Rak Vs. Emc-x

[Emc-x]

Rules
25 lines max
3votes wins

Heres my Flow.........
encarscerated with a blood clot thats hesitated to keep you breathin//
Some things like your bleeding pussy you shouldnt be deciveing //
You cant come close to achieving this level of destruction//
My raps will fuck you up with just one function//
that you or no one in there right mind could be touchin//
So get to crunchin on the lines that you better be punchin//
Your gonna need a lunch in with some of the greatest//
When your screamin death before dishonor and wonderin y u couldnt phase this//
So take the Nearest exit and rember to not show agianst this crazyness//
You couldnt relate to what I'm sayin if you were raised in this game from seed to sprout//
I was battleing bitches like u when i came screaming out//
A signficant Demon// Choppin Limbs to hellacious bodacious infectous semon//
Just like every other phoney your bout to be locked up in the apparell of a Ressurected Glot that is so precise Itll strike you down like a infinte barrel//
Call you Zero after im done hacking and smacking your bitch ass back to the days of hold//
This aint no clapback were going deeper and cold//
Im just waitin for the lip from someone on here to start poppin//
Thats when Ill pull out the Lyrical mop and get to moppin//
So why is Jay-z retiring??Maybe he knows just like the rest of ya. your ghetto fabulous pass is expiring//
Tell the Light at the end of the Tunnel to Come get ya//
Either way theres a description of a dead man with no mic that will fit ya//
I could split ya with methaphors or fuck you like u were them syallble whores//
So Go do your chores and get back to playing youngster//
This aint no punk show but if it was youd have seen i already punked ya//
Straight skunked ya // lyrically crunked ya//
Rollin on a path to need no remorse//
Fuck ya in reall life battleing agianst me youd lose by an overwhelming force//
Not like an eye for and eye but more like battleing me with an easy try//
And if you cant beat me in this battle then going agianst me freestyling youd straight fry and sigh when you seen the level of intelligance coming out in straight elligance..///


basically the last parts just talking bout how if u cant beat this rap u suck lol
K fuck it there it is....
Vote time after u spit Rak...

Later
Emc-x

[Emc-x]

Shit well fuck the Rules up there 30 lines max sense i spit like 28 or 29......
My bad went a little overboard on the freestyle...
K spit rak Later

[Emc-x]

Shit well fuck the Rules up there 30 lines max sense i spit like 28 or 29......
My bad went a little overboard on the freestyle...
K spit rak Later

[Emc-x]

Spit someday rak........fuck spit a freestyle just spit a ryhme...........

later
emc-x

[rak]

somebody replay to this rap ,if somebody understood 'um/
and if anyone got tishues then go to this guy and put some/
he bitches like hes 14 and still on his mothers bussum/
i could- but i shuldnt, this guys verse is more broken than his soul-so i shouldnt/
or hell get more hyped than a bunch of elementaries if i stook um/

your lyrics are bad-usage of white-sewage mentallity, abusing black music/

you hate nigas from the ghettoes,cause your in a hood like melrose,all mellow,with women watering there medows, whose heart is jellow/
your biggest crises must have been when your causin got a sect owned/
but i dont give a fuck cause you got mony and your fed though/
living in house with red rose[es], and five computers rappingthrough chellow/

so whats this talk about how youll get me destroyed/
what you gonna do? tell everyone your gangsta when you roll me over with your rolls royce?/
you gonna shoot me? your guns prolly dont make noise, cause the only weapons you got are water pistles and toys/

your prolly a nerd getting his head dumped in the toilet/
you only call yourself em c, cause your dad earns a tenth of the mony that royce gets/

so dont call me stupid, when who made the rules?you did, the rules change, the same person who makes the rules cant stick to it/

[Emc-x]

U feel like going a round 2 then vote ?????
I wanna comment on your verse........
and wut better way then a round 2?????
So tell me if your up for it????
Later
Emc-x

[Fitz]

Flow- Emc x
Lyrics- Emc x
Multies- Rak
Punches- very close.....rak had a little better
Enjoyable- Rak
Vote- Rak

Fav lines

Emc x

And if you cant beat me in this battle then going agianst me freestyling youd straight fry and sigh when you seen the level of intelligance coming out in straight elligance..///

Rak

so whats this talk about how youll get me destroyed/
what you gonna do? tell everyone your gangsta when you roll me over with your rolls royce?/

