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    as to most text-cees i'm just as talented/
    but when i come up dead last i'm off-balanced-man/
    and i've done everything/ mentally/
    that i can do for y'all to give props to me/
    and i hope that you should see/ if not i wish you could be/
    me/ for a day don't even start 313/
    sometimes i think my crew says i'm dope cuz they gotta/
    honestly if you think i suck come out and halla/
    cuz i don't know what the fuck to think no more/
    sometimes i wish i could be somebody that i'm not/
    so i could get props/ while bitches who flop/ on the radio get rocked/
    but it seems if i do get popular i'll just be dropped/
    seriously though if you think i'm aiight.. let it be known/
    and my respect to you shall ever be shown/
    but if you don't like me and diss my home/
    you know what's lyrically comin' at your throat/

    man i jus' dunno what to think..what you think
    iz dat sum cp?
    Originally posted by The Project
    I would suck a horse dry

    Originally posted by PH
    Wow ur such an asshole i hope u die or something
    lol wut?
    Originally posted by Kon
    v.a.- I love the double tap reps you do homie, haha...Weed>VA>all.

  • #2
    well from what i read, there aint much to really diss at, i thought this was really good and deep, and even though the rhyme and vocab isnt too complicated, the whole verse is still very solid and nicely structure,

    your flow is real good and just keep wrighting

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    • #3
      i wasn't writing for ppl to say that rhyme was dope.. i'm writing it for ppl to tell me i'm dope.. or i suck.. or w/e.. but thanx fa the compliment
      iz dat sum cp?
      Originally posted by The Project
      I would suck a horse dry

      Originally posted by PH
      Wow ur such an asshole i hope u die or something
      lol wut?
      Originally posted by Kon
      v.a.- I love the double tap reps you do homie, haha...Weed>VA>all.

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      • #4
        k well ill battle you and well see how dope you are, spit first though cuz i just wasted 3 verses on this site cuz people sleep on me

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        • #5
          WTF? NOT BATTLE WISE.. NEVER MIND YOU'LL NEVER GET IT.. http://www.d12world.com/board/showth...threadid=42890 THERE HOW DOPE IS THAT? WHO WON IT?
          iz dat sum cp?
          Originally posted by The Project
          I would suck a horse dry

          Originally posted by PH
          Wow ur such an asshole i hope u die or something
          lol wut?
          Originally posted by Kon
          v.a.- I love the double tap reps you do homie, haha...Weed>VA>all.

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          • #6
            who gives a fuck, if you really wanna see if you can flow then you gotta battle, thats how you'll get recognize, anyone can rap a verse, thats for fucking personnal reasons, or should be , if you wanna improve you gotta battle

            oh and dont make me look stupid cuz ill fucking rip you in a battle anytime, just show up and its on

            oh yeah and dont be thinking your all good cuz that shit you posted on the page cuz there's nothing there, barely rhymes and its way too simple , plus the verse goes nowhere

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            • #7
              I'll battle u phase.
              NauticalNonsense

              The Real Makaveli (11-1)

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              • #8
                sure go ahead, make a thread and ill be there

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                • #9
                  aight, I started a thread on the Battle forum. Check it out.
                  NauticalNonsense

                  The Real Makaveli (11-1)

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                  • #10
                    where is it, there's nothing there

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by phase1
                      where is it, there's nothing there
                      "Rookie Battles"

                      check that forum, I started up a thread. KidC vs. phase1
                      NauticalNonsense

                      The Real Makaveli (11-1)

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