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  • -Squashed- fitz and retro diss

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/gilmister.htm
    now u coming up involing yaself in this beef
    spidey senses tingling nothing gon be tingling when ya life depleats
    fucked with the wrong ppl now no powers gunna help u
    nobody standing up from the beating we just delt u
    fitz ya punches miss like a armless boxer
    u a spider? den i'ma sqaush u with ma paper(splat mother fucker!)
    aint the one to jump back at cats
    but ya'll provoked me time for furor to callapse
    no reserection of u wack cats
    break our ankles? da fuck come up with something better then that
    talking bout gils u sound like a fishy mother fucker
    still watchin spider man? like u still gettin milk from ya mother...fucker
    ya diss was aight but was worthless in the long run
    fag go swallow some more of retros cum
    jumpin up to help furor cuz they in need
    still killing ya at high speeds like need for speed
    coming up in here guns blazing shit amazing
    how u ppl think ya spits be flamin when
    ya crew be failing ya members wailing no chance to change me
    u bitches made me so fucking angry
    so dont blame me for the shit i do to ya crew
    oh yea i almost forgot fitz fuck u
    have u lookin black and blue
    like a oppent of mike tysons in round 2
    lyrically spitting murderous material
    eating these bitches up like breakfast cerial
    and retro coming up brining that whack shit
    got me thinking if i should bother returing to that spit
    man fuck it enough with this shit on fitz
    ya'll more usless as a hockey player wearing baseball mitz
    man ya spitz are like laxatives cuz they give me the shits
    after this i'ma just sit back and watch ya careera fall to bits bitch


    been meaning to record this for about a week but aint had time so i recorded it real quick this is ma first audio diss so uppin for some feed on this feed=rep
    Southern Intellect
    Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

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  • #2
    LMAO at NBA dissing these dudes...

    dont wait till I diss UUUUU
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    • #3
      so dont blame me for the shit i do to ya crew
      oh yea i almost forgot fitz fuck u

      Why did you have to be all mean about it
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      • #4
        Originally posted by Fitz

        Why did you have to be all mean about it
        LMFAO
        ThECartel

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        • #5
          lol come on gimmie some real feed man
          Southern Intellect
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          • #6
            flows choppy lyrics basic personals weak punches some ok, there was no need to rush the track keep it up
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            • #7
              ^^ thanks for some real feed man uppin
              Southern Intellect
              Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

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              • #8
                reKon your Worse then My man Right here how you gonna give Advice?

                Nice Track Flow needs Work Try To make ya lines a lil Even and a lil Shorter on some so it flows better for you Get a pop Filter or back away from the mic a lil

                5/10

                For a diss it was a lil weak but it was still good man Propz




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                • #9
                  ^^ thanks for the feed man
                  Southern Intellect
                  Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

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                  • #10
                    Diss wise, this was a pretty weak track. You had some alright personals in there, nothing special, but still had them in there. You need to work on your flow. Like D-Mented said, shorten up some lines, make some lines longer, try to make them just even, you know?

                    I'm lookin forward to Retro's response.
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                    • #11
                      Sorry gilm bro, i'm Australian and shit, but you sound mad gay.
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                      • #12
                        u bitches made me so fucking angry

                        ^[email protected] getting mad over the net so much ''so fucking angry'' hahaha

                        Lyrics wise wasn't great and you should come harder with personals & punches especially as this was pre-written.
                        ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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                        • #13
                          why u dissing my bois

                          i think i will roast u now
                          E

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                          and send his eyes to the cops in a box for crime watch"
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                          • #14
                            ^^uh oh

                            feed:
                            lines were out of wack dont write what you cant flow yet
                            find a better rhyme scheme for that type of beat you were way too fast at points and way too slow at others but you aint hopeless you just need to drop a few more and you'll elevate, its inevitable the more you drop the more you elevate, try to come up with better punches and harder personals this diss sounded like a quick response to something you wrote in like 2 minutes
                            it was a weak diss but you said it was your first, so for it being your first it was alright cause i remember my first diss and it wasnt that good either
                            just keep at it and yeah back away from the mic a little bit and put more enthusiasm into your vocals
                            cant think of anything else
                            no hate you wanted feed
                            ThECartel

                            Im nice like white people having a good day

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