Emc x- i liked ur use of lyrics but i didnt think ur punches were that clever. like i said, flow and lyrics were on but i think ya gotta work on ur punches. keep workin man, overall i liked it but he had more

Rak- you had some good punches, but one thing that annoyed me was the line about hatin "n****s" in the ghetto........that shits so weak. i personally am white and those lines should not be in there. I liked your whole verse cuz it was based on him bein weak and rich and shit, but dont put anythin racist like that in there.... prob didnt mean to do that, but i didnt like that single line, i think u coulda done it without it. anyways, i didnt take offense but i think u should keep that in mind. BUT i did like ur verse, thought it was pretty funny, def work on the lyrics and flow though, very choppy and simple lyrics......

Good job both of u, keep workin, peace

[Ill motherfucke]

Flow- Emc x
Lyrics- Emc x
Multies- Rak
Punches- very close.....rak had a little better
Enjoyable- Rak
Vote- Rak

Fav lines

Emc x

And if you cant beat me in this battle then going agianst me freestyling youd straight fry and sigh when you seen the level of intelligance coming out in straight elligance..///

Rak

so whats this talk about how youll get me destroyed/
what you gonna do? tell everyone your gangsta when you roll me over with your rolls royce?/

Emc x- i liked ur use of lyrics but i didnt think ur punches were that clever. like i said, flow and lyrics were on but i think ya gotta work on ur punches. keep workin man, overall i liked it but he had more

Rak- you had some good punches, but one thing that annoyed me was the line about hatin "n****s" in the ghetto........that shits so weak. i personally am white and those lines should not be in there. I liked your whole verse cuz it was based on him bein weak and rich and shit, but dont put anythin racist like that in there.... prob didnt mean to do that, but i didnt like that single line, i think u coulda done it without it. anyways, i didnt take offense but i think u should keep that in mind. BUT i did like ur verse, thought it was pretty funny, def work on the lyrics and flow though, very choppy and simple lyrics......

Good job both of u, keep workin, peace

Fitz got a rack

[GZ2525]

Flow - Rak
Lyrics - Emc x
Multies - Rak
Punches - Rak

Vote- Rak

[rak]

i guess thats 3-0....k.o.

[InK]

ill has a pussy. ill is a pussy.. didn't even come to my house, faggot.

[rak]

Flow- Emc x
Lyrics- Emc x
Multies- Rak
Punches- very close.....rak had a little better
Enjoyable- Rak
Vote- Rak

Fav lines

Emc x

And if you cant beat me in this battle then going agianst me freestyling youd straight fry and sigh when you seen the level of intelligance coming out in straight elligance..///

Rak

so whats this talk about how youll get me destroyed/
what you gonna do? tell everyone your gangsta when you roll me over with your rolls royce?/

Emc x- i liked ur use of lyrics but i didnt think ur punches were that clever. like i said, flow and lyrics were on but i think ya gotta work on ur punches. keep workin man, overall i liked it but he had more

Rak- you had some good punches, but one thing that annoyed me was the line about hatin "n****s" in the ghetto........that shits so weak. i personally am white and those lines should not be in there. I liked your whole verse cuz it was based on him bein weak and rich and shit, but dont put anythin racist like that in there.... prob didnt mean to do that, but i didnt like that single line, i think u coulda done it without it. anyways, i didnt take offense but i think u should keep that in mind. BUT i did like ur verse, thought it was pretty funny, def work on the lyrics and flow though, very choppy and simple lyrics......

Good job both of u, keep workin, peace

thanks for helping me keep that in mind-music should make us come together not separate us-and white people on this site have done a good job in never bieng offensive to blacks, so thanks.....could you tell me were my weak points are so i could work on um?

[InK]

man.. fitz is a white bitch with a small dick.. lol. haha

[Emc-x]

ya you went below the belt but fuck it nice battle i guess ya i know my punches are kinda weak lately....My flow and lyrics is what i work on though cuz when its a freestyle face to face or somebody really upset me then i can usally make good punches.....But yes good battle and dont be dissen blacks in the ghetto man...I happen to like people that keep it reall with the struggle....cuz those are the ones that actually might have the genius to think up a struggle to relate the rest of the world to....plus i got black cuzins even though im white but na make sure u never let that shit slip agian rak cuz that was fucked.....but later

later
Emc-x

[Fitz]

lol i hate u insakure... lol