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  • (showdown battle) Tha Blunder vs M.I.C

    aight.....no beef...good luck...........drop yours when you can


    I'll hit you with a force unlike anyother///verbal brainwash that'll turn you against your mother///I got an arsenal of weapons full and ready to spit///they all gonna be unloaded for this tournament///M.I.C mark you down as the first casuality///see this is war, im only here for one person, me///I got a vibe runnin through me that yall can't even see///jus a warnin, this verbal blasphemy is bout to be set free///i'll lock you in my dungeon, and swallow the key///kidnap your verse, and hang it from a tree///the words that i spit are like a fix for your brain///flow through your system, leave you temporarily insane///I have a gift to see through fake MC's///and you as transparent as the water in the sea's///your verse's are weak and lack flow///and im the headless horseman from sleepy hallow///im here to steal your thoughts, and remove your head///cut off your oxygen supply, and leave you braindead///i'll sign your suicide letter in my name instead///my arm's look like i got hit by a wasp swarm///these drugs hit me like a wave from the perfect storm///i try to be a nice person,but these evil thoughts keep me cozy and warm///i'll walk in with an ak and pull a coloumbine on your dorm///i'll sit out side ya schools fire exit///pull the alarm,watch em rush out,and go hectick///stray bullet hit you in the spine, make u dislexic///i don't feel for human life, im evil and got a sick mind///throw you in a meat machine, and put you on tha grind///a pile of meaty bones is all they'll find///wonderin what would posess a murder of this kind///this is a verse from a creative killa///drop yours now, and hope its illla

    --Tha Blunder--
    Last edited by nextwhiterapper; 07-17-2001, 07:49 PM.
    Ye Of Little Faith

  • #2
    yo im goin away next wendsday so theres no point in me dropping,soory dawg,tite verse though
    http://www.overgrow.com/edge/gallery/6687/m.i.c.jpg
    Respect to lil ells for hosting my pic

    Originally posted by M.I.C.
    I quit this battle, this is CORRUPT!!!!!

    M.I.C you and everyone on this board is Corrupt!!!!!!
    M.I.C. WAS LOOSING OUR NAME BATTLE WITH 1 DAY TO GO SO HE QUIT. he is no man and i have lost all respect i had for him.

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    • #3
      don't back out

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      • #4
        Heheh...

        MIC, remember that little piece of advice I gave you? See what I mean?

        Ok, I'm gonna mock everyone who falls into that trap. So, to all you "verbal", "verbally", "lyrically", "lyrics" femcees out there...here's to you.

        I'm verbally blasting you with hysterical lyrics.
        Lyrics that'll kill you, turn you to lyrical spirits.
        I'll verbally make a scary face, you'll lyrically fear it.
        I'll take a verbal fattie shit, and you barely come near it.
        Got more lyrical verses than curses from a kid with Tourette's.
        You're verbally slower than a hearse, but I'm a lyrical Corvette.
        My lyrics will bring you down like a summer's night sunset.
        My verbals will rape your mind, casuing lyrical mental stress.

        Get the point?

        If not, let me spell it out. First off, Blunder, I'm not singling you out here. Your verse just brought this all to mind. This is addressed to everyone.

        Keep the words "Lyrical", "Lyrically", "Lyrics", "Verbal", and "Verbally" out of your damn rhymes and they will be much tighter and hit much harder.

        Don't say: "I'll verbally castrate ya."
        Just say: I'll castrate ya."

        Come up with a different adverb to fill in the syllables where "verbally" was. If you're not creative enough to manage that, then you've got no business rapping. Plain and simple.

        Oh, by the way, Blunder...you only used "verbal" twice (as far as I can remember), and overall, your verse was tight. You're definitely a creative one, so try edging those words out next time, eh?



        I'm a stuck, starving artist.
        Vincent Van Going nowhere.
        Sold my silver souls to the devil.
        Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
        Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
        Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
        Into the full view.
        Do you see me as suitable...
        to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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