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  • ::2/3 TOURNAMENT:: - DaLux vs. Emhyr ::

    Rules:

    One verse per emcee, per round.

    30-40 bars. No exceptions

    Creativity counts, bigtime.

    You may not use the words "lyrical", "lyrically", "verbal" or "verbally."

    judged by: Two Thirds

    Last edited by DaLux; 07-29-2001, 06:39 PM.
    http://dalux.dmusic.com

  • #2
    im ready when ever u are cuzo...just dont forget to post the rules and i dont need 5 day amo i dont prewrite

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    • #3
      ok....cant be assed to type it all out yet coz its 2:30 AM
      im going to bed.
      i'll do it when i wake up so it should be up in 10 hours, just have your verse ready :D
      http://dalux.dmusic.com

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      • #4
        good luck emhyr..
        ok heres my verse......

        You lost in our audio and about to *lose in text* battle,
        like your engrossed in your book on 'How to be an inventive rapper,
        you just LIL, move the 'L' forward one, that equals me,
        am i gunna have to add you AGAIN to my defeated tally?
        Your occupation should be a slave coz you get beat so much,
        or be a tramp on the street giving guys relief for bucks,
        to beat DaLux , you gotta have more than just meaningful puns,
        you need 10 rhymin dictionaries and the creativeness of a genious' sums.
        Anyone stepping to me to comence a battle,
        is trying to learn to swim before they can paddle,
        a saddle is not the only thing your girl has been riding,
        shes being fucked more than i've been seen rhyming.
        Dont step to me you'll be buried next to the last contender,
        he didnt even have to start, i just lost my temper.
        I dont say 'keep it up', i say: 'keep is locked up',
        my battles will stop you rappin, so will my shotgun.
        You got more'whack' than if i smacked you with a bat,
        relax you aint got the knack for rap you thought you had.
        Like glory you couldnt get a little bit of fame,
        and you couldnt change my mind even if you switched our brains.
        You couldnt be special if you kind was unique,
        but there are whack people everywhere, dont believe what you read.
        You rapping is like a ball: there is no point,
        and you couldnt 'meet me in class' if we were both joined.
        Copying from me, youve 'bitten' off more than you can chew,
        coz my lines are so 'phat' their not good for you as food,
        i dont wanna be rude, but reading my rhymes you seem confused,
        like if i kidnapped the DJ - MC's are left without a clue.
        I spit on your track differently to how i spit on mine,
        you could conceal your verse and not create a hidden line.
        All people get 'signs' for an occupation in life,
        you obviously didnt 'see' yours coz your mind is blind.
        You cant even beat me with me spitting first,
        coz you couldnt make a complete 'rhyme' with your name in reverse.


        ok, emhyr spit when your ready dude, good luck.
        http://dalux.dmusic.com

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        • #5
          my verse

          Yo after this verse is over u gonna fell abused and disrespected/
          String u up and watch ur spinal-cord slip and get disconnected/
          heard peeps are looking for fake shit, get ur defeat list collected/
          Who the fuck is Dalux, hey remember that fucking whore rapper/
          You think your better then me cuz your rhymes are more blacker/
          Get girlie wired up,grab by the jaw take this whore and slap her/
          Maybe i should try to type my rhymes in bold to grab attention
          Your like a story wit no plot face it fucker you lack suspension/
          I already know what ur gonna created like i maped ur invention/
          Yo you wouldnt be able to rhyme if i shoved my name in ur face/
          Put my gun in back of your skull and blow ur brain out of place/
          U couldnt come back and battle if i was looking at dead for hire/
          Firing shot guns please, only pistol u pop off is a lil red rider/(bb gun)
          When i spit rhymes they attract gasoline and set ur head on fire/
          Your not a BAD BOY or a RUFFRYDER so how can u be DALUX/
          Laying flat in a casket is the only way u will ever see the box/
          When im finally done with you,u wont be able to see the cops/
          Completely blind so tell me how the fuck u gonna notice this line/
          Got cha scoped straight in my vision just so i can focus ur mind/
          I stay with invisible lyrics so how you gonna ghost this rhyme/
          This shot an shell i wrote my own shit theres no ghost this time/
          This glock will sell you so many bullets at such a very low price/
          You could type verses so POLITE and still wouldnt flow NICE/
          You got hit wit a gun 3 times for spite but only got suede twice/
          Cuz the 3rd time the police pronouce you to be dead on arrival/
          You cant take shit you should go and read my thread on surrival/
          Trying to preach my verse detetives fount you dead by a bibble/
          I dont wanna be rude, but i think ur confused with ur sexuality/
          You wouldnt be real if you fucking stood right next to reality/
          Get cha sliced in bits, sweep up and ur style thrown in the trash/
          Rip ur body out of space balled up and get it thrown in the past/
          You never even shot a gun more like handle a fucking shotgun/
          18 hollow tips bullet fly in every direction u cant fucking stopone/
          Shove my gun right in your back and make ur chest ride my grip/
          I stay straped serious with like 8 guns on each side of my hip/
          I make ur ass delerious wit 8 bullets on each side of my clip/
          Im done,ill make u think right when i smash ur left side wit a brick/
          Last edited by emyhr; 07-30-2001, 10:39 PM.

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          • #6
            right two thirds. do your shit..
            http://dalux.dmusic.com

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            • #7
              Aight...

