Shady-Trice vs Triphat

[--Tr|pHÃ¥T--]

10-15 lines 1st to 5 wins 3-0 ko

u goin 1st ?
peace

[sHaDy_TrIcE]

ya i'll go first..i'll be done right away

[sHaDy_TrIcE]

check it
its great to see this board's open to the mentally challenged eh yo
couldnt find the link i thought you'd put it as "shady trice vs. radio"
my bad okay so.. i geuss i have to get this started
but no sympathy votes.. people feel bad for the retarded
you seem like one of those kids who at school was bullied and taunted
rebelled back like a fool with ur dads gun and shot it
and at the end of the trauma there was 1 kid left sleighed
people confused if it was suicide..but the bullet rickoshet
and there he lays ..on a desk ..bent over covered in blood
just like the night before..but back then you were covered in cum
so good luck on your response..but im sure it'll be whack
like the reason u call urself tri- saying u 3 times phat?
the only tri-phat on you is from your chin rolls man

alright ur turn

[--Tr|pHÃ¥T--]

Ur so called "punches" are cheaper than school lunches
This guy gonna destinguish when my lyrical attack launches
Two lines spitten and ur ripped apart, mutually-destructed
Don't think ur "hot" cos son u need to be lyrically-instructed
U gonna surrender and start promoting-peace-physical-irenic
Whatever you think of, u wont be stopping-this-lyrical-boronic
Shady-Trice , in the name area you need massive-advice
My lyrical-device just ate ur verse like chinese people eat rice
This guy chats bout blood and cum cos he already had-some
He hits only on men cos he's the exact-opposite of hand-some
Ur lines are full of senescence while mine are new-and-satiety
Now u can commence ur suicidal attempt from the statue-of-liberty

[--Tr|pHÃ¥T--]

yo.. u can start voting now

[GZ2525]

Lyrics = Triphat
Flow = ShadyTrice
Punches = ShadyTrice

Vote = shadytrice


Triphat it seemed all you did was try to throw in a large vocabulary and it messed up the flow some and the punches didn't seem that great because of it.

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ShadyTrice:

its great to see this board's open to the mentally challenged eh yo
couldnt find the link i thought you'd put it as "shady trice vs. radio"


Triphat:

Shady-Trice , in the name area you need massive-advice
My lyrical-device just ate ur verse like chinese people eat rice

[--Tr|pHÃ¥T--]

damn.. looks like some good vocab combined with some word-plays and multies still dont get me some votes.. what else u want me to do? do a simple verse? no thanks

ps. do u even know what flow is? textually speakin ? and bout shady-trice's punches.. i only see the last 2 lines having punches

0-1 uppin for some proper votes

[Fitz]

Flow- Triphat
Lyrics-Triphat
Creativity- shady
Punches- Shady
Multis- Tri
Enjoyable- Shady
Vote- wow.....ummm......imma go with Shady Trice

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Tri

Shady-Trice , in the name area you need massive-advice
My lyrical-device just ate ur verse like chinese people eat rice

Shady

its great to see this board's open to the mentally challenged eh yo
couldnt find the link i thought you'd put it as "shady trice vs. radio"

I thought this battle was alright. Triphat- no ones hatin on ya, i do disagree tho, i thought ur flow was alot better and ur lyrics were def, but ur punches werent that hard at all.. he came right at u and had some pretty funny lines, nothin impressive but entertainin..... Tri...its not that im hatin on ur lyrics, but it did take away from ur punches....it just seemed very forced like u were LOOKING to be impressive...like u put em in there to show ur wide range of vocab.... im not hatin at all, i liked the vocab, the flow, and the multies, but ur punches werent there at all..... there was none that clever..... sorry man but u gotta hit harder then that in battles.... if that was a freestyle or somethin i woulda liked it but otherwise in a battle, he def took this

Vote- Shady

[--Tr|pHÃ¥T--]

aight.. i respect both of ur votes but fuck it.. he only had like.. 2 punches! what did i ever do to y'all to get these kind of votes.....?
peace

[GZ2525]

Trip I thought your your verse, was good. I just pick what I liked better, I dont always take into consideration the verse that is the best rap based on categories.

I just battles are a lot about punches and there wasn't any great ones with your verse

[--Tr|pHÃ¥T--]

fuck it.. u didnt see any great punches.. i dont fuckin care man.. it just a small battle(i aint gonna die if i lose this.. matter of fact.. i dont give a fuck) . i can show u punches but i aint gonna get into detail.. waste of time.. besides it wont change the votes
peace

[Fitz]

dawg, dont get all pissed about it.... i gave u my reasons....yea i get ur disses, but they werent that good, we arent hatin man....like i said, if it was a verse that wasnt a battle i liked it, but in a battle it didnt work.... i like ur lyrics but use em in ways u can diss ur opponent....cuz lemme tell ya.... u have good lyrics but they are weak in the way u use em....sure u can put together good words and shit but its more then that, u gotta make em funny, and clever, urs wasnt.... sure it makes sense, we get the punches but it wasnt like wow thats clever it was more like wow....good lyrics but that diss wasnt good at all...... his was clever in a simple sense..... he had simple lyrics but his punches were clever, ur lyrics were clever but ur punces were simple.....and in a battle, punches are what matters..... sorry to dissapoint ya man..... this is no hate so dont go off on people man, im just givin u advice.... elevate ur creativity....not ur lyrics....but the way u use em.... peace

[--Tr|pHÃ¥T--]

aight.. sorry for the reaction(bad day) i'll throw somw strong punches when i write again

[Fitz]

there ya go, dont worry about it, its all about growin as an MC, u just learn from it and take into consideration, just keep at it

[--Tr|pHÃ¥T--]

aight.. peace
shady trice u got 2-0 and prolly gettin another vote
nice battle
peace