vote my freestyle plz

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vote my freestyle i need 3 votes to TKO and i need 5 votes to win plz vote here is my free style
__________________________________________________ ___________yo yo shadyman is in da huse and i got a few rhyms

here are my rhyms of my head
u better be scared cause ill fuckin shoot u dead/
you can go play with your moms cunt
while u r smokin a blunt/
u r gettin beat by a shady
u r a motherfuckin lady/
go tell your mom u wear thongs
mise well tell her about the bongs/
your teach said that u were dumb as hell
she said u cant even jiggle your bell/
that is kinda sad
and your rap is goin to be bad/


coming from shadyman i need 3 votes to TKO and 5 votes to win plz vote

[InK]

that was pretty shit

[triggs-01]

insakure i wanna battle ya man, but just not rite now lol...

[InK]

let's battle now man, for real

[englishman]

That Was Shit....No Offense....But It Was Shit

[BulletProof]

that blowed ass first off shadyman.123 learn 2 rap n then come back n ill vote for ya if ya any good

[da Leprechaun]

um elevate

[--Tr|pHÃ¥T--]

that verse had no sense in it... 1.u dont shoot nobody dead(maybe wit ur play station)2.that dont look like a freestyle and 3.get a life

[d12_man]

man i agree wit shadyman 101 dat did blow ass u aint gonna get better if u try as hard az u blow ur dad!

[InK]

the sad thing is tho he was probably sitting there for half an hour tryin to think of this, then he gets his own aliases to come and tell him he is shit, just to look cool or some shit

[Warrant]

you need to elevate

[d12_man]

y do u even try

[d12_man]

y do u even try

[englishman]

^^lol

Yeah Dude U Really Need To Elevate Alot To Be Half Decent

[dropdimes18]

man all u need 2 do is practice, when i first got here i was pretty shitty (But not as much as u) now i think im getting better just ask people. all need to do is carry a lil notepad with ya and practice every chance u get, and get a better vocab. and be mo creative thats just my opinion