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  • Not My Penis (PH.Luv, CZ, Konceptz and Ashtray diss)



    It's either you too gullable, or I'm persuasive
    But our attitudes left u fuckable, when I'm invasive
    Sad how PH.Luv's still hung ova da bad rep I gave him
    Dat shit was last month faggot...if not ages
    Wrap's it around his nuts, and brang it up repetitive
    Either granted he's out-done, or his act is too sensitive
    CZ's accent is up-front, but his language is a bit awry though
    A Netcee braggin' like a 'Model-Run' , bout his garbage audio
    Petty faggot, 'gangsta' afta his 1st Toddler-Gun, and wrappers of Oreo
    Bet he grasped it fasta than his mom when she brang him on 'The Maury Show'
    I'm clueless..Straight thought you can only be a fetus once
    But Ahstray sounds new to this, and he been here fo seasons to come
    And Kon U need to rap bout my crew in a diss and not my penis, son
    Man, Seems like U down wit' this beef fugitive, fo all da reasons wrong
    Damn, U sound like a Gay-Hooligan, Who can't make a decent song
    Made ya self da fool again, And stretched this shit a meter long
    Sure proves yo stupidness, Dissin' vets when U aint even one


    Last edited by Pawl Derty; 04-03-2005, 06:59 AM.

    I am The Exorcist. Thou have bewitched.

  • #2
    Shit Was Nice To Read. Keepin' It Consistent. Them Last Two Lines Were Real Dope, Especially The Last One, Shit Made Me Laugh.

    Keep It Up Homie

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    • #3
      thx...

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      • #4
        good personals and lots of em'... would have liked more punchlines but, still tite... good shit all together....
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        • #5
          Oh Yeah, I Have An Accent
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          • #6
            thx thx...Lookin good on da feedback!!

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            • #7
              lol nice shit
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              • #8
                Hard personaL on da last barr, lowkk....well seemz like a good beeF goin down...good drop pawl...Try and add more punches instead of just droppin the personal....PEACE...

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                • #9
                  u mention me, but u ain diss me.

                  first bar u just rhymin words.
                  n all u mention bout me is the bad rep.
                  rest is was iight on the disses to them.
                  its straight tho, u do u, but u not fuckin wid me.
                  tek the only one i seen give a challenge.
                  Originally posted by McWannaBe
                  Yesterday, me and my girl were making out and shit like that. When
                  I sucked on one of her boobs, fucking MILK CAME OUT!!


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                  • #10
                    it was an ok verse but it really was nothing to brag about. Your rhyme schemes were a bit more polished, personals? Umm..... idk how any of the hits were personal. Shit seemed real basic w/ the wittiness and creativity in your lines. Didnt have any irony in your disses, which is what I like to see in them. CZ diss was OK, i guess, but it didnt really pinpoint anything. I didnt know he had an accent, nor bad audios. You shoulda went into it a bit more cuz that wasnt that good of a hit. Also.... PH Luv rep point woulda been good w/ a punch because the personal wasnt something that's like "OH DAMN HE WAS MAD", u shoulda came alot harder w/ that. The only one u really hit hard (if that) was Konceptz on the last bar. That was the only creative piece of irony u had in it that dissed him hard. Overall it was decent w/ good rhyme schemes but the disses/personals were sorta stale and uneffective, the punches were inexistant, fairly good flow, the rhyme schemes (as I said) were the standout of the verse. Id rate it around a 4.9-5.6 or so outta 10.
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                    • #11
                      thx thx..lol @ PH. Luv givin me feedback..Like I expected summin positive from someone I just dissed..Oh, and da reason I had no punches towards u is coz I dont even know u..so I used personals wich hit harder...plus aint da reason u dissed me is coz I gave u bad rep? So I'm just tellin it like it is..no need fo da fake ass shit like 'BUST YO GUNS!' and all dat...Coz I aint gonna neva do dat to a bunch of net n.iggaz..I was bein realistic..so whateva to erryone else..I know I did good..ya'll just backin up ya homies..its whateva..

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                      • #12
                        i ain say it was bad, it was good, not great.

                        and wtff "helpin ya buddies?"

                        u d 1 who gave tenn a 10/10 on every diss he dropped,
                        even when he sed they wrent great.

                        its nuffn tho, get ya barz up.
                        i ain into this back n forth homo shit.
                        Originally posted by McWannaBe
                        Yesterday, me and my girl were making out and shit like that. When
                        I sucked on one of her boobs, fucking MILK CAME OUT!!


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                        • #13
                          Yo bars weren't all dat neither! Tellin me to get my bars up..who u think u r? U aint nobody..If u was a producer or a legend I'd understand..but U aint nuttin special..why should I take yo advice? Yo shit was half-assed and I dont like ya style..U need to get yo bars up..and I got better feedback than all u and ur butt-buddies togetha..so stfu dawg.."get yo bars up"..ppfffftttt..like Im'a take advice from a nobody..fuck u! I'm dissin u..so I expected this shit..dont give me feedback if I'm dissin u..its ridiculous..its like tellin Benzino to write an article bout Eminem's career..lol..ridiculous...now dont fuckin argue wit me and make this shit 29464 pages long..u dissed me and I aint even give a shit enough to give u feedback or say nuttin in yo thread...so quit bein sensitive fo real!!!

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                          • #14
                            lol.
                            Originally posted by McWannaBe
                            Yesterday, me and my girl were making out and shit like that. When
                            I sucked on one of her boobs, fucking MILK CAME OUT!!


                            Project certifiedô

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                            • #15
                              lol @ the last bar....nice free

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