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    one day i woke up/
    i found my toothbrush/
    i cleaned em hard/
    i was in a rush/
    i saw my gangstaz/
    they shouted "hi Faz"/
    Thats my name 'yo, i use Daz//
    daz what? u ask i sense you dont know/
    Daz washing powder i reply, you silly ho//
    I love you mom, i put up a fight/
    infact i love them all on the d12 website.

    What do you think? come on i need your replies. xxxxx
    Last edited by rappin_iz_tops; 07-20-2001, 04:56 PM.

  • #2
    yo a little short but tight verse u need some work do son not hating but u should work on it some or u a female i hope

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    • #3
      gender issue

      is there a gender issue here? yep im a female!

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      • #4
        Yo i hope you a girl, otherwise you should really reconsider putting kisses in your posts - this is a D12 site for gods sake!

        As far as the verse goes.....Just keep at it yo. It was original but i agree with em - it still needs work. Keep posting though aiight.


        PEACE
        The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

        ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

        R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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        • #5
          no u just was talking bout so solid player like u like him liek that but u deleted i thought u was a female theres no gender thing i was making sure u werent gay

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          • #6
            Yo i musta been typing my reply as you posted yours so i didnt see you confirm yo female - ness.



            So whats happening baby?!!
            The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

            ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

            R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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            • #7
              not much is happening babe, im kind of writing a shit rap that ive completely been mocked 4 (so solid player i will completely whip your ass is im ever in manchester 4 this)
              But it is shit, you gotta admit, aint ya, i mean ive seen all the good stuff, you know d burnas battle with the fellow so solid - that was good, not my rap about daz washing powder, i mean come on.

              Apologies for the kisses all, i was only being nice!

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