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  • Tournament: Eyerone Vs Emyhr

    ummmmm u spittin first....ummmmm i'll delete this post after u spit first.......later
    Rhyme & Reason
    Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
    #classreunionmuzik
    Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

  • #2
    Leave me to spit a blind verse like i had a hoody reversed/
    No holes poked in it,shooting everything, it could be worst/
    If it was a race to win this battle without me u could be first/
    And i had u thinking i was gonna drop out and let u take a win/
    I should just let u advance to round 4 just so i can brake ur grin/
    If your rhymes where even close to phat i swear i'll shake u thin/
    You made the mistake of grabing me now both your arms lost/
    Oh want me to belive ur hard cuz u stand wit both arms crossed/
    Catch the kiss of death, rip ur arms off so i can knock ur self out/
    Give u a gun to kill ur self with just so u can box yourself south/
    Handcuffed to a tree beat to death wit a dead cops flashlight/
    fuck wit the wrong person,the evil in me make ur eyes flashwhite/
    Get shot 12 times in ur left arm just cuz ur really cant pass RIGHT/
    You cant deny it that i be keeping it gangsta and i stay Fabulous/
    Grab you by your ur neck in a sleeper postion and stab ur wrist/
    toss ur girl full speed at ya just so peeps can see u grab ur bitch/
    Get charged wit for beating ur girl and put in back of a cop car/
    Yo u couldnt be a hard rocking emcee of u was a rap//rock star/
    I saw your ugly ass pic, looking like a brokedown killah priest/
    Get sliced 100 times and watch the blood spill on ya fleese/
    To prevent me getting put in a cell im gonna kill all the police/
    The only way u got the nerve to say fuck u is to stick up ur finger/
    The only way ull ever come close to fame is if u stick up a singer/
    Ill put my foot so far up ur ass, my boot will make ur throat linger/

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    • #3
      my verse

      No beef....but it goes like this..........

      I'm a VIP *****, steady duckin the fees/
      The dawgs know me as Stevie Wonder the way i *blind* stroke the *keys*/
      Chillin in the cut, steady puffin the trees/
      bustin 2 buck shots, aim, ready hittin the knees/
      Your gats are like Lee Dungeree's cause *u cant bust em*/
      knowin *****z for 4 years yet i still dont trust em/
      I tell shit ahead of time according to my user status custom/
      No luvin girls, if i want em, i alwayz gotta lust em/
      My guns are 2 twins, matter fact they like *doublemint*/
      *Freshly* unloadin bullets to ya mouth and now u know what trouble meant/
      First off, u almost beat me the first time cause of friendly votes/
      now i put the heat to ya tonsils like *****z wit strep throat/
      My minds a puzzle like them rubic squares/
      blowin up like c4 cubic scares/
      Last battle, u had peeps on ya nuts....like some pubic hairs/
      Cats start wack shit wit me son, and i pity them fools/
      Waste wit tools, cant believe im complyin to these wack ass rules/
      I herd ya name is fuckin pronnounced Emmer/
      I'll give ya a *whippersnapper* while sittin on the crapper like that wrestler Tommy Dreamer/
      Rhyme Steamer/
      Aim for and shoot at the feds/
      Fuck ya name pronnounced "Emmer", after this, it will be pronnounced "dead"/
      This time, their aint no dickryders to ride ya fuckin jock saddle/
      Ya last remains of this bout are echos of your screams like in ya damn audio battles..............
      Rhyme & Reason
      Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
      #classreunionmuzik
      Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

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      • #4
        well, i on,y got one word to say about the both of you
        perfection
        i havnt seen a battle like this in my whole life and both of your rhymes were brilliant
        and well, i can't vote, i don't know who won...

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        • #5
          uppin...for second verse by Emyhr
          Rhyme & Reason
          Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
          #classreunionmuzik
          Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

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          • #6
            still uppin...come on Emyhr
            Rhyme & Reason
            Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
            #classreunionmuzik
            Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

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            • #7
              last verse

