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    im done with this, last diss, love it or hate it, i had ta rush the recording cuz im not gonna have time to spit this week...




    how many songs do i gotta fucken make?
    how many bones ima have to fucken break?
    how many times you gonna flap the mouth?
    how many times i knock you out?


    i think this is the last, song im making
    cuz it seemed like my last one left your mind racing
    wondering how your gonna win, well thats
    simple, your not, now lets move to the next topic

    your rymeschemes based upon pipedreams
    fucking with me, ya blood puddles up in a fight scene
    your reds out, call me captain visine
    i guess you never realized who you were fighting HUH??

    listen suzie que, im a higher power
    christ in the flesh, leaving the best devowered
    dont be be bitter, your acting like my sister
    raps not your fortee , you suck kid forget it

    and move on, and stop writing feminent smooth songs
    you bitch ass,ill smash your frame like a crouton
    im so raw i spit sushi rap like i gat a uzi packed
    get people asking, damn whos that!!!!!

    my first diss slaughtered the second
    one dressed you up a black suit left you laying the the coffin
    this one exposes all your rap theatrics
    thats what i named this bitch burying the hachet

    i admit with rap your really gifted
    but i dont mean in a good way, sons your flow sounds autistic
    but im here to put you out of your misery
    and leave these words etched your chest.....

    while your staring at your notebook, scratching your head,
    i already posted and im sleeping in bed
    see your primitive mind aint built for this, bitch i
    practically live for this, thats the difference

    betwwen you and me you and me, im a real emcee,
    what you strive every day and only wish you could be
    a pedagree when he grabs a pen he tortures the beat
    sudden impact, leaves you on the floor with a leak

    my songs pump in cars on the street
    if yours played,theyd hate it,and it would get tossed in the street
    noone wants to hear that, your a wierd cat
    spiting out all these wierd raps, i aint gonna fear that

    honestly, the only people saying they like you
    also live in the uk and they think gay just like you
    dissing all my lyrics, acting bitch just like you
    but shittt, id slay those bitches quick just like you

    i heard a past verese on ya past track
    said you were broke but the last diss you wrote
    said that you rock enogh dough to turn heads
    only reason heads turning cuz they aint feeling your shit

    your artist???your more like drunken dwarf
    cuz every bar you entering is just so short
    your tongne never flippen any syllables
    havent yet developed a flow all the bars sound identical

    you create simple minded minisquele pitafull punchlines
    ill injure you, leaving you critical
    just severed head on a platter screaming its lunctime

    if your ships in my radar, just start bombing and
    sinking that bitch, leaving these pirates at the bottom
    at the bundy isles, making friends with the fish
    u just fell deep in the waters of the abyis
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    wish ud have waited for me to record mine before udropped
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    • #3
      yea my bad, like i said, im not gonna have any time to write or record for a while, busy weeks, ya know? and its my only day off so this was my only chance so i didnt want to miss your posting..... so far its been one of my favorite battles i gatta be honest, gluck bro, ill keep checking in when i get a chance
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      • #4
        i wasnt feeling ya flow on this,

        cuda spent more time working on ya punches aswell


        decent track
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        • #5
          flow was off man work on it
          DECIBEL

          Making that Noise We Call Music


          ..BreathEZ..


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          • #6
            cmon dude deserves more feedback then this
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            • #7
              thanks E....yea its all good, they can leave feed if they want, whatever.....looking forward for your diss, your last one was real good........i did fall off beat twice on that but i rushed writing a couple bars so when i spit it , it didnt flow how i really i wanted it, but its all fun, its not like its a demo or whatever, nah mean?
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              • #8
                Lyrics could've been better....you came at him and "dissed" him a lot, that's what you're best at...

                As far as everythin else...your punches were kind of soft...and of course your flow made me want to stop the song, put on a beat and say the lyrics myself...

