Ripper21 VS Speechless

[SpeechLess]

Ok:
5 votes MAX
3 votes = KO
No dickryde, hate or beef votes

Speechless's spit:
My skills are able to penetrate//
Not able to beat the sum of the men-you-rape//
But i still am ill so dont complicate//
watch ur back or ima make u suffocate//
Ripper says he can beat-me ea-sy//
This nikuz aint nothin but a Grea-sy//
fat fuckin homo not yet a specie//
battlin' me soon ull sease to exist//
strait out fucked up with a million twists//
thats me, haha unbeatable, MESSED up//
Admit it u cant beat me, FESS up//
This nikkuh dont want nothin but to BE-LIKE-ME//
Just beatin a newb ta him would be a FAN-TASY//
You cant BEAT-ME, CANT-YOU-SEE?//
I can only stand ya to a tolerable-DEGREE//
Cuz im know WORLD-WIDE,cant beat me if u TRIED//
i PRO-VIDE the skills and u SUB-SIDE//
i cant DE-CIDE which way u SHOULD-DIE//
Battlin' me ur playin permanent Hide-n-go-SEEK//
take ya to the highest PEAK, Kill u cuz man-u-REAK//
i Cant belive ripper actually wanted to TRY-THIS//
I'll APPLY-THIS, hes got a desease called NOSKILL-IDOZE//
Ripper knows everything about What-gay-PRIDE-IS//
i SUPPLY More death than a COFFIN-TRUCK//
DENY my skills and u just DIED, FUCK//
say ur Good-BYE Newb, Best of LUCK//

Rippers spit:
Put the blam to your grimey face - rounds scar//
ur gay sig like a clown car - a buncha jokes in a tiny space//
speech's an outkast,no friends,no family i knew this kid was a loner//
when that chip on his shoulder came with fuckin dip and a soda//
speech's lost its flare cause outta the old strikes all thats there//
and u'd be the last man standing,if it was musical chairs//
speech gettin hacked down,bitch'll be missin thats jus plain fact now//
no point in a milk carton cause u'd jus blend in with the background//
so dissy what now? how ya gone retaliate to the bullies, duck bouts?//
cause the last time oppourtunity knocked....u the fuck out//

[SpeechLess]

Uppin'

[SpeechLess]

Stiiiiiil uppin'!

[SpeechLess]

Uppin wtf people reply!!

[Heaven Cent]

yo wheres ripper's verse?

[SpeechLess]

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[SpeechLess]

yo wheres ripper's verse?

its right under my verse....DUH! so u gonna vote or what?????

[InK]

vote for speechless, more multies better rhymes and harder hits. Overall he killed it. Sorry ripper, yo ass got served.

[SpeechLess]

Thanks Insakura much luv...1-0 me still uppin!!

[Fitz]

Ummm.....ok..........here we go....

Speechless- good use of vocab.....but some of the stuff dawg didnt make sense....the complicate and suffocate thing didnt really make sense, but whatever, i know what u were tryin to do but u coulda used it better....in any case u had some good punches like the noskillsitis diss....that was good...... all in all good multis but i think u should actually think of what u say before u say it cuz it just didnt make sense but in any case i knew what u were doin......i do it too lol.

Ripper- I saw the shit in the other forum, again, the thing about musical chairs was said, its ok tho, no big deal. All in all it was a good verse, this one was very tough to decide.......

So.....finally i look back......look at the rhymes, multis, punchlines and the over all flow of the whole thing, also creativity.......i think ya both need to work alot on ur stuff cuz i think ya both look towards the rhyme then makin sense.....sorry im just tryin to help ya out.,....anyways the vote.....

Vote- Speechless

[Fitz]

not that u dont make sense, but i think u stress the rhyme more then makin sense in ur rhyme, idk if that makes sense but thats my thing, but anyways, close battle but Speechless won it

[SpeechLess]

Lol i know whatcha mean i do it all the time anyways thanx 2-0

[InK]

now look at my fuckin collabs in the freestyle forum !! *****z

[idegadmaster]

Yeah. Ripper had a nice verse. There were sum good rhymes. It seemed to make some good sense but Speech seemed to have more rhymes. It kinda got me confused on where he was trying to get the words emphasized. But I guess my vote will go to...Speechless.

[SpeechLess]

Thx^ 3-0 i win, yeah it wasnt one of my best spits but ya know it was enough thx guys good battle ripper u got KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!..thx again