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  • Soldier Vs. Krooked

    Drop the rules
    The SHADOW Warrior

  • #2
    2 rounds no line shit but dont make the verse long ass fuckin hell.......

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    • #3
      If you the soldier, im the general, salute your superior
      I got my troops in bulletproof coups to bruise your exterior

      Cock the the tech and put 2 thru your interior
      Your flows, personals, and punches is inferior

      I sell big rocks, u got "little rocks" like Arkansas
      I pop D.E's, u gotta little glock in your drawer

      Stop it you whore, I'm here cause hell's risen
      I got the Passion of Christ in me like Mel Gibson

      And i'll put you thru that same torture
      Stick a grenade in your ass, blast you with a mortar

      (Singin)Your left, your left, your left, right, left
      Gotta tech to leave a mess under your vest

      If i pulled my dick out u probably grab it ya faggot
      Pull my gat, contract it, bullets get stuck to u like a magnet

      I ain't cheech, but i get high like he do
      You wanna be your favorite rapper? you gon die like him 2

      Mothafucka
      The SHADOW Warrior

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      • #4
        Nice verse, i liked the way you ended it, good flow and punches, some good multies in there too..
        EII
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        • #5
          You wanna see a Crazy as war/
          krook to war..more like a rookie to this/
          even if this wanna be general was born holding a ruler he couldnt dispatch his battle lines
          To hit an objective/

          Yo….I'ma deal this deck givin you all the oposite of soldier/
          Man you must really think u the general, this is my game bitch your the victim and I’m a soldier rollin solo u need troops//u just stepped to war not a battle,let the the pressure be pressin, and test the obsessive, problem adressing, best, rhyme requested, guessing that you had a chance, just like the rest...

          like this was court ill put you on trial, innocent in til proven guilty, sorry that aint my style, so here it comes be ready for a pile- driver plung your face to the ground like a sky diver, no chute shoot you gona splatter , to unrecognizable matter, like all your bones jus went shatter, my rhymes be phatter, and elevated more like a ladder, but dawg you rhymes just keep getting sadder, like P.O.Wß---(Prisoners,Of,War)

          Him the general more than soldier?everyone knows, the only thing youve blown away is a dick,
          listen up closely cuz my metaphors will stick...

          couldnt be omniscient, cuz you wouldnt be dissin, me you ass kissin, sissy, shouldve listened, cuz you wouldnt be in this position, to fight the war of attrition, but if you do your additon, youd see that im winning...

          word expander, spandex wearing, dick hander, watering his plants and oleanders...

          no need to determine, the outcome of this wannabe Tom Hanks, sooner or later, hell be servin, me at the local McDonalds or sittin on the curb next to a guy in a turban...

          if you were a good in trainin camp, people would pay attention, but instead im here to sentence, you to death, by means of lyrical suspension...

          that means youll suffer by the word scease fire, watchin you dangling, mangled and tangled,u sang your song, but now its time to step down to me, you purple triangle...(symbol for gays)


          You Tried To Rap Out Loud But Echo's Of Your STUTTER-LINGERS/(HE SANG
          LEFT -LEFT-LEFT-RIGHT-LEFT)ha ha……
          Drop Flo's On Accident Cause They Slip Through BUTTER-FINGERS/

          next thing you know the DJ's mixing an matching while fixing an scratching/
          this boy got nothing the, KROOK will cause sitching an gashing/

          Finisher……..

          Yo krook. Im a Pro man/
          ***** u aint nothin but slow/

          Oh wait u are somethin, a lil old ho/
          Fuckin gay guys for a livin as a transex Gigalo/

          Whens ur Birthday I got to give u this pillow/
          For all the time spent on ur back, gettin fuck by horses dogs and giant armadillos/

          Your always hittin on ugly ass chicks/
          Who probably hidding big ass guns/(get it)....BITCH....ha ha ha.............

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          • #6
            lol, nice verse from both, but i don't think i can vote o any of ya.. it would be a crew vote probably.. haha, but let's get the votes up for this shit.
            EII
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            • #7
              that's if ya still want to join soldier^^
              EII
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              • #8
                ^^crew votes are allowd.

                krooked:
                nice verse man, i was really feelin that Mel Gibson line...

                Soldier:
                some of the punches were nice..but i couldnt really understand that shyt, cus you put it into a weird format...

                but overall i enjoyed krooked's more.
                final vote-Krooked Kon
                Bay Area Love
                Go 49ers
                Raiders suck

                N1ggaz bustin shots like they lost they minds
                Like 25 - Life never crossed they miiiinds
                -2pac

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                • #9
                  isnt a crew vote kind of dick riding......fuck be straight yal..........

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                  • #10
                    ....no....
                    a crew vote is steriotypically a d/r..
                    they think that if you are in the same crew, youll automatically vote for them.
                    but not me, im not the d/ring type..
                    im the honest type, the type that will vote for you if you had a better verse.
                    Bay Area Love
                    Go 49ers
                    Raiders suck

                    N1ggaz bustin shots like they lost they minds
                    Like 25 - Life never crossed they miiiinds
                    -2pac

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                    • #11
                      ok......u tink that so its your opinion even if mine was beter you wouldf pick the other!!!!

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                      • #12
                        no man...i just said it in my other post dammit.
                        if you had a better verse, id vote for you
                        but you didnt man..krooked's was better
                        his was easier to read, and had better punches man...
                        Bay Area Love
                        Go 49ers
                        Raiders suck

                        N1ggaz bustin shots like they lost they minds
                        Like 25 - Life never crossed they miiiinds
                        -2pac

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                        • #13
                          !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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                          • #14
                            ^^^
                            the fuck is that supposed to mean
                            Bay Area Love
                            Go 49ers
                            Raiders suck

                            N1ggaz bustin shots like they lost they minds
                            Like 25 - Life never crossed they miiiinds
                            -2pac

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                            • #15
                              i'm not votin in this shit, i don't want the drama.. haha.
                              EII
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