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  • R.2 :: Tourny :: Prominant .vs. Yeroc

    aight prominant, i set up this thread. here are the rules in case you didn't catch them or remember:
    2 verse
    20 bar max
    3 day response limit
    it doesn't matter to me who drops first. either one of us but i wanted to get this up here. lemme know what you wanna do dogg.
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  • #2
    sorry to spam your thread but remember i aint gonna be a judge its

    2/3
    d burna
    purplehaze

    peace good luck to you both.
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    • #3
      Yo yeroc are u goin first? i jus need to know so i wont get a 3 day DQ.
      "Ive seen it all,did it all.......most of yall will pop for a minute..spit a sentence,then the game will get rid of yall" - Nas

      "Im tired of you new jacks...im tired of *****z sayin they bout to blow,unless you a girl,i dont care if you bout to do that" - Royce Da 5'9''

      "A few hot shells outta tha chrome,will leave you there,wit a funny smell,like gun powder cologne" - Jadakiss

      "Ive been poppin,held true to my fort....im like bin laden,im bout to change the whole view of New york" - Joe Budden

      "Im NBC,News time,blastin 8's..keep ya cool before you lose like....half ya face..run in ya house,cover ya mouth with maskin tape...let my chick strap on a dick,his ass get raped...everybody gotta die,why procrastinate?? you get put in a casket,for makin trashy tapes" - Cassidy

      "if i pass you bass,and u spend my gravy?? then i ask for my papes,and you pretend you crazy?? i put 10 in ya AV,and pretend you payed me...leave you stuffed in a dumpster...like brenda's baby" - Cassidy


      Just remember..Virginia's for Haters

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      • #4
        aiight bet.
        "Ive seen it all,did it all.......most of yall will pop for a minute..spit a sentence,then the game will get rid of yall" - Nas

        "Im tired of you new jacks...im tired of *****z sayin they bout to blow,unless you a girl,i dont care if you bout to do that" - Royce Da 5'9''

        "A few hot shells outta tha chrome,will leave you there,wit a funny smell,like gun powder cologne" - Jadakiss

        "Ive been poppin,held true to my fort....im like bin laden,im bout to change the whole view of New york" - Joe Budden

        "Im NBC,News time,blastin 8's..keep ya cool before you lose like....half ya face..run in ya house,cover ya mouth with maskin tape...let my chick strap on a dick,his ass get raped...everybody gotta die,why procrastinate?? you get put in a casket,for makin trashy tapes" - Cassidy

        "if i pass you bass,and u spend my gravy?? then i ask for my papes,and you pretend you crazy?? i put 10 in ya AV,and pretend you payed me...leave you stuffed in a dumpster...like brenda's baby" - Cassidy


        Just remember..Virginia's for Haters

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        • #5
          spittin first verse

          yo prom, nuttin but r-e-s-p-e-c-t. 4sho. delete the posts above to clear way, u know what i'm sayin, let's do this...

          stop the shit prominant/ you think ur hot but ur nada bitch, what up wit this/ rhyming like a a hoe wit an inability to win/ spittin some rhymez that i saw in the last battle you were in/ this is the end, and it's begining right here/ you fuckin queer, yo rhymez couldn't be outta this world if they was cosmonauts on MIR/ comin up from behind and put you in a lyrical sleeper/ went to buy myself a whore but i got yo mama cheaper/ now she's blowin up my beeper, like imma blow up ur bars/ sending shrapel flying at you causing deep tissue scars/ my verse hit you like a thousand bladed razors/ why you rappin prom, stick to ur day job as a compulsive masterbator/ like a tazor, i be stunning mothafuckers wit my hit shit i spit/ make you continue to sit and never wanna step to this/ lil punk bitch, thinkin you an emcee/ well you maybe, but you'll never be as dope as me/ i guess it's pretty neat to pretend to be an emcee/ and add mothafuckers to ur defeated list that you never beat/ the only thing you could beat is ur mothafuckin dick/ til semen seeps which is about as much as hot as you'll ever spit///
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          "He Who Makes a Beast Out of Himself, Gets Rid of the Pain of Being a Man."
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          • #6
            uppin to be read and for prominant's verse. hit me up dogg.
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            "He Who Makes a Beast Out of Himself, Gets Rid of the Pain of Being a Man."
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            • #7
              Uppin

              for Prominant....this should be a decent battle....good luck to the both of u
              Rhyme & Reason
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              • #8
                my verse

                yo.............................



