peep's leave feed back...

[Soldier_]

i'm armed wit burners to urn the ashes of fakes/
cats don't wanna clash wit da great---
make my presence known like stink breath slapped in your face/
can you relate--
hell yeah--
you know the feelin uh dat/
you think you was rewindin films--
the way that shit be reelin you back/
did i say you'll get sealed wit a gat--
cuz i'm awefully the truth/
offin the youth--
weed in the sock--and a hawk in my boot/
honestly--it aint offen i shoot--
yet it seem as Cann throwin Shirts--the way i'm Tossin any Crew(crew T's)/
your partner withdrew--
like drug addicts wit uh impulse to sprint/
my prints on your chick--
the bitch got a impulse for dick/
left kids on had lips--
like pedifiles in oral sex/
that's not moral yet--
i score the best--
when i quarrel in sex/
yes--that means C beat up the pussy/
and in text--
that mean the vet C beat up a rookie/
my team in your cookie--
my *****s get into that ass/
like cars wit no air bags--
dude!!!!!!---you into that dash/
send off the cash--
or it's gone be some--poppin of the bullet/
Soldier--
who gonna be knockin off your mullet/

[Soldier_]

Fitz iam almost done with my verse for the adio

[--Tr|pHåT--]

tight lines..
yo give us a sneak preview of ur audio verse

[chucky]

hey yo this is essential,i got alot of petential,u may think im mental,but my lp is for rental,like 50 cent i need a dental//
also so have 21 questions,i need some more lessons,on my freestyle sessions,to give good impressions//
come on girl lets dance,ill give u some entrance,lets kiss like were from france,give me more than just one chance//
give a chance to prove my trust,if not ill blow like dust,give me a time limit if u must,it aint all about ya bust//
all i could do was flounder,since the day i found ya//
now u wont leave me alone,i have another life outside of home,i have the chronic zone,but u dont like it and u change ya tone//
now im not aloud to be expressed,she didnt like the way i dressed,shes being such a pest,girl give it a rest,im doing my best//
she wants the most stylish ever shoes,and wants to join the rocafella crew,she wants a threesom so i have to fuck a fella too//
i need to make a scandal,cos this is too much to handle,gotta strangle her like a bandle//
no more need to pretend,cos here comes the end,and this girls is still stearing me aruond the bend//

[Soldier_]

aight tanx for the feed back