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  • ...My Fault (Reggie Story, Best I've Written, Read It)...

    (Verse 1)
    earlier in the day, phone rang, picked up, an invitation
    for us to attend a party intended for a friends brother's graduation
    said 'No problem,' be there a quarter to eight, no later
    called Reggie up told him the news, came over suited up in gators'
    we was ready for this shit, goin' be drinkin' the bottles'
    was 7:30, got in my car, put drinks in the back seat hit the throttle'
    headed over there, called friend up, said we comin'-now
    look in back', friend sunkin' down surprised he wasn't jumpin'-now
    yo man cheer-up, soon enough we gon' raise the beer-up
    plus the liquor and everything we could get ahold of, or no fear-of
    he said im straight man, just relaxin', thinkin' of my time
    i said what time? he said the time, when i go on that stage wit' mine
    i said with what? he said that diploma, man i can smell-it
    this is our last year, so psyched, as for my name, can barely spell-it
    just excited dawg, and i said word, but nuff' let's talk-now
    because im so excited bout' this drinkin' shit, i can barely walk-now
    arrived right on time not one second later, started talkin'
    felt like it was heaven', bottles everywhere, as soon as we walked-in
    to this paradise, this was our time to go crazy, get-bitches
    but whoever thought this night would end, with more than red-stitches



    *Chorus*
    Reggie, that night was crazy, bottles flyin'-in-smoke
    June the 6th, was the night of the party, people cryin'-from-jokes
    almost as if age 21 payed us a visit, we-were-drinkin'
    fact was one of us was driven, didn't know what we-were-thinkin'
    but we kept goin' chuggin' down them 40's wit' ease
    and now you are in that coffin, who ever thought the fault was me


    (Verse 2)
    we haven' a blast, either you drinken' or verse-the-tryin'
    out the cage crazy, someone cursed-us-lions, then we heard-the-sirens
    saw lights flashin' in the window, we was like-shit-lets-go
    me and reggie hopped out the back, underage drunks, like-shit-lets-go
    went through the alley, runnin' down it while intoxicated
    we made our way to the car, bettin' on our lives like the lots-in-vegas
    goin' to be hard to drive, mind was swirlin', barely movin'
    flored the car, went crazy down the road, hopen' for the cops to lose-em'
    cars chasin' us, swirven' every lane, tryin' to stay focused
    this hocus-pocus mind of ours was goin' crazy, started to drive atrocious
    driven' 100 down the road, went off into a ditch-and-boom
    i could barely move, but i looked a my boy, i doubt this bitch-had-room
    shit was pressed in on him, could tell he wasn't-breathing
    feelin' like my cousins-bleeding, confused like between love-and-cheating
    i tried yellin' for help, cops came took me out, Reggie-next
    carried me onto a stretcher, saw my boy, saying to him give-me-breath
    come on don't leave me now, tears came in eyes, my fault
    started yellin' homie, we were caught, but wasn't have as bad as i thought
    took him to the operating room, started' doing procedures
    he had gone into seizure, brain damage, like trouble from school teachers
    then that flat line, homie was gone, i crushed all his dreams
    maken' out of high school, and college, even the most, out of the streets
    now i live with that to this day, no more drinkin' stayin'-good
    you gave-me-good, now every night before i got to bed, i'm prayin'-good
    should of never got in that car, consequences occured for-me
    i took away his glory, couldn't express it to you homie, this is your story


    *Chorus*
    Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

  • #2
    eh the flow was good. felt some parts were like sentences with rhyming words at the end..chorus was like part of the verse..first verse was coo..
    pretty good.
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