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  • donthamakaveli vs lotus

    aight, no limit, just flow, respond and let me know if you cant handle goin first, i be glad to

  • #2
    nah man i cant handle that im a pussy, why dont you spit first

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    • #3
      aight, check it

      mah FLOWS SICK, LOCUS dont KNOW THIS/
      than again LOCUS dont KNOW SHIT/
      called himself a pussy, only guy i know who tried to GROW TITS/
      and broke BOTH RIBS tryin to BLOW DICK/
      ya FLOWS to WACK to SERVE ME/
      i ROLL like JAX, and leave you bearin no arms like a THROWBACK JERSEY/
      yeah i STASH HEAT/
      but fuck a gun, i just BITCHSLAP YO TEETH/
      KICK FAST AND WHIPLASH YO KNEES/
      this KIDS TRASH TO ME, please, i can spit first or SPIT LAST WIT EASE/
      either way you fallin off hard like you WIT MASTER P/
      i write but i TYPE TOO, the TYPE TOO STRIKE YOU like a TYPHOON, only way you bringin heat my way is wit a magnifyin glass at HIGHNOON/
      try MURDERING ME, i throw yo CURB on the TEETH, leave the stream by yo cheek, a BURGANDY SEA/
      a NERDY little GEEK, who aint WORTHY of my BEEF/
      wrap yo toungue round yo feet cause when you speak you sweep yo'self onto the MERCY OF DEFEAT/



      aight dawg, hit me

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      • #4
        Intro:
        haha...ok you got some fuckin nerve man you really do...and get the name right faggot its locus not lotus...haha cant even read this faggot thinks hes gonna beat me?please...go back to 3rd grade then challenge me man...hahahaha

        **invasion pt.3 armageddon beat**

        yo,

        id like to introduce the world to a wanna be pac/
        not the first but this one like the rest is gonna get knocked/
        ask anyone i know, ask simmo/
        he'll tell you it would be best to research before you get fucked like its simple/
        i got a hobby of brakin peoples spines with my lyrics/
        so for the people readin this for the first time im gonna make you fear it/
        lets get this clear, your shit, cocky arrogant bitch, claimin you on top when you havent even spit/
        or at least not against me, check your history/
        i got a long line of breakin faggots off properly/
        but this one just got to me, i aint one to let shit slide so i'll show you why your work is botchery/***
        so how you gonna call me whack when you havent read one bar or one rap/
        ill take it past that and use fist to face contact/
        i dont wanna get too drastic but i got a history of gettin cocky fucks' ass kicked/
        and leavin more red on their lips than strawberry chapstick/
        if you can murder anyone why you postin in rookie/
        i'll roast you dawg, like your mother bakes cookies/
        so if your that much tougher than me you should have millions of dollas/
        cuz im closer to pac than youll EVER be so stick with ja rule, hollaaaa/
        listen i got a riddle, whats little and has more gay pride rainbows than a bag of skittles?/
        shhh i wont tell don, i pinky sthwear with a kiss in the middle/(FAGGOT!)
        if youve given up its thadonmakaveli, no not the good one the one whose got a yellow belly (haha)/
        go ahead and respond but my shits more dope than anything you'll EVER be on/
        with rhymes so hot you couldnt beat me if you was writin for a weak long/
        even with a gun to your back threatenin to blow you fulla teflon/

        probly lose just postin against him cuz hes real cocky too cocky for his own goot but whatever post don, its on ....feedback on my rhyme people and VOTE first to 5 three straits a KO



        ***
        botchery
        \Botch"er*y\, n. A botching, or that which is done by botching; clumsy or careless workmanship.

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        • #5
          i think locus took that not jus cos the opponent is cocky but locus took it.....i thought with him bein so cocky he would a been a great how wrong i was
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          • #6
            haha, how the fuck you gonna vote simmo, i be battlin you shortly, was waiting for this to fibish, goodjob locus, good luck, by the way, the point of battlin is bein cocky and confident
            Last edited by DonThaMakaveli; 02-18-2004, 06:34 PM.

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            • #7
              what the hell it wont let me post my comments
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              • #8
                I dont know either of you and i'm breaking this down heres what i thought
                Multies: Don
                Punches: Don
                Personals: Locus
                Flow: Don
                Vocabulary: Locus
                Enjoyable: tie
                Vote: DonThaMakaveli
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                • #9
                  1-1 close battle...nice shit don keep votin people and thanks to everyones opinion

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                  • #10
                    the point of battelin ain't bein cocky don. The point of battelin is to see who is a better rhymer, lol. it was close but ya know, the first five bars of your spit didn't even rhyme locus, sorry man, you were both good.. thadon you're spit didn't flow too good, i was readin it, trying to get it flowing, it just wasn't there, fuck it i ain't gonna vote, that's just what i thought. Oh and i think you meant " throw ya teeth on tha curb don, unless that's how ya wanted it..i dunno.
                    Last edited by InsaKure; 02-18-2004, 08:57 PM.
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                    • #11
                      thats why i gave the beat i did....if you sy it or think it right it rhymes its meant to be quick
                      id like to introduce the world to a wanna be pac/
                      not the first but this one like the rest is gonna get knocked(rhymes with pac) /
                      ask anyone i know, ask simmo /
                      he'll tell you it would be best to research before you get fucked like its simple (rymes with simmo) /

                      get it?

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                      • #12
                        any other votes...?

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                        • #13
                          yo locus, ya shit was good... and don yours wasnt tha tbad either, but locus had better punches..
                          vote=locus
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                          • #14
                            *no comment*
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                            • #15
                              2-1, me

                              thanks a lot to all who voted me i apreciate it

                              :^D

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