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    Canadian Psycho

    Takin an insanity test, I might just pass,
    Aint livin in amity yet, but i'ma psychopath,

    I bash and light yo ass as fast as nitro gas,
    My path gets striked so fast, at a speed that light cant pass,

    Any bitch that thinks of crossin me, or makes attempts at stopin me,
    Will no longer have their property, And will suddenly have lost thier spleens

    They're actin cool aint practical, like kanye goin back to skool,
    They'll get pimp smacked till drool, comes out they're skulls,

    And hits the ground, shit i miss the sound,
    Of when Mister Brown, gets lifted down,

    Into the coffin, bitch i'll spit on your coffin,
    Piss on you often

    Enough for you to be a daughter of R Kell, My mother neva yelled,
    My father aitn in jail, I'm just insane cuz until now, i aint come out my shell

    peace, leave feed
    Last edited by Retro Fo; 04-12-2004, 08:27 AM.
    Check My New EP Diversify w. UK Producer Jay Dizla
    Canada + UK Revolutionary Underground Hip Hop
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  • #2
    that was hot, the only thing i can see wrong with your rhyme is some of ur lines were to short but beside that it was real good

    "I bash and light yo ass as fast as nitro gas,
    My path gets striked so fast, at a speed that light cant pass" Crazy
    http://www.youtube.com/v/03fo6CQpiAw
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    BEST IN THE NFC

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    WE BAAAAAAAAALLLLLLIN!

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    • #3
      thanks for the good feed man, uppin
      Check My New EP Diversify w. UK Producer Jay Dizla
      Canada + UK Revolutionary Underground Hip Hop
      Don't Sleep.

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      • #4
        it was alright.. i didn't read it.. but i will, i just sayin it's alright cuz i haven't posted ina while lol, but yeh i'll read it and leave real feedback lata
        EII
        Esteemed Entity

        Illusory|Retro Fo|DuPoint|Check|Fitz|Pawl Derty|InK|Teknique
        Nothin's Equivalent...

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        • #5
          some great lines there Retro
          Originally posted by Rog
          "Let's go play some football, I'll rape you."
          Originally posted by Rog
          One day this girl was being dumb as hell so told her "shut the hell up or we'll rape you."
          Originally posted by KessenGTR
          RB is like an orgasm, but it's everlasting.

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          • #6
            thx nasir

            and Kure, take your time, lol
            Check My New EP Diversify w. UK Producer Jay Dizla
            Canada + UK Revolutionary Underground Hip Hop
            Don't Sleep.

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            • #7
              not bad overall, i liked it. Some parts were weak in my eyes, just my view, like lines 5-6 and 9-10 i wasnt feelin really. But i liked all the other shit, keep it up dawg, good shit man
              The Big 4
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              http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
              http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
              http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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              • #8
                it was good, i liked it.. but the last line did nothin for me.. lol sorry
                EII
                Esteemed Entity

                Illusory|Retro Fo|DuPoint|Check|Fitz|Pawl Derty|InK|Teknique
                Nothin's Equivalent...

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                • #9
                  lol, by the time i got to writing the last line i was just tryna finish it and get it posted up...lol

                  thanks for the feed tho
                  Check My New EP Diversify w. UK Producer Jay Dizla
                  Canada + UK Revolutionary Underground Hip Hop
                  Don't Sleep.

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                  • #10
                    Nice, Likin' The Multies Alot

                    Fav Bar;

                    "I bash and light yo ass as fast as nitro gas,
                    My path gets striked so fast, at a speed that light cant pass"

                    Real Nice Multies There
                    Englishman

                    I . O . M

                    Illest On Mics

                    " Eye Of The Storm, My Tears Fall In The Torrential Downpour//
                    The Flood, Ya Deathwish
                    WRITTEN IN BLOOD " - Jehst

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                    • #11
                      Retro: Sign up on the HHE forums, WIB got our own forum there and its hella more active for text.

                      For this piece: Nice multies, I liked it, I wish it was longer tho, cause i really enjoyed it. Espicially this line:

                      I bash and light yo ass as fast as nitro gas,
                      My path gets striked so fast, at a speed that light cant pass,


                      Keep up the good work.
                      \\And spend time to the maximum//
                      \\But if silence is golden then me making noise Is Platinum//
                      -Tech N9ne, This Ring-
                      ~{Written In Blood}~

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                      • #12
                        nice drop
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                        • #13
                          thanks for the feedback...shit i may as well sign up to HHE, see what all the hype is about
                          Check My New EP Diversify w. UK Producer Jay Dizla
                          Canada + UK Revolutionary Underground Hip Hop
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