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  • AUDIO:The Reason That I Am(Feat. Gil)

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    hook was written by me
    [hook]

    the reason why i live is not the reason that i am
    the seamen that i bring is not the reason am a man
    the feeling that i get is not the reason why i spit
    cuz the reason why am me is the reason that i am



    [HOOK]-GIL

    [VERSE1]-GIL
    as i lay down at night i think why am i me
    why do i do this and who am i really
    i worked hard to improve and admitted ma flaws
    so when i hit the studios i'd fuckin shit on the boards
    but gettin there was a whole challange in itself
    stay positive with criticism dont get pushed on the shelf
    believe in myself know i can make it there eventualy
    i'ma be that 1 dude that is remembered for centurys
    growin up in aus as a country kid
    waitin for ma chance to blow the lid
    still just a kid but bringing new age skillz to the table
    gettin labeled just cuz i'm lyricaly able
    they think i wanna be black just cuz i rap
    they dont realise i express ma feelings in ma songs when i rap
    they call me prototype cuz i'm 1 of a kind
    these questions that i ask stay glued in my mind

    [HOOK]-GIL

    [verse 2]-K
    people keep on asking what's the reason why am me
    sit and wonder why the fuck a think i spit so flawlessly
    but the reason why this is is not the reason y'all can see
    cuz i got flaws the reason is i admit this shit to me
    see the reason i am black is not the color of my skin
    but the experience that i got to release it from within
    the reason why i live the reason of my birth
    is to find the depth of the reason my breathing came to death
    the reason i have anger and why i let it glide
    the reason why i smile and laugh and never push it to the side
    the reason why i cry aint cuz am feminine inside
    but cuz i aint afraid to show ma emotions and let it ride
    the reason why i battle is not to be the best
    but cuz the process is enjoyable in failure or success
    the reason why am true aint becuz of religious veiws
    but becuz i find it easier to be faithful towards you

    [HOOK]-K

    [VERSE3]-GIL
    i lay awake at night and stair at the ceiling
    wonderin why it is that i have these feelings
    why i live this life is it really for me
    why is it i'm givin the gift to flow freely
    i'ma put this out clearly so ya'll can feel me
    i spit freely cuz god wanted it for me
    ya see i got the gift so i might aswell use it
    gave me this gift knowing i wouldnt abuse it
    or lose it wont let it lay around
    i'ma take the crown an be da next king of underground
    but why do i spit the shit that i do
    why do i live for the feeling that i get from the crowd to
    im proud to cuz of what i am
    stand alone now beacuase i'm a man
    i live ontop of hiphop its a part of my life
    i'm a paper murderer cuz ma pen is my knife
    [HOOK]-GIL

    [verse 4]-K
    the reason why i wait its cuz i know i'll get my turn
    and the reason i move on is cuz of all the things i learn
    life is foreva altering you win and you lose
    whatever happens is mostly based on the things that we choose
    some try to make the right decisons, goin for the right ambitions
    going through the things that fructure or structure our self conviction
    whats confusing is the options we get, the choices we take
    the promises that we jus seem to break and try to make
    i try to go through life without ever having to hate
    i try to go through life having fun till i meet my fate
    the reason i dont really mind each time i make mistakes
    is becuz i take it all and then try to elevate
    doom or destiny, weakness or supremecy
    i welcome my conclusion willingly non-regretfully
    as long as i live to the fullest and aproach most of my needs
    i'll be the best put me to test and there's no way i wont succeed

    HOOK-K
    Last edited by Flawless K; 09-06-2005, 03:20 AM.
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  • #2
    feedback would b appreciated
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    • #3
      It was aright. Hook wasnt bad. Verses flow need work on the flow. Flow on the hook was okay... so remember that the verses need a perfectly flow. K... was NOT feelin' the effects and pan you used dawg. Sounded like a devil message. Other than that it wasnt to bad. Both of y'all seem to lose control of ur voice a bit...

      or lose it wont let it lay around
      i'ma take the crown an be da next king of underground

      Flow was WAAAY off on that part... changed the whole pace of the verse. That's like slowing down a fast break. K... shit wasnt bad... that pan and effect sucked ass though. I pan my beat R10, doubles R40 and lead vocals L10... cause it doesnt over do it. Keep workin' at it.
      Originally posted by Helmz
      This album Is my shit.
      Everybody should download this.
      If you ain't feelin it.
      Then stick to R&B bitches.
      AO kills shit.
      www.myspace.com/sevenmethods
      Get at me

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      • #4
        I'm very tired so excuse the fucked up typing and use of the english language.
        Originally posted by Helmz
        This album Is my shit.
        Everybody should download this.
        If you ain't feelin it.
        Then stick to R&B bitches.
        AO kills shit.
        www.myspace.com/sevenmethods
        Get at me

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        • #5
          thanks for the feed bro will work on that

          was hopein u would drop some feed
          Southern Intellect
          Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

          Prototype

          http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

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          • #6
            lol yeah^^ thats the one of reason i posted it herre lol......thnx for feed......i really need to work on my production.....thnx for the tips
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            • #7
              One of yall better tracks, flow wasn't quite on point, its aight.
              Thug Motivation 911

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              • #8
                thnx fo feedback
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                • #9
                  flow is key... once you both got that down, you'll be golden... cuz the lyrical content is there... it jus seems like yall have trouble really ridin a beat... work on the production... those are jus tips... my actual opinion is that the song was tite... i good concept... consistant... enjoyed it...
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                  "Ain't Noone Believin' U Pleez Bro
                  Ma Flow So Retarded Now That Even The Beat Slow"

                  -M'Fresh

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                  • #10
                    appreciated...
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                    • #11
                      thanks for the feed
                      Southern Intellect
                      Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

                      Prototype

                      http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

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