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  • Locus Vs. Chomp On This Vs. Skillz01

    3 way battle, vote on the best verse, favorite lines and a breakdown on why you voted like that, lets get it crackin!

  • #2
    i got this

    OK Locus, listen up "FOCUS", you wanted a battle/
    "Me" you couldn't handle, even if you had a leash on me/
    you'd never get a grip on me, you'd mess up "SlIp"/

    i'm a cowboy getting "Spured up", you's a rapper "Word up"/
    the word's yer Scurred, to face this native race/
    I start to Snarrle and Pase/

    you though you's was dop, you though you was mad/
    you's nothing but bad, i'm glad you called me out/
    dispite how much you run your mouth, cut me up or shut me up /

    Chomp think's he's gunna win this comp/
    he sits in his room gets all pumped/
    all worked up for his fairy tale song/

    Schools out Son,lunch time's over/
    you sound like Bill Mcglocklins son/
    did you just hit puburity, pimples poppin, balls droppin/

    This Mc's truely thinks he can hurt me/
    take make write some mistakes before you battle me/
    you only a rookie see, i'm one two but i've had experience you see/

    Both you boys,

    You both should join a crew, eighter of you knew, what to do when i start to write/
    maybe if you joined rhymes, gave eachother some tips, you come close to this spit/
    if had a dollar to share with you's, maybe you could bye some store bought shit/

    Since i'm done with, i hope to wish you both good luck with this/
    Impress me First

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    • #3
      ight, im ready to spit some classic-crap//
      like ESHAM did with acid-rap//
      my verse is ill like silent hill//
      i mean i kill fo a violent thrill//
      my skills divided by 12 equal both you-two//
      spittin SKILLZ like Gang Starr and im the Guru//
      quit cryin baby, waa waa, boo-hoo//
      im gonna slit ya in a MICHAEL-MYERS-MASK//
      stabbed my blade but missed and got ya CYCLE-TIRES-SLASHED//
      dont you know 'you cant fuck wit' a Mastamind?'//
      I've destroyed you before, but now That's-behind//
      if my visions are correct, SKILLZ will be Cast-behind//
      if this was on tape you couldnt decide your Last-rewind//
      hey LOCUS, it's not my fault your rhymes are weak-and-wack//
      if you kept your head in FOCUS you wouldnt be speakin'-back//
      your rhymes sound like you be sneakin'-crack//
      you just set yourself up in your own freakin'-trap//
      and dont you dare sleep-on-that//
      1-1
      Illest battle rapper on the Planet!

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      • #4
        man that shit was bumpin
        Impress me First

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        • #5
          ego my lego
          Last edited by Locus; 12-26-2007, 05:14 PM.

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          • #6
            lets vote,follow the rules for voting in the first post

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            • #7
              fuck votes bitch this shit continues/
              i need to order lunch, ****** give me this menu/
              i'm 17 and fucking your shit up quite quickly/
              i posted one an hour ago, now i'm here to finish you/
              you speaking like you saw some shit/
              your script is quite flawless, this guys like obie/
              his bitchs pussys moldy/
              come on bitch you act like you dangerious/
              you should be wearing an apron CATERING US
              bitch back down don't make a fuss
              Impress me First

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              • #8
                lllololol
                Last edited by Locus; 12-26-2007, 05:15 PM.

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                • #9
                  well it's all good man where u from man? ur pretty good
                  Impress me First

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                  • #10
                    im from connecticut...and thanks i apreciate it

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                    • #11
                      Nice, anyways I wanna see some votes/feedback please.
                      1-1
                      Illest battle rapper on the Planet!

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                      • #12
                        C'mon, votes/feedback please.
                        1-1
                        Illest battle rapper on the Planet!

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                        • #13
                          uppin, come on guys a 3 way battle and no one gonna vote?

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                          • #14
                            i think this is how ya want it.....

                            Flow- Chomp
                            Multies- Chomp
                            Lyrics- Chomp and locus
                            Punches- Locus
                            Enjoyable- Locus
                            Vote- Locus

                            Fav Lines-

                            Locus

                            laughin my ass off talkin bout i dont rhyme and in 4 lines down you do it like 10 times/

                            you sure its not chimp on this? seems to me you got ape like characteristics flingin shit, im talkin bout your lyrics

                            Chomp On This

                            im gonna slit ya in a MICHAEL-MYERS-MASK//
                            stabbed my blade but missed and got ya CYCLE-TIRES-SLASHED//


                            Skillz

                            if had a dollar to share with you's, maybe you could bye some store bought shit/


                            Chomp- i liked ur multies and lyrics, but ur punches were kinda weak man, def work on that, good verse tho close call

                            Locus- You just barely one this, needa up the lyrics a bit more and ur multies, u did have some good lyrics here and there which matched Chomp, good punches tho, got me laughin

                            Skillz- u def gotta elevate man, work on better rhyme structures and expand ur vocab. Punches were weak, try to get more creative with it, and make it flow better. Its alright tho, keep workin man itll get there....
                            The Big 4
                            http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
                            http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
                            http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
                            http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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                            • #15
                              Flow- Chomp
                              Multies- Chomp
                              Lyrics- Chomp and locus
                              Punches- Locus
                              Enjoyablity- Locus
                              Personals- Chomp
                              Vote- Chomp
                              Last edited by -ZeRo-; 03-31-2004, 05:35 PM.
                              :Yur Worst Enemy:


                              -ZeRo-





                              Seeing is Believing..No one believes me cuz No One Can See Me

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