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  • Punchlinez - Breathe Freestyle ft K-Money & Seville (Back After 1 Year)

    Artist: Profanity A.K.A Punchlinez (The Punchline King)
    Song: Breathe Freestyle feat K-Money & Seville
    Running Time: 4:48
    Download/Listen: Click Here


    Lyrics

    [Hook - Profanity]
    Start a few brawls, so I can cause a few scars
    and I strap a few 4s so I can blast a few foes
    so *breathe* might be the last time you do
    how it feel to look around and not find your crew?
    then *breathe* knowin' that you got a hole in your chest?
    and bleed knowin' that you gettin' close to your death?
    you *breathe* notice that your girl soaks in your flesh
    dude if I was you I wouldnt be holdin' my breath, so
    *breathe*


    [Verse 1 - Profanity]
    use gats to shredder your van,
    you'll need Pimp My Ride's "West Coast" to put it back together again(WEST COAST!)...
    and Mass stacks the cheddar again,
    strap macks, and pack caps, to clap back and blast past the regular men(and blast past the regular men!)...
    mad, I'll let you know,
    cuz' I been beefin' since a vest would cover me from head to toe(since yay high!)...
    now, *breathe*, take one last breath,
    clips fly 'til they empty and take one last breath...
    break one last chest, shake one last pest,
    bring the Reaper, FUCK cheat, I'll straight gun past death(I'll straight gun past death)...
    find the steal and quickly squeeze,
    so when this kat says he buys Big Macs in one of this tracks, it ain't 'cuz he signed a deal with Mickey D's(nah)(im lovin' it!)...
    smack foes, dude beware,
    and pack slugs that'll make your ass do the backstroke through the air(woooooo!)...
    assholes who be there,
    gon' be scared, when my big gat blows through your hair...
    strap rose to your jeep,
    they'll think you got massage chairs in your ride when I blast holes through your seet(aha!)...
    Mass packin' a rocket,
    nah this ain't no "gangsta lean", I got a heavy ass mack in pocket(oh shit!)...
    I'm back and I'm rockin', attack and I'm cockin',
    so fag watch what you say 'cuz I keep a hand on the strap when I'm talkin'...

    [Hook - K-Money]
    What you gonna do?
    When Pro and K-Money
    Come up to ya crew
    U won't have a chance to BREATHE
    See us comin' through
    then you'll hafta meet
    the gats comin' to you
    now see if you can BREATHE


    [Verse 2 - K Money]
    Aiyo, I'm lookin' for a bitch to fuck..
    At the same time, pick up more greens than a pitch and putt..
    The flow's too slick too touch..
    Me and Pro can do a show and make ya virgin chick a slut..
    Are we slick or what? I find ya bitch pretty..
    Throw some game don't know her name but she's comin' to Rich city..
    In the club you can find me with three chicks..
    All huggin' my nuts like soccer players before the free kicks..
    I ain't a DJ, bout I hope you know K-Slays..
    Spray A-K's with bullets the size of hand grenades..
    Beat me? please, you a silly new-bie..
    shot's will have your brains scramblin' like the philly Q-B..
    I ain't scurred to let them things shake..
    I'm fuckin' ya bitch on March the way i make her springs break..
    The Names K-Money cuz the cash is great..
    that attracts the hoes and watch me hit that ass for days..
    pass the haze.. knock em out like Cassius Clay...
    Ya crew like the Suns i'll have them fast to break.. OOOH!
    A collab with Profanity, this shit is insane
    Ya'll G-Unit wannabes cuz your missin' ya game

    [Hook - Seville]
    Lets take a trip to the West
    Welcome to Cali
    When you smoking our weed
    It makes it hard to breathe
    Underground hip hop
    and we do it for the streets
    Los Angeles Take the time to breathe


    [Verse 3 - Seville]
    Its the kid from the west representin the best
    proudly presentin the sickest emcee known to the rest
    HOMIE....
    just listen my missions to keep spittin
    and keepin my beats kickin a rhythem of freak visions(whoa, whoa, whoa
    Uh .. ready to crack the club ...
    i aint talkin bout the dance floor .. im sayin ima smack you up
    Im dead serious .. how many times i gotta say it
    im the REMIX KING ... how many times u gonna play it
    Boy ... where was you at when i had no home
    you playin games ... like stadiums ima split that dome
    U dont know ... how i roll ... so dont you talk
    its cold on the floor when u lyin dead in chalk
    You cant BREATHE ... when its laced with crack ...
    or is the temp of the track.. climbin at hights that breaks ya back
    You cant BREATHE... matter a fact you cannot see
    or begin to feel the strength of this emcee
    You better Freeze with the berry lights come on
    Cuz 5.0 huntin for homies like me who write these songs
    so Ima right these wrongs ... no need to for me to cop a plea
    the feelin of bein strong comes from the moment
    that you take the time to BREATHE
    WWW.ONE4TH.COM

    Dead Serious - Dead Serious LP

    1. My Soundclick Music Page
    2. Official One4th Site
    3. My Artist MySpace
    4. My MySpace

  • #2
    Profanity came out nice I like his flow and his delivery, K-Money wasnt that bad but he could be better, he got potential to improve just needs practice, as for you, you already know how I feel. I'm loving your part the most because everything was there and on point , the flow, delivery and emotions. You got mad talent and I love to support and each time I check out some of your tracks I know its really worth it. Keep recording Seville you gonna make it big I just know it!

