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  • Open Challange 2, My verse inside

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    I drag underdogs like loose training leashes/
    I maimed $o $olid – set off Dj Phat until he came to pieces/
    After I kill you with one of my famous speeches/
    I put your entire click on the lists of endangered species/
    You dig my shit like ancient feces/
    I slaughter crews/
    My flow will win like Napoleon – I make water lose//
    You not a ruffneck, its time to learn a lesson/
    Ya style is so suspect, it had a motive and a murder weapon//
    They’re presuming ya bringing ya style/
    But Ya Can’t punch lines throwing right hooks at people in single file//
    I read ya lyrics, its terribly funny/
    That you couldn’t get on the heir if the honey/
    Ya having sex with just Inherited money//
    I got them x-rated new rhymes/
    While fan wouldn’t Bootleg ya shit if ya defacated moonshine/
    Embarrass this crummy wack kid just to pass the time/
    We’re conjoined twins that are sharing a leg cause ya ass is mine//
    Close the lid on the casket pine and slam it hard/
    You’ll never Standout/
    Like a crippled chameleon wearing camuflage//


    *edited - word missed out line

    *i am editing to say that when i edited i put the words "is" in the "ass is mine" line, and adding 's' to a word
    Last edited by purplehaze2701; 07-29-2001, 08:02 AM.

  • #2
    Isn't anybody brave enough to drop a verse - i know some of you are, so just post, its only a text battle

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    • #3
      Yo.

      Ok. I just got on here. I gotta run to the store and get some shit for my new puppy and drop a friend off. I'll be back to post. I want this battle. Please, don't anyone else step up...

      By the way, Purplehaze, if you're going to edit your posts, it's wise to give a little note as to what you edited. Otherwise, it just looks a little odd...makes you look suspect.



      I'm a stuck, starving artist.
      Vincent Van Going nowhere.
      Sold my silver souls to the devil.
      Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
      Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
      Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
      Into the full view.
      Do you see me as suitable...
      to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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      • #4
        I Accept

        Heres my verse dawg,


        So u think ur so hard,well let me tell u, u could'nt batter nails with a motha fuckin hammer// ur verse was so wack coz of the unsupply of important grammer// ur rhymes are so weak u could'nt compete with the back street boys//ur really just the type to stay in an play with toys// why do u think ur the type to kill a crew without usin weapons// i bet ur dumb arse thinks u can outrun a pack of leapards// well here i am showin up ur sorry arse// if i were u i would hide myself up on mars// where no one can laugh at u// ur the type people can see though// with ur simple minded shitty rhymes// as bad as that track named two times// just face it u could'nt break a pane of glass, with a crowbar// and u could'nt even outrun a crew, even if u was in a car// u need not worry about your freestyle repatation// because u dont hav one within the dirty nation//


        thats my verse


        Good Luck

        ******VOTE*****NOW********VOTE*****
        Only a few of us left

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        • #5
          sween i'm battling two thirds. i asked to battle you, but 2/3 replied and he wants it...please delete your post if possible, i will battle you later.

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          • #6
            Waiting 2/3 - you said you'd be back soon

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            • #7
              Word.

              You might wannna *re-treat*, like a dog doing tricks, stuck on repeat/
              Before I *de-feet* you like a *Polish guillotine*/
              I'll eat your soul(sole) like a starving retard working in a Nike Factory/
              I'd eat your brain as well, but it's too small to satisfy the lesser 1/3 of me/
              If your sperm's last name was *Rose* or *Marovich*, you still couldn't *cum-Pete*./
              You're running *Back 2 Da Hotel* because now, you're *N 2 Deep*/
              It's easy for me to take tracks that made hip-hop history/
              And turn 'em into disses that strip you of all speech/
              Bar 6 may have gone over your head, it's no surprise/
              You wouldn't see where I'm coming from if I glued spherical mirrors to your eyes/
              Your style's more de-*Nyed* than Seattle after I sliced the *Science Guy*/
              Christ, you can't even spell "clique" right./
              Why waste my time with simple minds?/
              You thought you were on a *roll*, but it just turned out to be the *crust*./
              Bloody bloke, you know you're dead, i got you *seeing red*, oxidizing your sight with *rust*.



              I'm a stuck, starving artist.
              Vincent Van Going nowhere.
              Sold my silver souls to the devil.
              Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
              Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
              Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
              Into the full view.
              Do you see me as suitable...
              to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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