my thread..please rate.

[rappin_iz_tops]

one day i woke up/
i found my toothbrush/
i cleaned em hard/
i was in a rush/
i saw my gangstaz/
they shouted "hi Faz"/
Thats my name 'yo, i use Daz//
daz what? u ask i sense you dont know/
Daz washing powder i reply, you silly ho//
I love you mom, i put up a fight/
infact i love them all on the d12 website.

What do you think? come on i need your replies. xxxxx

[emyhr]

yo a little short but tight verse u need some work do son not hating but u should work on it some or u a female i hope

[rappin_iz_tops]

gender issue

is there a gender issue here? yep im a female!

[Illrun]

Yo i hope you a girl, otherwise you should really reconsider putting kisses in your posts - this is a D12 site for gods sake!

As far as the verse goes.....Just keep at it yo. It was original but i agree with em - it still needs work. Keep posting though aiight.


PEACE

[emyhr]

no u just was talking bout so solid player like u like him liek that but u deleted i thought u was a female theres no gender thing i was making sure u werent gay

[Illrun]

Yo i musta been typing my reply as you posted yours so i didnt see you confirm yo female - ness.



So whats happening baby?!!

[rappin_iz_tops]

not much is happening babe, im kind of writing a shit rap that ive completely been mocked 4 (so solid player i will completely whip your ass is im ever in manchester 4 this)
But it is shit, you gotta admit, aint ya, i mean ive seen all the good stuff, you know d burnas battle with the fellow so solid - that was good, not my rap about daz washing powder, i mean come on.

Apologies for the kisses all, i was only being nice!