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    • #3
      whats good? the shit for me on soundclick keeps fucking up. hit me up with a file or something. Lyrics look nice i'll feed on it later.
      1
      Walk the path of Jesus, witness if Hell frizzes
      The mind teases reality, crack the pieces
      Nothin' eases, bein' chastise with blood baptize
      Guys revise, acknowledge past lives
      MF Grimm

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      • #4
        good lookin out peeps
        WWW.ONE4TH.COM

        Dead Serious - Dead Serious LP

        1. My Soundclick Music Page
        2. Official One4th Site
        3. My Artist MySpace
        4. My MySpace

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        • #5
          how can this be a freestyle and have the lyrics?



          Out There Bombing Cities

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          • #6
            hooks could use some work i thought..just not great on that..but...the verses where good..like em all..good flow..id say pretty good..peace~~
            Ima T.R.A.P.S.T.R
            Got the city on lock, N big shoes on the car

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            • #7
              yea .. just droped this quick.

              industry free ...
              WWW.ONE4TH.COM

              Dead Serious - Dead Serious LP

              1. My Soundclick Music Page
              2. Official One4th Site
              3. My Artist MySpace
              4. My MySpace

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              • #8
                Lol did pro bite a line?

                Prolly call it recylcling..
                http://www.myspace.com/kotten

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                • #9
                  no disrespect just constructive criticism but there was something amateurish about this guys. i think perhaps the production was kinda off... profanity ur vocals sounded slightly distorted.

                  1) Profanity

                  hook sounded straight, im not really feeling ur voice and delivery sounded kinda strange to me 2... especially towards end when ur going liek "back and im rocking mack and im popping" - im guessing that was intentional but i wasnt really feelin it. i thought some ur multies sounded quite forced 2. ur lyrics were decent but ive heard u drop way nicer. definetely some cool lines though - swimming through the air and big macs all sounding badass. i think thouhg mb ur tryign to overcomplicate ur rhyme scheme with landing on the 1st beats instead of the 4th and such sounded kinda weird to me

                  2) k money

                  ur delivery wasnt very good... sounded like u were just talking tryign to sound badass but it wasnt really working out. u need to really GO for it brother. u had some nice simile based punchlines though for sure. K-slays, missing ya game etc etc. ur flow coulda been somewhat better too... hook soiunded a bit gay

                  3) seville

                  yeah man when ur hook came in i got that feeling of "ohh shit so hes serious". u shined here flow and delivery wise. i know u aint a punchline guy but i liked the way u kicked it man. came across gangsta as hell "ima smack you up"... ur emotion sounded dead on man. lyrically the other 2 had more quotables but as a full verse urs definetely came together the nicest

                  track was decent - certainly worth a listen IMO
                  YEAR OF THE PIG

                  WWW.PIGLORDS.NET

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by DjSpyda
                    how can this be a freestyle and have the lyrics?
                    A real freestyle is when u rap over someone else's beat, WRITTEN OR OFF THE HEAD

                    my feedback:

                    THIS COLLAB WAS SICK, I MEAN ILLEGAL CUZ U DID AN ACTUAL SONG ON SOMEONE'S BEAT AND NOT A FREE SINCE THERE'S A CHORUS/HOOK...BUT DAMN PRO KILLED IT THE MOST THO I MEAN DAMN

                    Great collab 9/10 yo this is legendary, better than 90% of the collabs in the industry...
                    Originally posted by Splackavellie
                    one chick was bangin!!! hot as fuck but crazy..she was obsessed with me..every weekend at the club she buy my drinks and i'd take advantage of that...but i never hit it cuz i was scared

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                    • #11
                      ^ What industry are you talking about?
                      download the newest Helmz mixtape...
                      http://www.datpiff.com/Helmz_Benefit...l.m182731.html

                      tweet @ewhitsHelmz

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                      • #12
                        good looks on the feed everybody
                        WWW.ONE4TH.COM

                        Dead Serious - Dead Serious LP

                        1. My Soundclick Music Page
                        2. Official One4th Site
                        3. My Artist MySpace
                        4. My MySpace

                        Comment


                        • #13
                          Originally posted by FaZe-d
                          Lol did pro bite a line?
                          Prolly call it recylcling..
                          I hope to God you mean I recycled one line I used on the One4th accapella freestyle sessions. Because I don't BITE ANYONE. Never have, never will.

                          Thanks for all the feed. This is an industry freestyle. Which means, no real concept, no real topic, just freestyling. A freestyle can have a hook(s).

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by Punchline King
                            I hope to God you mean I recycled one line I used on the One4th accapella freestyle sessions. Because I don't BITE ANYONE. Never have, never will.
                            Thanks for all the feed. This is an industry freestyle. Which means, no real concept, no real topic, just freestyling. A freestyle can have a hook(s).
                            Punchlinez.
                            download the newest Helmz mixtape...
                            http://www.datpiff.com/Helmz_Benefit...l.m182731.html

                            tweet @ewhitsHelmz

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                            • #15
                              Yessir.

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