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    Whoeva wants some lets go two verses. 3 Votes to Take The Win


    If I could have a dolla,
    for every single balla,
    That my pens bitin like a rotweiler,
    I probably swalla,
    Six E's n' down a bottla watta,
    Take a round of doses from the blotta,
    Cuz you know my shits hotter!
    Candyflippin now im trippin,
    Rippin foo's now dey gimpin,
    Peepin for ho's to be pimpin,
    Hit you back wit a metaphor,
    Like you never heard before,
    Skull fuckin ya mom's like its horrocore,
    What a whore, she on the floor,
    Bust a nut and watch it soar,
    You aint hardcore,
    You ever been arrested before?
    Molested before?
    Seen bare breasts of a whore?
    Hell naw I forgot,
    What you not,
    You just a faggot,
    Post a reply I wanna rag it,
    Hit u upside da head with a wicker basket,
    Or strangle u with cords from a tennis racket,
    Beat u with tha food after the grocer sacks it.
    Remember, a million ways to get yo ass kicked.
    You must be smokin crack bitch!
    Cuz you aint got the wealth,
    To buy cocaine to sniff fo yaself,
    You feelin pain of decaying health,
    Fuck stealth, I'll bomb you myself,
    OKC repeatin, Don't be cheatin,
    You better reply back befo next weekend,
    Or else it'll be final words you speakin.

    Get Back At Me

    ~Peel Junkee~

  • #2
    well

    it was decent but.....................



    once again spittin tha way i do is a sin
    if u wanna battle me ***** jus pick up your fuckin pen
    cus i know for a fact u write your shit for a livin
    U even write on *sunday* where its always *any Given*
    ill leave your brains splattered across tha wall
    then u mite think u need to take a *Tylenol*
    releave tha pain,I deviate tha game
    ill have u watchin my movies like i was *Citizen Cane*
    What do u know about actually spitten, rappin or rhymin
    u couldnt even go double platinum if u were fuckin *Two Timin*
    u must be courageous to let anyone lyrically rape u
    even if u had bill gates money no woman would still date u
    the messages i send will make it seem urgent
    the rhymes u spit need some fuckin laundry detergent
    cus they are dirtier than your moms coochie
    i guess my name is *Wally* cus i made it say *Oochie*
    My flows will attack u Verbally
    make u feel depressed and start drinkin Herbal Tea
    u pull out your weapon a bat or a whip or a set knunckles
    the only base u got to was takin off your own belt buckle
    still singin stupid shit like pop goes tha weasel
    tha stuff i spit is *Fast And Furious* like Vin Diesel
    never go against Prominent or your fate is sealed
    ill leave u like your name:a banana yellow and *Peeled*

    Recognize me.........................
    the ***** known to burn otha *****z in spittin....Prominent.

    HoLLa

    "im like Elvis i got tha blocks rockin and rollin while cops patrollin,money gettin made and folded."
    Oschino of RocaFella

    ''Bet u never even felt tha heat,till i put tha M-1 next to ya waves and melt da grease''
    JadaKiss of Ruff Ryders

    ''The only key that i see to defeat u,would be for me to remove both of these ADIDAS and beat u.''
    Eminem of D-12

    ''Im too hot to handle,too cold to hold,My gunz is like Janet Jackson cus ~They Outta Control~
    Oshcino of RocaFella

    ''Crystal Meth manufactua,stole yo moms Acura,Wrecked it, and sold it back to her''
    Eminem of D-12

    ''crossova spin and dunk like Larry Hughes,all thugs all gunz never Scary dudes''
    Beanie Sigel of RocaFella

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    • #3
      WE dont need two verses..........

      We dont need two verses cus tha first one i posted killed u.EVERYONE VOTE ON ONLY ONE VERSE.
      the ***** known to burn otha *****z in spittin....Prominent.

      HoLLa

      "im like Elvis i got tha blocks rockin and rollin while cops patrollin,money gettin made and folded."
      Oschino of RocaFella

      ''Bet u never even felt tha heat,till i put tha M-1 next to ya waves and melt da grease''
      JadaKiss of Ruff Ryders

      ''The only key that i see to defeat u,would be for me to remove both of these ADIDAS and beat u.''
      Eminem of D-12

      ''Im too hot to handle,too cold to hold,My gunz is like Janet Jackson cus ~They Outta Control~
      Oshcino of RocaFella

      ''Crystal Meth manufactua,stole yo moms Acura,Wrecked it, and sold it back to her''
      Eminem of D-12

      ''crossova spin and dunk like Larry Hughes,all thugs all gunz never Scary dudes''
      Beanie Sigel of RocaFella

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      • #4
        dood this was never finished obviously get your shit straight, i dont mind taking the loss but there needs to be votes against me to make me lose, none of this no responses so I win bullshit or callin peeps on MIB or some bullshit that you call it, hahaha whatever...................pussy

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        • #5
          yo prom got that shit straight up. he came wit good syllable colect, punchlines, and wordplay. he ripps it wit honor

          peel, yours would probably be better as a song, it ddint have much to rip on the other person, and it sounded real slimshadyish. too chopppy wit dr suess rhymes.

          vote = prominent
          im the tecktonic plate ***** that got you shook/ put the mic down amatuer, you couldnt even sing my hook...~anonymous prophet

          philisopically im the knife that is rippin the cut/ the reason that faggets wanna take them dicks out they butts//cutta for ya koke that makes ya mind right/and flows like virgin pussy cuz you know my rhyme's tight....drastik theories

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          • #6
            vote=prominent

            He used lots of know movies and songs and just stuff that people know about to do his dissin. He kept it original and real.
            Guess who's back...

            All tight emcee's Keep Ya Head Up, Play in the Game cuz the Game don't wait

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            • #7
              yo my vote

              yo prominent your verse was tight flowed well and was hittin hard good wordplay, etc.

              peel junkee yo your shit was ryhmein well but the bars were to short so it did not hit as hard it seemed like u did not have much to say.

              my vote is goin to go with prominent no beef just speakin my mind


              vote=prominent
              kw gaskinz aka scoota


              K.I.D.'s (Kriminalz in disguise)
              bobby kuffs aka konvict
              supa nova aka mumbles
              oldskool aka anonymous prohet
              kw gaskinz aka scoota

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              • #8
                Voting...

                No disrespect to peel, but...Prominent killed u lyrically man, better use of vocab, meta's and the flow was much better, Peel your verse was kinda short winded and I think u need to make better use of vocab and do some harder hits, use more metaphors or what not..

                Vote - Prominent

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                • #9
                  ya so i got my ass kicked, props Prominent, peace.

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