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  • {Audio}"Lean In My Cup" Demo...I Need Real Feed

    This is going on the Radio, got big things bout to pop off, got management backing etc. from diff. peoples, so i need some feed on how to make this song better etc. cause its going on the radio soon

    "Lean In My Cup"

    Lyrics:

    u can catch me dranked out leaned hard *****/
    posted with my squad talk down and leave scarred *****/
    cause i dont play games pimp im from diff. time/
    i keep a bitch in line and u know my wrists they shine/
    i got the candy dipped low on the ragtop/
    when i leave the club u know im leavin with a bad bop/
    its TFab ***** smilin with a shiny grill/
    sittin sidewayz throwed as hell behind the wheel/
    and when i drop game u know i pull a fine hyna/
    man im higher and flyer than a sky diver/
    from the nawfside of houston down to bama pimp/
    u better keep ya face fixed for u hear that blamma click/
    or u can catch bees and leave here with a jacked jaw/
    im walkin like a pimp more throwed than a fast ball/
    the mexiking dont play so if u thinkin u tuff/
    ima put 3 in ya gut all because/


    Its going down its going down already holmes/
    im ridin woodgrain pop trunk and plenty chrome/
    and u can save the cheaptalk/
    cinderrellas on the feet make the whip/
    shiny when it cwalk/
    and u can catch me on the block lookin all pimp/
    posted with the 40 and the green like im shawn kemp/
    and fake thugs act hard till they get popped/
    call my flow botox it'll make ya lips drop/
    its no understatement yeah im the baddest duke/
    when i pop the trunk the 5th wheel catch an attitude/
    im ridin old school new school all cool/
    cadillac all blue i swang and ack a damn fool/
    i got them killaz that are itchin just to start a fight/
    and leave ya frame leakin wet like a busted waterpipe/
    candy escalades im ridin with the screens in the truck/
    i with that reefer to puff and u know...

    im in a baby lac and u know i roll i clean/
    lean in my cup/
    im got them 84's and at least 6 screens/
    lean in my cup/
    i hit the parking lot askin boppaz what it do/
    lean in my cup/
    im in the turning lane listening to dj screw/
    lean in my cup/
    pinky ring platinum and the watch got a blue face/
    hit the international and pick me up a screw tape/
    i flip swangs ***** stuntin on the boulevard/
    from I65 to 45 u know im going hard/
    TommyFab is best not to be messed with/
    I got it sowed up from alabama to texas/
    so from birmingham all the way to houston holmes/
    go ahead and pour it up and tell em what u sippin on...
    ThECartel

    Im nice like white people having a good day

  • #2
    nice shit... flow and whole souf stylez riddik... def koo for demo material... when hookz comes though its kinda repetative and sometimes gettin annoying, u might wanna put some adlibs on it.. couple of yeahs or uh huhs... dats just me though..

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    • #3
      you could really do without the ni99as in your tracks cuz thats gonna spark the already nasty ass beef between Blacks and mexicans

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      • #4
        I cant really help the you the down south style is something i cant really fuck with i have to listen more and practice on it in order to be able to help you with it but def rid those ni99a lines with sumthin else cuz shit already nasty here in Cali dudes gettin off'd jus cuz they black and vice versa with mexicans if ya dont believe check da news on jefferson highschool in south central and peep news on watts itself shits mad nasty right now

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        City Chiefs: 5-3

        Los
        Angeles Lakers: 7-0

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        • #5
          I read the lyrics first and wasnt feelin it - but heard it with your delivery and flow and it was nice as hell.

          props
          KANYE WEST DOESNT LIKE BLACK PEOPLE

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          • #6
            tha shit mean dawg

            nice song to put on the radio and try to get some club play wit this one
            Dude listen...my biggest of muscles put yo significant others under seventy-two inches...
            True Sickness has got me spittin punches too sick that they can't understand so dudes lose interest!

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            • #7
              Thought that it flowed pretty nicely. Liked your lyrics, alot of your lines were fire mayne. Your delivery was hot duude feeling it alot. Good luck with the shit
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              Walk the path of Jesus, witness if Hell frizzes
              The mind teases reality, crack the pieces
              Nothin' eases, bein' chastise with blood baptize
              Guys revise, acknowledge past lives
              MF Grimm

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              • #8
                flow was on, chorus was bangin.. it was an origional track, keep droppin shit like this!
                delivery was hottt, and tight lines
                Treasure Time

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                • #9
                  nice shit flow came in good n structure was on point keep at it


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                  • #10
                    TFabs Feedback!

                    here we go, with some "real feed" that you want.

                    Flow:
                    When I read the lyrics the flow seemed a little choppy in parts but when I listened to it, you flowed it nice and it sounded good your voice sounded good over that beat. This proves that you need to hear it audio to know if it flows good. 4/5 for flow.

                    Topic:
                    There wasn't really a topic, just a original club track better then mostly all of the mainstream ones that have come out lately. Same as the flow, this was a excellent beat to pick for this song. 4/5 for topic

                    Multies:
                    This song wasn't filled with multies but oh well, they ain't the most important thing but it's good to know yah know how to use 'em. Anyways, the multies you had in here were good, didn't sound gay, worded good and you didn't add any syallbles or miss out on any because that will fuck up the multi.
                    4/5 for multies.

                    Quality:
                    Real good quality of this, didn't sound bad or fading and staticy at any time.
                    5/5 for quality.

                    Beat:
                    I don't know why but i loved this beat, real banging. Awesome club beat, sounded good with your lyrics & voice.
                    5/5 for beat.

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                    22/25=88%...You get a Gold Star!

                    This was a dope song as usual coming from TFab, keep the hot shit coming man!...only thing I didnt like about this song was the hook, the robotic voice got annoying after 5 lean in my cups lol. But its all cool, if yah like it there, keep it.

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                    • #11
                      i liked that shit, as far as lyrics its like typcial mainstream, but you rode the beat well and the flow was very nice. there are some parts where the flow wuz barely off, im sure you could spot it, but its not really worth mentioning.

                      bad rep me please

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                      • #12
                        that shawn kemp line was ill... enjoyable track props
                        AssAssIns... AssAssIns... AssAssIns... AssAssIns... AssAssIns...

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                        • #13
                          That shit was ill man, i'm from the south, i'm lovin the Dirty South style, especially the chorus, reminded me of some Swisha House shit. But ya i'm feelin it, you got the shit goin on, if you put together an album full of shit like this, i'd cop it, since the dirty south shit is what i listen to a lot, i especially like how you got the houston feel goin with it. Mad props on it man, i think i'm gonna listen to it a few more times, maybe even bump it in my car if its available for download. Keep it up man, let me know when you got an album out, i'll cop it.
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                          • #14
                            we should jump on a track
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