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  • YO.yo.Check..it......freestyle....

    24 hour rotation, mah verbs stop them in formation-
    Speak in 40 languages that gets deciphered in lyric translation-

    Flip mah style that makes the earth turn to another axis-
    Freeze over the United States and kill people by tha masses-

    Bring any faction, id explode every member to minute particals-
    Come organized, and Id recite a battle rap in articles-

    Type each letter with mah fingertips that subtract ur chances to live-
    Each bar scorches ur PC and gives em internal viruses-

    Elevate mah style to tha stratusphere and strike fear on emcees careers-
    Take out ur glands behind ur optics so it hurts too hard to tear-

    Shock waves I display that eliminates the stars far away-
    Implode tha moon in 30 fragments and watch the light start to fade-

    Thats the power I posses, spit lyric slugs in faggots chest-
    Rip up tha vest touch tha heart and catch a cardiac arrest-

    Flatline a pulse for fun, just to hear the monotonous sound it makes-

    Displace ur lyrics in 6 places just to cause complications-
    Mah verbs cut u like lyrical knife incenerations-

    Lacerations shred ur dignity and leave u dead to the infinity-
    Id still reign the fuckin champ no matter what website ur sendin me-

    Just a Quick verse to make sure I still have it in me lol.

    *Soldier*

  • #2
    Lolz not bad that wuz pretty good! good job
    overall:7/10
    _____=+| 30-4, 25KO |+=_____

    *23 Straight KO Wins* Still Waiten for someone to match that

    * ReTiReD *

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    • #3
      tanx for feed backs

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      • #4
        nice shit, wasnt like on another level or anything, but just a good spit. somehow the one line that didnt rhyme with anything worked for me, switched it up and somehow sounded nice.
        ,left to write,

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        • #5
          yo fitz is this one...

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          • #6
            i like the shit, good lyricism, good flow, 8/10, good shit dawg, yo vote on my battle with Real Fake
            The Big 4
            http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
            http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
            http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
            http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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            • #7
              aight tanx for feedback

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