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  • dirtemind82
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    *gives str8up a sideways stare*

    whaaaaaaat? imma be really real wit this
    ya flow was hella rushed, ya voice was too low. u didnt ride this beat at all and i wont hold that against u since its not really that easy to do half the time. jus shorten ya lines to half of wat they are. ur tryin to convert text into an audio, half of this shit on this board couldnt be flowed right outloud its jus impossible. u gotta shorten lines up so ur not jumblin words tryin to stay on beat. ur chorus was a bit weird cuz it ended before the beat did. stagger yaself on em. drag some words out to kill alil time "im two hundred feet taaaall" ya kno? make it sound betta
    quality sounds good, and i like the beat too. u jus got some improvements to make thats all
    keep doin ya thang pimpin

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  • Str8UpChillen
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    damn.. im not the best on leavin feed for this type of shit.. but it seemed pretty tight.. lovin' the beat.. u rode it pretty good threw out.. can kinda feel ur emotions in this one so it makes it a nice listen.. props cant wait to here some more

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  • DuPoint
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    uppin dis shit

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  • DuPoint
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    200ft. Tall *Audio*

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=218905

    you have no idea how hard ive worked to be in this game
    the backs ive stabbed the money ive made u just gotta sit and bleed in the shame...
    and i fear the dreaded day where i will have to turn my back on my crew...
    i wish it would never happend...but if it did u would do that shit too...
    how many tears must u bleed before u aint got nothin left...
    but blood and sweat, pouring into a puddle that drains into a check...
    and dan its sad i know u would never think of doin that shit to me...
    but u have no idea what i would do to get this dream...
    cause ive been low in the dirt...ive hit the road and it herts...
    ive walked miles ran sneakers down to the soul in reverse...
    besides hell there aint a place colder than earth...
    but hiphop found a warm place to live on my tracks...
    all i want is to kickback and listen, but instead i gotta kick a few backs...
    i stand on two feet...just to have the floor ripped from under me...
    and i stay burnin in hell cause god loves the ugly...
    ive got a big ego...and even bigger teeth when i bite...
    and the next minitue could be gone like theif in the night...
    what level would u take it for the glory and glamour...
    im dangling by my feet from a cloud, where is the answers...


    im 200 feet tall...
    trying to fit in a world
    where everythings small...
    im 200 feet tall
    trying to fit in a world where everythigns small
    im 200 feet tall...
    trying to fit in a world where everything falls...
    im 200 feet tall...

    its lonley at the top...
    i can hear an echo in my voice...
    i sit alone without a soul...im regrettin ever makin this choice...
    i set off bymyself determind to find out what real is...
    but each step that i take i become more fake...blinded by the illness...
    i think im sick, addicted to the empyness...
    i see athousand words to the pictures in my scentences...
    no matter how many habbits u clean nothings becoming any clearer...
    becuase what i really feard was the man standin in the mirror...
    life can be a bitch choking u in your sleep...
    and thats prolly why niquill will always sell more than me...
    u could grasp the experience of money lust with one line...
    why do u think we sell dimes instead of bags of sunshine...
    cause every clock has 12 hours...
    and it can go either way...
    after the trip is over u always back to the same place...
    life or death isnt big its quite thin to me...
    cause u can be 200 feet tall or looking up at somones feet...
    we all equal in the game even if u dont carry a peice...

    im 200 feet tall...
    trying to fit in a world
    where everythings small...
    im 200 feet tall
    trying to fit in a world where everythigns small
    im 200 feet tall...
    trying to fit in a world where everything falls...
    im 200 feet tall...

    u have no gawd u have no honor...
    u will never live to see a better day if u defend your karma...
    ive been up with the best...been low with the low...
    u have never experienced me as a whole...
    u think u can do what i do?
    have u ever stepped in my shoes?
    have u ever thought u had a last breath inside a dry tube...
    or on the end of a cold knife...hacked to your arms in your flesh...its your own knife...
    ive invisiond dreams of me being big in the world...
    but the world is so huge whats being big in the world?
    every route u take ends up in dead end...
    untill u give up and u stuck in the dead end...
    hopin one day goliath can fight fair...
    all this time i thought ive been chasin a dream...
    when ive really been chasin a nightmare...

    im 200 feet tall...
    trying to fit in a world
    where everythings small...
    im 200 feet tall
    trying to fit in a world where everythigns small
    im 200 feet tall...
    trying to fit in a world where everything falls...
    im 200 feet tall...

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