              Winner = DaLux

              Decent battle. DaLux came off the creative tip A LOT stronger than Emyhr.

              Emyhr, your verse was pretty nice. It flowed well, and had a pretty good rhyme scheme. But, this tourney is all about creativity and clever punches. Most of yours were about guns and bullets...something that's not really an expandable subject...something we've all seen many times before. Like I said, nice verse...but not nice enough to win the round. Sorry bro.

              DaLux, very well done. You had some dope ass punches in your verse and it flowed nicely.

              I especially liked...

              Your occupation should be a slave coz you get beat so much,
              or be a tramp on the street giving guys relief for bucks,

              - nice rhyming

              i dont wanna be rude, but reading my rhymes you seem confused,
              like if i kidnapped the DJ - MC's are left without a clue.

              - nice wordplay / DJ Clue

              You rapping is like a ball: there is no point,
              - Hahahah.


              Good job by the both of you.

              DaLux, good luck in Rd. 2.



              I'm a stuck, starving artist.
              Vincent Van Going nowhere.
              Sold my silver souls to the devil.
              Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
              Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
              Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
              Into the full view.
              Do you see me as suitable...
              to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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              • #8
                K i hate too lose to some one that cant rhyme that good well i guess my shit wasnt ass creative,,,mater or fact name one line in my verse that wasnt creative and let me school u on that ok...this is the 2nd time i lost to him i shouldnt have...get peeps in here and let u know who was better i bet u they say mine,,,,

                i dont care if i lose to some that was way better then me but lose by one persons vote.i didnt know just u was judging untill the this thread was already made..so i had to drop a verse.....

                im tired of wasting good as rhymes on shit like this

                ARE U SURE U GOT THE NAME RIGHT U NEED TO GO BACK AND CHECK OK THANK U
                Last edited by emyhr; 07-31-2001, 11:36 AM.

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                • #9
                  personaly emyhr's rhyme was better cuz dalux verse got boring after 10bars altho i did read it all.and there should of been more than one judge
                  one
                  Last edited by D-Burna; 07-31-2001, 03:21 PM.
                  http://media.ign.com/games/image/fable_040804_160.jpg

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                  • #10
                    i agree with d-burna
                    jus got boring like reading fucking directions to installing dvd players or sumtin

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                    • #11
                      bullshit

                      yo that judge isnt very good because if u look at Emyhr's rhymes u can clearly see that he won. He had a good rhyme scheme,he used secondary words real good and he had good hard hittin disses on his verse.so that judge needs to look at his verse again cus emyhr ripped this battle.
                      "Ive seen it all,did it all.......most of yall will pop for a minute..spit a sentence,then the game will get rid of yall" - Nas

                      "Im tired of you new jacks...im tired of *****z sayin they bout to blow,unless you a girl,i dont care if you bout to do that" - Royce Da 5'9''

                      "A few hot shells outta tha chrome,will leave you there,wit a funny smell,like gun powder cologne" - Jadakiss

                      "Ive been poppin,held true to my fort....im like bin laden,im bout to change the whole view of New york" - Joe Budden

                      "Im NBC,News time,blastin 8's..keep ya cool before you lose like....half ya face..run in ya house,cover ya mouth with maskin tape...let my chick strap on a dick,his ass get raped...everybody gotta die,why procrastinate?? you get put in a casket,for makin trashy tapes" - Cassidy

                      "if i pass you bass,and u spend my gravy?? then i ask for my papes,and you pretend you crazy?? i put 10 in ya AV,and pretend you payed me...leave you stuffed in a dumpster...like brenda's baby" - Cassidy


                      Just remember..Virginia's for Haters

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                      • #12
                        ...

                        Emyhr, sorry dude. I re-read the verses another two times. I still think DaLux's verse was better.



                        I'm a stuck, starving artist.
                        Vincent Van Going nowhere.
                        Sold my silver souls to the devil.
                        Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
                        Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
                        Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
                        Into the full view.
                        Do you see me as suitable...
                        to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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                        • #13
                          K THATS COOL BUT U NEED MORE JUDGES TO COME IN HERE AND JUDGE ON PERSON CANT JUDGE,,CUZ U CAN PLAN THE WHOLE TOURNI.........

                          ANYWAY U DIDNT POINT OUT A LINE OF MINE THAT WAS CREATIVE

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by emyhr
                            K THATS COOL BUT U NEED MORE JUDGES TO COME IN HERE AND JUDGE ON PERSON CANT JUDGE,,CUZ U CAN PLAN THE WHOLE TOURNI.........

                            Fair enough.

                            Who else wants to judge this? Two more people...

                            For the time being, this battle will stay open. I ain't gonna make up a rule and then exclude you, Emyhr.

                            BTW, if you wanna judge, don't post an opinion about who's verse was better on this thread. I ain't gonna pick you if I already know who you're voting for.



                            I'm a stuck, starving artist.
                            Vincent Van Going nowhere.
                            Sold my silver souls to the devil.
                            Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
                            Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
                            Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
                            Into the full view.
                            Do you see me as suitable...
                            to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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                            • #15
                              sounds fair thank u,, i dont wanna sound like a bitch but 3 peeps thouht my verse was better, i mean u should have more judges from the start

                              NEED MORE JUDGES U SHOULD MAKE A THREAD FOR IT.....


                              BUT U STILL DIDNT NAME ONE LINE OF MINE THAT WASNT CREATIVE,, CAN U NAME ONE

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