Idegad vs. Gray Ghost

[idegadmaster]

You wanted another battle with me alright then here it is
5 vote max/3 votes KO/40 bar max
I'll go first

Alright let me set it off with words mixed in a clusster/
gray ghosts the name right well my new one's Ghost Buster/
you look pale not gray did my words leave you flustered/
Alright on the real we all know who flows tighter/
The reason he aint respond to Speechless’ battle yet/
Is because he cant afford another ghostwriter/
He keeps saying hes a newbie and hes never rapped before/
That shit is hella funny it makes me laugh even more/
Cuz this dudes actually 48 been rapping since 24/
bars left lets say twenty more you seem to adore/
so stop biting Im sick of your rabies/
you seem to need my semen you crave me you crazy/
Alright GG you bout to flop harder than gigli/
come near me and get your head severed severely /
You can come at me with 10 whole clone armies /
Battle me against all of ‘em and still not one would harm me/
come back at me you get cervical vertebrae cut in a slice/
My flows are outta control/
you’ll be reading the same line twice/
you’ll be reading the same line twice/
you know i have you shook into fear/
We all know this cats a fake rap wannabe queer/
He don’t write rhymes he buys pre-written books on it/
All he does is “insert curse word” and “name here”/
so now you go by gray ghost I agree that optics sounds queer/
But ghosts are really illusions /
its contradiction cuz neither is real or really appear/
you feel what you hear of course you do/
How could you not feel my dick in your ear/
you addicted to beer and drugs and wannabe thug/
you get stomped by my foot like it was some metal s"Lugz"/
Yo I leave you with a bloody carcass /
cuz im the kinda dawg whos bite is twice as strong as his bark is/
An you may try to flip it saying I bite shit/
but im a dawg and I dismantle you to bits/
You couldn’t put words together if they were given away in assembly kits/
You can't assemble rhymes like this its/
a wonder you got away with not losing our first round and beating out Fitz/
your rhyme pattern stays the same it's way to dispicable/
gray ghosts fading fast i beat him now hes invisible/

Your turn Ghost

[SpeechLess]

damn!! that was ill!!!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

[idegadmaster]

Thanx. Now im just waitin on Grays verse.

[idegadmaster]

Damn Ghost. I know you were looking at this. It said you were. Any 1 got feedbak on this. What did n e 1 else think of it?

[Gray Ghost]

My lyrics twisted''' yur mind,once an' you still spiting''''back/
watch me refract detach this bitch so i'll put his lips on his spine an' watch him sniff his ass CRACK/ (hahaha)
an' break yur soul, with or without a pole take this mole shuv'e him back in his hole/ then watch this bitch try to achieve his goal/
im a cannibal kidd lucky I dont belt ya, an im about to murk yu cos noWuN's feltcha/
i'll do like hannibal did, slice yur skull and fill it so yur fitted with ALKA SELTZER!/(ahahah)
wonderin' why yu taking shots? time flies when yu rapin' clocks/
so please, bring the right change this kinda beatin' Took'' ITS..TOLL/
he talking about wat i do and how i roll u dont know me,you bound to chocke/
have u runnin' on street beats i'll leave yu socked & shocked/
mocked and dropped not even goin to mention the glock/
you a "bubble gum" gangsta cus im leavin yu "popped"//
it's like my "salivas stone" cuz everytime i spit at yu, like yu were "rocked"//
he told me to go to my old raping style,know here it goes up the spine/
yu're the huggest clown on shyt dissen me when i fuk yu up on site's/
Im Rippin This Faggot Up and Feedin' Him To The Gaurds/
The Only Time This Faggot can Ace A Battle Is When Hes PLaying Cards!/
just gettin bored thought i might rip yu again but yu'l just run away anyway so no point in me postin' dope rhymes! yur not upto this spit
beaten you is to easy, like babies shakin RATTLES to bits/
im not gonna waste time on sumone who cant straight batlle this/
but u get me high wit ya raps similar to laughin gas/
yo im bein harsh gauge enuff im stoppin dat/
if i go further theres no possible way ur toppin that/
an' leave yu on the spot dyin' of stage cuz this kid will bust yu lyrically or on the mic/
but dont give your hopes up like timmy from south park tryin to dance/
i wrote this within a couple minutes, cuz i didnt see you post no personals in it/
im grinin this, cuz the faggot thinks he stands a chance/
at first glance, my battle stance is poundin this homo/
thats why gray ghost has to stay with the same style,(phase denial)''''bitch....
Waching him reply to his own disses,you still getting strip''wrip''the fuck..^up
beating you in 'slow mo', like it was 'rewind'/see it
whyle he tryin to divide negative haters, they're obviously blind/
you in your prime, this is me in first gear/(rruummm)
so gangsta, rockin' hoodies in hell, make yu swallow yur own limbs an' tell kids yur FULL OF YURSELF/(ohh)

[Gray Ghost]

theres my verse...........iam keeping...my old style
beter......peace..easy

[idegadmaster]

Keepin it up here. Sum 1 vote.

[Gray Ghost]

who wants to batlle me next???step up...just call me out or something
before i call out on some one...could yal vote on the batlle..,.peace easy...
if yal want to batlle me make it infinite lines...peace...easy

[SpeechLess]

yo can one of u 2 vote on this battle please!!
http://www.d12world.com/board/showth...89#post1202389
^theres link im a vote on this in jus a second thanx guys!

[SpeechLess]

Ok,
Idegad = Sick rhymes nice flow, good structure some good personals, middle was a bit weak but overall good.
Gray ghost = urs was sick, rhymes, flow personals structure, but that last 2 paragraphs at the end were fuckin shit dude...in the beginging it was ill then it got fuckin borin....

Overall Opinion:
Gray if u shit didnt get borin and shitty (no beef, constructive critism) around the end my vote would go to u, Idegad u kept ur flow, tight rhymes overall i liked better

Vote = idegadmaster

[idegadmaster]

Thanx. More votes needed. 1-0 Me.

[Gray Ghost]

alright tanks iam try to to put my verses more together tanx..i wasnt feeling it
either tanx for the advice...iam trying to batlle more so i could feel my style
better.......peace....easy

[8ch]

aiiight ..... first .... both is tight ,,,

imma start with Gray ghost ,,

Gray = as speechless said ... urs is fuckin siiiick .... rhymes ... structure ... everythin' ... but it gets a lil borin while u're goin through it ....

Idegad= man ... urs is the real shit ... tiiight ... Rhymes .. structure ... personals ... everythin ... nice flow ....

so my vote is = Idegad ...

peace out ...

[Gray Ghost]

alright lets batlle....dawg i gotta stop fucking around and put my shit together better
through my verses...spit at me dawg.....peace......easy

[Fitz]

OK......

Ide- um, your shit was good but i thought ya coulda done better. the first few bars were nasty, but i thought after that u started losin it, but ended pretty good. Overall, i thought it was an OK verse where it fell off at some points but still kept a good flow with ok punches (in the middle). But beginning and end, you had some good shit.

GG- well, your shit was ok, but i really didnt like ur punches, they werent really that creative, the only one that i really liked was that last line about bein full of yourself, again, like Ide, i thought alot of it was very boring. the end was the best part, and thats the only part i really liked. (i got the saliva stones part but really didnt feel it). Anyways....

So, i thought both verses were not your greatest (obviously with facing both of ya). Ide def had more potential of just rippin it better while GG didnt have a great verse in my eyes at all, so....imma have to go with Ide on this one

Vote- Ide