                this name will make it to tha rap hall of fame
                even if u had J's rhymes u still couldnt *change tha game*
                i am tha champion that defeats people like u
                ill take your body and cut till i divide it in 2
                i kill people for fun and get a thrill outta life
                hanging,shootin,and stabbing people wit blood spillt on my knife
                when i pull out tha 9 u'll be gone in sixty seconds or less
                *****z askin what *pants* u wearin cus its hard to *Guess*
                takin cheap wins,drivin a cheap benz
                havin other peeps buy it for u cus u thought they were friendz
                now i got ya back seat laced wit bombs
                and when u in tha casket yur girl is headin to tha *Prom*
                i'll throw your body all tha way down in Lake Placid
                but before that i rigged your drink wit carbonic and folic acids
                Before u go outside ya house u betta grab your Teth
                U couldnt have tha *Right Rhyme* if u had any *Left*
                I'll hit ya moms so hard she'll need *Liposuction*
                I skull fucked her so bad that she got a Mild *Concussion*
                and if u think that any of your rhymes are good for one minute
                Ill have a whole *Hit list* wit all your *girl friends* in it
                "Ive seen it all,did it all.......most of yall will pop for a minute..spit a sentence,then the game will get rid of yall" - Nas

                "Im tired of you new jacks...im tired of *****z sayin they bout to blow,unless you a girl,i dont care if you bout to do that" - Royce Da 5'9''

                "A few hot shells outta tha chrome,will leave you there,wit a funny smell,like gun powder cologne" - Jadakiss

                "Ive been poppin,held true to my fort....im like bin laden,im bout to change the whole view of New york" - Joe Budden

                "Im NBC,News time,blastin 8's..keep ya cool before you lose like....half ya face..run in ya house,cover ya mouth with maskin tape...let my chick strap on a dick,his ass get raped...everybody gotta die,why procrastinate?? you get put in a casket,for makin trashy tapes" - Cassidy

                "if i pass you bass,and u spend my gravy?? then i ask for my papes,and you pretend you crazy?? i put 10 in ya AV,and pretend you payed me...leave you stuffed in a dumpster...like brenda's baby" - Cassidy


                Just remember..Virginia's for Haters

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                • #9
                  final verse

                  prominant rhymez like he hard but he seem to disguard/ that sudden fact that he couldn't freestyle if they held up cue cards/ fightin wit the big doggs, thinkin yo shit is tight/ but you jus a fuckin mut wit alotta bark but no bite/ but i gots the right rhymez that'll put you in yo grave before to time/ spittin bricks that hit yo lower back and break yo spine/ i make a betta emcee but you make a betta whore/ how you expect to beat me wit yo patty-wack ass metaphors/ half yo mothafuckin shit don't even make any sense/ you haven't came out the closet yet but yo fag ass gave me plenty of hints/ the shit you spit couldn't be hard if you was spittin stones/ claim you carry automatic weapons when you can't even handle a microphone/ fuckin sissy if you defeat people like me then try it/ but when i lyrically murder yo ass don't fuckin deny it/ lift this mallet and strike it down scattering yo brain matter/ you couldn't *hit* my girlie even if you threw those weak ass punchlines at her/ yeroc blowin prom's fuckin verses outta the water/ callin to self the hottest emcee on da boardz when you know i'm hotter/ if you was on fire, you still wouldn't be the hottest on da board/ and while ur spittin ur nonsense imma strangle you to death wit the mic cord///
                  Last edited by YEROC; 07-27-2001, 05:15 PM.
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                  "He Who Makes a Beast Out of Himself, Gets Rid of the Pain of Being a Man."
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                  • #10
                    Yo..............................

