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  • Swifty_McVay Vs. Point Blank1

    Rules: 12-18 lines
    First to 5 votes win
    3-0 is a K.O

    You go first Point Blank1
    F-R-E-E



    Kill-8 Ko's-7 Loss-7

  • #2
    Somebody call the Doctor! Cuz Im killin these Rhymes/
    you gon be my victim, #number one million and nine/
    I always thinkin about crime, thats why Im sayin this shit/
    And i don't care what u say, u can suck my dick bitch/
    You say you Swifty? Naw this n*gga is fake/
    Im a tear limb to limb then toss you in the lake/
    Im a make you perinoid to think ya life is at stake/
    this is a real assasin, you ain't talkin too n*gga that gets paid/
    you've been afraid/
    That's why you let me go first, Like the Real Swifty, I'm a put yo fuckin life in tha Dirt/The only diss you can say to me is: "Point Blank you'se a Jerk"/
    You ain't a gangsta, you probably been raised in the church/
    You just a white boy smokin and always tryin to wear braids, and probably a man figuring out wether to be straight or gay/
    Man, thats it, I ain't got nuthin else to say to this fruit cake/
    BE READY FOR ALL HELL TO BREAK LOOSE!
    Visit My Rap Forum! Its of the chain FIRE FLOWIN

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    • #3
      Boy take dat shit back where u got it, Cause im puttin you on ice
      Winnin against me not gonna be easy, its just a roll of the dice
      i hit the game hard n im comin fast
      so ur gonna have to do betta den that if u wanna last
      cause at the rate u goin, i dont see shit happenin
      just like benzino rappin again
      you suck dick wit da lyrics, I cant see anything that stood out
      just like when I fucked yo bitch, then made dat hoe put out
      punk ass bitch, u on da stage chokin
      ya voice sound like u got cum in yo throat, n u just keep croakin
      I never fear another man, even if he strapped
      cause im comin hard wit my Pimp hand, n yo ass is gettin slapped
      u should bow down to me while u still got the chance
      cuz dis is a 1 way battle, n u cant dance
      so sit down...shut up...and get rdy to be taught
      cause wit da mastermind brain i got, u could learn alot

      Peace out

      yo Someone vote on dis shit
      F-R-E-E



      Kill-8 Ko's-7 Loss-7

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      • #4
        Flow- Point Blank
        Vocab- Swifty
        Creativity- Swifty
        Enjoyment- Both (they both had lines that were good)
        Vote- Swifty

        That was a tuff decision to make cause both verses were a lil off, but Swifty's just appealed to me a lil more.
        Thanx 2 Drifta 4 the av.

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        • #5
          I liked switfy's more, plus the white boy thing just sounded stupid.
          Battle Rec:14-9 KO=7
          Rockin fools verbally.
          AKA Beastman.

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          • #6
            Flow:Swift
            Lyrics:Swift
            Multies:Tie
            Punches:Point
            Enjoyability:Tie
            Vote: SWIFT... Both weren't the best.The ties were due to both lacked ot the same extent.well.....keep it up but better. Sorry!
            We ain't friends tryin' to make amends//
            If you ain't ever stole a gate you can take a fence// -Eminem

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            • #7
              Flow -Swifty
              Lyrics -Swifty
              Multies -Tie
              Punches -Point Blank
              Enjoyability -Tie
              Vote - Swifty
              QUAKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
              LOOK! A CHICKEN!!!(chickensm
              Don't Worry...I Love You (somebulls
              SET FIRE TO APPLES!!! ( Not Green Ones Tho )
              I
              Have A
              Dormi
              Obsession. I
              Need Help

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              • #8
                Wow swifty just KO'ed blank.
                Battle Rec:14-9 KO=7
                Rockin fools verbally.
                AKA Beastman.

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