                Bad flow really hurts a track...bad syllable counts hurt flow...rushing your lyrics can cause bad syllable counts...and whack emcees rush their lyrics.

                lol, aright I'm jus playin on that last one

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                Dude listen...my biggest of muscles put yo significant others under seventy-two inches...
                True Sickness has got me spittin punches too sick that they can't understand so dudes lose interest!

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                • #9
                  fuck.........i heard that from alot of people, can u explain to me what i did wrong cuz im truly lost with this, ,,,im trying to develop a different flow and its not working i guess....thanks for the feed tho
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                  • #10
                    ^ It sounded to me like you just rushed it...like you didn't rehearse the lyrics at all and tried to record it in one take... like maybe you didnt even write these lyrics while you were listening to this beat but u tried to put it together anyway.... <usually that's the case when your syllable counts are off.. unless you're a rookie and don't know when a bar ends and where the multies are supposed to be placed..

                    If any of those ring a bell, that's your prob. If it is one of those and u too embarrassed to tell errybody, pm me and I'll try to teach u how to fix it...
                    Dude listen...my biggest of muscles put yo significant others under seventy-two inches...
                    True Sickness has got me spittin punches too sick that they can't understand so dudes lose interest!

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                    • #11
                      bout your flow, just play off the snares man. i usually free the first few bars, then jot em down, and play off that, cause freestylin, your flow should be perfect everytime.. as some nig above me taught me..

                      i liked your older delivery better to by the way..

                      edit: while ur writin, have the beat playin.. after every bar or two, spit it out loud over the beat and see how it sounds.. record them even.. when u done, just spit what you wrote in segments, and mixdown.. hope that helps dude
                      LastFM

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                      • #12
                        ^ with all due respect pheature i think what ur saying is bs

                        i never write anything to the beat and never count my syllabuls and my flow is always on... ur acting like flow is totally mathematical and can be categorised in syllabuls and must apply to a strict rule. i think ur forgetting that its an art form as much as a science. yeah the rooks out there dont know how to count bars so their rhymes are all over the place and landing on random beats. abyis knows what hes doing and id vouch to say that every rhyme that he lands in 'weird' places (i.e. anything but the 4th downbeat) is entirely intentional rather then having a flow which is 'off' as others put it

                        yeah there were a few places which he stumbled (like the turning heads bit) but besides that... cmon man
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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by Enigman
                          ^ with all due respect pheature i think what ur saying is bs

                          i never write anything to the beat and never count my syllabuls and my flow is always on... ur acting like flow is totally mathematical and can be categorised in syllabuls and must apply to a strict rule. i think ur forgetting that its an art form as much as a science. yeah the rooks out there dont know how to count bars so their rhymes are all over the place and landing on random beats. abyis knows what hes doing and id vouch to say that every rhyme that he lands in 'weird' places (i.e. anything but the 4th downbeat) is entirely intentional rather then having a flow which is 'off' as others put it

                          yeah there were a few places which he stumbled (like the turning heads bit) but besides that... cmon man
                          i think wat pheat said was an example, like i stated. u cant go wrong doin it that way. i dont count my syllables either, i cant even spell the word. i just write from snare to snare etc.. but ye, if you write before hand, sometimes alot of shit wont go with the beat, but then again, you can do like some artists do and go back and edit it appropriatly for that beat..
                          LastFM

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                          • #14
                            Yea homie, I never said you have to count your syllables... I don't and never have...

                            Now, writin to the beat... if you can write your lyrics without a beat or tempo and it end up bein perfect when u go to spit it then props. good job.

                            Im not tryin to argue...just lookin to give advice to people who are looking for it....now for the release of 'Let Me' ...
                            Dude listen...my biggest of muscles put yo significant others under seventy-two inches...
                            True Sickness has got me spittin punches too sick that they can't understand so dudes lose interest!

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                            • #15
                              ^ ye no doubt i can see ur intentions here are positive i was just tryng to help out aswell
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