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  • First rhyme from a rookie on the boards

    yo yo check it:

    I'm bitin' at your ankles like a labrador retreiver
    Striking you body like an epileptic seizure
    Labled a tort-feasor
    Criminal, messages not subliminal
    staright up makin' your funds minimal
    I spend my days supporting my vices
    drinking beers and shooting dices
    I know thats not plural, but I'm urban not rural
    I gotta a limited vocabulary
    that of a half-brained canary
    with his wings clipped, buried in a cemetary
    once you meet me you know I'm scary
    I impose fear
    I'm like a snake you sense my evil odor when I'm near
    If i wanna see shady I'll look in the mirror (pronounced meer)
    I bring fake emcee's to tears
    put knives to queers, pray to god that homos disappear
    I strike from the rear; with a glock in my hand
    Lyrics explosive like illegal contraband
    I'm the man and the mic is my masterplan
    see my competition and ask them how fast they ran

    so what do you guys think?

    rabidlab ain't noone as ill as me.
    I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
    as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

  • #2
    not bad...but ur rhyme scheme is too simple....fill in your lines......and your raps will be good...later
    Rhyme & Reason
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    • #3
      yo kid nice verse,gud rhymes,but like eyerone sed.u need 2 fill in the sentenses.beacuse if u can get more funny bars,harder disses,mets and your verses will come 2geather then your ryhming will improve wit it.
      get experience and post up an open challange BATTLE THREAD coz u can work on ya lines.
      but keep it up dawg
      http://www.overgrow.com/edge/gallery/6687/m.i.c.jpg
      Respect to lil ells for hosting my pic

      Originally posted by M.I.C.
      I quit this battle, this is CORRUPT!!!!!

      M.I.C you and everyone on this board is Corrupt!!!!!!
      M.I.C. WAS LOOSING OUR NAME BATTLE WITH 1 DAY TO GO SO HE QUIT. he is no man and i have lost all respect i had for him.

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      • #4
        Hey Yo rabidlab.. i read your ryhme and it was alright dawg! you should post some more up and see how you go!
        hey yo i also saw your battle with X-tacy that was pretty good to dawg.. i can see how you won! your ryhmes are tight!

        Peace Out G
        Last edited by J-DoGG; 07-24-2001, 06:16 PM.

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        • #5
          Why don't you quit talkin' shit and battle me then just start the fuckin thread and let the poeple of the board decide who sucks. I dare you to challenge me but I know you won't have the balls to try to beat me because you'll just make a fool of yourself you fuckin homo.
          I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
          as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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          • #6
            WHAT THE FUCK!?

            calling me a homo!? what is your problem man? COME ON! i was telling you, you were alright! GGzz man you cant take a compliment can ya!

            WELL FUCK YA THEN! YOU CAN TRY AND HATE ON ME!!
            cause I JUST DONT GIVE A FUCK!

            PUnK ArSe BiTCh!

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            • #7
              U TRIP...........

              Yo dawg y u trippin??? he said yo shit was tight G!! rabidlab J-Dogg said yo rhyme was GOOD!!

              FUCK u's on a trip!!

              WHAT IS YO PROBLEM!!

              PEACE...............
              .: Ruban Bates :.
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              (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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              • #8
                hahaha rabid he wasnt sayin shit bout you man...
                Gratsi & Arrivederci,
                Paul "Encrypted" Rocco
                www.ENCRYPTED-MUSIC.tk
                (Contact me professionally for any types business.)

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                • #9
                  damn?

                  what u gotta blow up cause u owon one battle? They were helpin and compimentin u! what u trippin for dawg?
                  My shit my way, so fuck off!

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                  • #10
                    aww thats cute guys change the thread and make me seem shady that really is helarious. if you were joking then staright but I still challenge any of you punks to a battle just challenge me.
                    I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
                    as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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                    • #11
                      rabidlab...?

                      what is up with you!? just because i said ya rhymes were good and shit... that and you won one little battle.. doesnt mean you can take on everyone on the board!

                      Come'on Dawg!... Be fair.. Dont be tight!

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                      • #12
                        Geh...

                        I can't believe you idiots didn't notice that J-Dogg changed the post. See the "last edited" line at the bottom of his post?



                        I'm a stuck, starving artist.
                        Vincent Van Going nowhere.
                        Sold my silver souls to the devil.
                        Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
                        Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
                        Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
                        Into the full view.
                        Do you see me as suitable...
                        to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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                        • #13
                          Yo Dawg what yo on............

                          Originally posted by Two Thirds
                          I can't believe you idiots didn't notice that J-Dogg changed the post. See the "last edited" line at the bottom of his post?
                          Yo Two Thirds im not tryin to start a beef or hatin on yo but dawg dat doesnt mean he EDITED tha whole thread!!

                          and rabidlab is just tossin up ideas of what he thinks happened!! it doesnt mean it acctually happened!!

                          dats just my opinion!!
                          no beef!!

                          PEACE...........
                          .: Ruban Bates :.
                          --------------------------------------
                          (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
                          --------------------------------------

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                          • #14
                            Ok, use some logic.

                            Think about it. Why the hell would Rabidlab say "Why don't you quit talkin' shit and battle me then just start the fuckin thread and let the poeple of the board decide who sucks. I dare you to challenge me but I know you won't have the balls to try to beat me because you'll just make a fool of yourself you fuckin homo." as a response to positive feedback? It's obvious. J-Dogg's post was edited to make Rabidlab look like a dumbass.

                            If that still doesn't make sense to you...maybe another direct quote might help put things into perspective..."aww thats cute guys change the thread and make me seem shady that really is helarious. if you were joking then staright but I still challenge any of you punks to a battle just challenge me."

                            Where's the evidence pointing? Not to mention the fact that J-Dogg's original post is screaming "HOMO CORNBALL!!!" Shit, does anyone actually talk like that? It was crafted to sound as pleasant as possible. Tailored, plain and simple.



                            I'm a stuck, starving artist.
                            Vincent Van Going nowhere.
                            Sold my silver souls to the devil.
                            Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
                            Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
                            Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
                            Into the full view.
                            Do you see me as suitable...
                            to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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                            • #15
                              thank you two thirds.thats the first sign of intelligent and rational thought on this thread.peace.
                              I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
                              as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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