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    All right this is my first battle who ever responds with a verse first is my opponent. first to 3 votes, be fair rate it on content and rhymes.

    Who's my first victim in this lyrical challenge?/ Prepare to be confused and loose your balance/Let me tickle your funny bone like Jimmy Fallon/ But its not all about comedy I'm utilizing sodomy I'm getting serious/ spit words that make you dazed and delerious/enraged and furious/crazed and curious on how any emcee could be this advanced/if you planned on winning there's been a change of plans/a new emcee is capturing attention spans/ so as I grab your attention let me remind you again/that you're dying faster than a fat bitch on phen-fen/thats right you took the wrong medication/I'm a lyrical guillotine set for decapitation/watch me shock the nation/leave you stressed in frustration looking for a way to keep your concentration/when I'm spittin' its lyrical genocide, as soon as I signed on you were set aside, you were paralyzed when you realized that your end was near/removed from all aspects of your atmosphere/decided to migrate pick a new hemisphere/In my world of lyrics you are lost and your brain is tossed like you're on acid/you fuck with me you get blasted/picked up and thrown in lake placid/so you can be eatin' for a while by wild crocodiles/then come the alligators I'm a gladiator/you're just a masturbator lets make an alte-matum/I'll stick a nine to your spine and a glock to your temple/you better close them eyes cause I'm comin' through with a pencil/so you can be fucked up by rabidlab the lyrical apprehensor.

    Well who wants to respond? this rhyme was meant to be read fast in an aggresive style.
    Rabidlab ain't noone as ill as me!
    I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
    as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

  • #2
    Advice...

    Aight, d00d. You've got some signs of skill. But, here's a tip that'll help you tighten up your punches...

    Remove the words "lyrical", "lyrically", "verbal", and "verbally" from your emcee vocabulary and your bars will hit much harder. Instead of saying something like "I'm gonna lyrically strangle you", just say "I'm gonna strangle you", or put a different adverb in to make up for lost syllables, something more creative. Trust me. Don't think I know what I'm talking about? Just check out my battles on here. You'll see that I don't use any of those words, not even once, and I seem to be faring pretty well. Haven't lost a battle yet...



    I'm a stuck, starving artist.
    Vincent Van Going nowhere.
    Sold my silver souls to the devil.
    Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
    Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
    Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
    Into the full view.
    Do you see me as suitable...
    to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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    • #3
      Thanks for the tip dude. I wish somebody would grab their balls and challenge me but it is late so I understand.peace.
      I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
      as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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      • #4
        Im up for IT..........

        Hey G im new at this game too but ill challenge ya!!
        i aint dat good but im tha first to reaply so..............yeah

        HERE IS MY VERSE!!! i think its pretty SHIT!!

        Im no victum im an INSTERGATOR \\and u aint no GLATIATOR\\ur tha MASTERBATOR\\Im runnin at u like a bull at a GATE\\Now listen to me closely as i spell out yo FATE\\My rhymin is so sharp it will slice off ya WRIST\\and leave u bleedin to death in a DITCH\\Ill take out my knife and cut U UP\\knock u out and leave u CONCUSED\\One punch thats all it will TAKE\\To make u see ur rhymin is FAKE\\Ill place ur DEAD BODY in an rusty SHOPPIN TROLLY\\And roll u out onto tha freeway *yellin out* "aint this shit JOLLY"\\Just like sisqo i will "UNLEASH THA DRAGON"\\\And knock u ***** off yo BAND WAGON\\Ill draw blood from u like a needle in ya VAIN\\until just know uve never experenced real PAIN\\im INSANE\\and tha one to TAME\\\cos ill bite down hard like a GREAT DANE\\Unlike U\\My rhymin is ILL\\And i have tha SKILL\\To ride tha bus all tha way to AMITYVILE\\I hope we be COLODIN\\Ill come out FIST FIGHTIN\\Cos since i got my gat ive been HOMOCIDAL\\Compared to my verse urs is a NESERY RHYME\\This rhyme is so jagged it commets its OWN CRIMES\\Im be so EVIL my peeps call me tha DEVIL\\U be rappin death but u aint on tha same LEVEL\\Yo be lyrical WACK\\And ive got u by tha BALL SACK\U think u know how to rhyme but u dont know JACK\\So u betta watch ya BACK\\Cos ya gonna get WACKED\\

        it aint dat good but u knoW!!

        and id just like to say.....ya verse was ILL G keep it up!!

        PEACE........
        .: Ruban Bates :.
        --------------------------------------
        (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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        • #5
          Yo your verse was ill too man good comeback. Hey I'm ready for some votes first to 3 wins.
          I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
          as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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          • #6
            BOTH OF YOU DID A HELLA GOOD JOB ON THAT BATTLE, I WAS FEELIN RABIDLABS VERSE MORE THOUGH, HIT A LIL BIT HARDER AND HAD SOME KILLA RYMES IN THERE. GOOD FLOW CONTENT AS WELL. NO BEEF JUST A VOTE, PROPS TO YOU BOTH.


            VOTE = RABIDLAB

            ( NEED VOTES ON GRUESOME .VS. PROMINANT. )
            Battle Record 25 - 6.
            Official Winner of FT1.
            http://www.dferecordz.com/gru.jpg
            A coward dies a thousand deaths,
            a soldier only dies but one.

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            • #7
              thanks gruesome you da man. 1-0 nothing me... keep voting.
              I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
              as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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              • #8
                keep votin' people I'm trying to get my first battle decided.peace.
                I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
                as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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                • #9
                  Vote = Rabidlab

                  I'm new so not someone to criticise but i thought both were excellent, both rhymed well but i thought rabidlab had the edge lyrically
                  http://slickjesus.homestead.com/files/skittle.gif

                  The greatest trick the devil ever pulled was convincing the world he didn't exist

                  AIM: SkittlesRap
                  MSN: [email protected]

                  Thanx to everyone for making me feel so welcome and I look forward to meeting all my fellow UK derty heads.

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                  • #10
                    2-0 nothing me one more vote and its victory #1 for rabidlab.
                    I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
                    as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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                    • #11
                      Bote=Rab

                      sorry to give him the win.lol. but i was feeling his lines and verse had nice flow.

                      peace

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                      • #12
                        3-0 thanks for the votes and nice batttle xtasy.
                        I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
                        as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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                        • #13
                          My thanks......

                          Well dat was a good battle rabidlab maybe ill come up against ya again and i might have had a bit more practice then!! GOOD WIN!!
                          .: Ruban Bates :.
                          --------------------------------------
                          (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
                          --------------------------------------

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                          • #14
                            i know this battle is over with, but i just wanted to say both those verses were hot. but like evry1 else here i just felt radiblab had a bit nicer flow. x-tacy u got talent but you need to work on it tho. i liked the way u hit radiblab back in your verse.

                            peace
                            Slaughterhouse II bring the beef when it's raw

                            http://fugu.hgmp.mrc.ac.uk/Images/fugu2.gif

                            "Tha only time you got ya crowd goin back and forth
                            is at ya gay peepshow when they jackin off."

                            "I could give a fuck about ya race
                            but if ya wanna be black I could shit on your face."

                            -FuGu

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                            • #15
                              KOOL

                              Thanks FuGu187 i tryed but i just got beat by a betta verse!!

                              CAN ALL U G's CHECK OUT MY RHYME ON THA FREESTYLE BOARD AND POST A REPLY ON WHAT YA THINK!!

                              PEACE!!
                              .: Ruban Bates :.
                              --------------------------------------
                              (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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