                    its simple when i rhyme and strait to tha point
                    my lyrics disembowel and move yur arm out tha joint
                    I dont need Cue cards to beat u
                    even as my apprentice i still couldnt teach u
                    like weezer says i got my hashpipe wit me
                    even wit an ounce on my hood tha cops still couldnt get me
                    invest ya money on me cus im killin tha stocks
                    cus if u dont u wil be in that carboard box
                    u bout as small in tha game as a grain of sediment
                    u gave *head* so much u got *Speech Impediment
                    i dont like bitches that put their name in reverse
                    U aint *dirty* yeroc cus when i look u dont even use *1 curse*
                    u gone softer than fuckin charmin toilet paper
                    throw yur bitch on tha bed coil and rape her
                    thinkin i bite bitch u take rhymes for other people
                    spellin yur name backwardz thinkin u is decietful
                    before i rhyme i take one hit of tha bong
                    if yur name was *Notorius* on tha boardz u still couldnt be *Dead Wrong*
                    ill do it tha old fashion way and beat u wit a cord
                    u cant keystyle so go to Audio Battle Board
                    "Ive seen it all,did it all.......most of yall will pop for a minute..spit a sentence,then the game will get rid of yall" - Nas

                    "Im tired of you new jacks...im tired of *****z sayin they bout to blow,unless you a girl,i dont care if you bout to do that" - Royce Da 5'9''

                    "A few hot shells outta tha chrome,will leave you there,wit a funny smell,like gun powder cologne" - Jadakiss

                    "Ive been poppin,held true to my fort....im like bin laden,im bout to change the whole view of New york" - Joe Budden

                    "Im NBC,News time,blastin 8's..keep ya cool before you lose like....half ya face..run in ya house,cover ya mouth with maskin tape...let my chick strap on a dick,his ass get raped...everybody gotta die,why procrastinate?? you get put in a casket,for makin trashy tapes" - Cassidy

                    "if i pass you bass,and u spend my gravy?? then i ask for my papes,and you pretend you crazy?? i put 10 in ya AV,and pretend you payed me...leave you stuffed in a dumpster...like brenda's baby" - Cassidy


                    Just remember..Virginia's for Haters

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                    • #11
                      start the mothafuckin judging... 4sho

                      good luck big prom - nice verses
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                      "He Who Makes a Beast Out of Himself, Gets Rid of the Pain of Being a Man."
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                      • #12
                        good luck yeroc.nice verses also.
                        "Ive seen it all,did it all.......most of yall will pop for a minute..spit a sentence,then the game will get rid of yall" - Nas

                        "Im tired of you new jacks...im tired of *****z sayin they bout to blow,unless you a girl,i dont care if you bout to do that" - Royce Da 5'9''

                        "A few hot shells outta tha chrome,will leave you there,wit a funny smell,like gun powder cologne" - Jadakiss

                        "Ive been poppin,held true to my fort....im like bin laden,im bout to change the whole view of New york" - Joe Budden

                        "Im NBC,News time,blastin 8's..keep ya cool before you lose like....half ya face..run in ya house,cover ya mouth with maskin tape...let my chick strap on a dick,his ass get raped...everybody gotta die,why procrastinate?? you get put in a casket,for makin trashy tapes" - Cassidy

                        "if i pass you bass,and u spend my gravy?? then i ask for my papes,and you pretend you crazy?? i put 10 in ya AV,and pretend you payed me...leave you stuffed in a dumpster...like brenda's baby" - Cassidy


                        Just remember..Virginia's for Haters

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                        • #13
                          uppin for the judges to make their decisions.. come on ya'll... vote up...

                          who are the judges by the way??
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                          "He Who Makes a Beast Out of Himself, Gets Rid of the Pain of Being a Man."
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                          • #14
                            The judges are Two Thirds, D-Burna and Purple Haze....
                            Rhyme & Reason
                            Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
                            #classreunionmuzik
                            Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

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                            • #15
                              vote: Prominant

                              Some of the punchlines were abit better thought up, and it was simpler and slightly more interesting to read.

                              I think you would both improve if you learnt how to invent punchlines more effectively. what I do is think of idioms [colloquial/common language] and use alternative words.

                              e.g.

                              Ya rhymes are a waist of paper - a belt made of cardboard/

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