Way They Live It
    Maybe All These Years If My Anger Wouldn't Of Had Control
    I'd Be Off Parole And Out Of The Dungeon They Call The Hole

    *Chorus*
    Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

  • #2
    Read the first line and wasn't feeling it at all.

    First line should always draw attention.
    I'm pre-disastrous, I fuck shit up before it happens
    Like blown engines of Airplanes with snorin' captains

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    • #3
      flow was dun well
      but it seems ur not clear on what u are talking about

      and alot of ur shit sounds the same to me

      6/10 i dont even have to tell u to keep it up

      http://www.d12world.com/board/showthread.php?t=188847 plz leave feed
      E

      "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
      and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
      -Alex The Worm King

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      • #4
        hhf - ight good looks

        dupoint - i was tryin to make a scenery of me being in a dark hole ya know? i guess i messed up on it

        thanx 4 feed yall


        ill check that dupoin

        uppin
        Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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        • #5
          wait till u read sarrounded by monsters my dark whole eats urs
          E

          "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
          and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
          -Alex The Worm King

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          • #6
            1o1 MEANIE i fed it already
            Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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            • #7
              damn i never have the right smiley expression when i need it
              E

              "See a vigilante, shoot him till his heart stops
              and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
              -Alex The Worm King

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              • #8
                fine ya'll get one....good shit though
                I scare the shit out of myself everyday -- I am a snowboarder.

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                • #9
                  wtf?
                  "I was gonna rip his heart out, I'm the best ever,the most brutle, vicious, most ruthless champion theres ever been, my style is impetuous, my defence is impregnable, I'm just ferrous."

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                  • #10
                    eclipse-thanx man no more songs for me in this part dont worry

                    holocause-wtf?

                    uppin
                    Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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