              put my ear to ur eyelids so i can hear what it sounds like when thugs cry/
              Pull ur gun out *click* *poof* thats what it sounds like when thugs try/
              When you hear the rope snap thats what it sounds like when thugs lie/
              Put in the back of my trunk next to the speaker so i can blare ur vision/
              You battling emmer, the outcome aint even close its a unfiar decision/
              As the old saying goes this aint no threat its a mother fucking promise/
              Everytime the best on the board gets mentioned u always say EYERONE that PROM this/
              Come on now you dont have to lie u can say it, you both suck its alrite to be honest/
              Stop trying to rip off Carl Thomas, copying bitch ur name The Prophet/
              If u change ur alter ego to Slim Shady put out a LP ur name still wouldnt Profit/
              Swing back and put my fist though ur eyeball and blow ur brain outa socket/
              If u consider urself to be in this rap game then let the fight start on the court/
              Dislocate your upper section from ur lower region and put ur heart on support/
              Get Murdered in Time Square for no reason and get buried in the heart of New York/
              Man there aint no sense of evening trying cuz you know that I won/
              Yo i just had a idea if u took the R out of ur name u still get that EyE ONe/
              So either way u think of it you lost, stop trying u aint gonna make it/
              Yo u couldnt have girls on your nuts if u did a concert for all girls but naked/
              Got my pistol stays glue to your chest so there aint no way i can miss/
              Your probably to dumb enough to relize my metaphors from Jada Kiss/
              Wit so many cuts around the hand its like you attempt to shave ur wrist/
              Opps u missed now you forearm covered wit a bunch of razor blade slits/
              They call me Stevie Puncher cuz my eyes cant see when my hand strokes ur face/
              Its like your the defendant and im the plaintiff and i just smoke this case/
              Last edited by emyhr; 08-02-2001, 10:49 AM.

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              • #8
                GAMEOVER PT III

                haha.......fuck it.....unleashin the beast.......

                This cat beats his dick whenever he feels amuzed/
                He tried spelling E-Y-E backwerds and juss got confused/
                Fuck spittin on the boards, to house over the fence/
                bitch i'll gag ya mouth wit pennies so u could talk wit some *sense*/
                And what the fuck is up wit Carl Thomas/
                The type of shit we spit get at ya heart like dramas/
                My Prophecy of the future iz acurate like Nostradamas/
                We own these streets/
                in this field trip, fuck lunch son, im *packin* my heat/
                And like i said IM THE BEST get the fuck off my jock/
                U wouldnt have the *Right Stuff* if u were New Kids on the Block/
                In my future im blowin up like M- 80's/
                *Kill u* wit *Murder Murder* leave u wit *Brain Damage* like Slim Shady/
                For spittin dumb, u go to jail for Murder One
                Im the father of this cypha, all u *****z my sons
                Roll thru ya hood wit da big body benz/
                the only time u get action is when u make luv to Palm-ela and her five friends/
                I spit wit no rests son, no need for a pause/
                Ya first freestyle? *It wuz written* like Nas/
                My spittin is wise, im winnin ***** open ya EYES/
                5 razor blades needed to cut ya down to size/
                5 for every letter in ya name wit diss sick mind of frame/
                5 shots to ya head deliverin wit perfect aim/
                And for the record kid, im ill enuff to make u sick/
                The only time u held a *G* is when u held a dude name Gary's dick/
                Im like Eddie Brock, my *Venom* is a part of me/
                Use a pair of scissors to impale thru ya carotid artery/
                U say u spit hot, but u really spit dumb/
                cuz u been suckin dick too long, what u spittin is cum/
                So if i had gotten lyme disease from a little flea/
                and u contracted AIDs, even then u wouldnt be sicker than me/
                I flee the crime scene and only leave chicks/
                Emyhr quit rappin, ya ass would be better as the front man from EVE 6..........

                And by the way...i went over the limit.....but in round 2...so did Emyhr..and no one said shit...so its all good.....
                Last edited by Eyerone; 08-02-2001, 12:57 PM.
                Rhyme & Reason
                Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
                #classreunionmuzik
                Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

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                • #9
                  Vote: Eyerone

                  Read both verses from each person, I liked Emyhr's first verse better than his second, but Eyerone had more thought out extended punches, and there was better use of metaphoric language.
                  "The dawgs know me as Stevie Wonder the way i *blind* stroke the *keys*/"
                  This was prolly the best line in the 4 verses, and although i've used a stevie wonder line before it was still nice and along with a couple others clinched it. From Emyhr, I suppose this was a quite effective line:
                  "Leave me to spit a blind verse like i had a hoody reversed/"
                  wasn't feeling the thugs cry rhyming or the new york lines, and i thought this swayed it as Eye's was better. I may of got your first and second mixed up because i read them again when i was writing the vote and they are in a different order.
                  Maybe you could of improved if you had more internal rhymes in your lines, or less words. Try starting sentances occasionally with 1 or two words that rhyme with the last bar.....

                  peace

                  *edited because emhyr wasn't satisfyed with my vote*
                  Last edited by purplehaze2701; 08-02-2001, 01:52 PM.

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                  • #10
                    fine, but i bet you wouldn't be complaining if i just said "vote: emhyr, better flow and lines" - it was a good explanation but i will make it longer.

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                    • #11
                      aiiyo...i hear theres something between me and Emyhr...for me talkin to the judges or whatever......man...talk to purple haze........or fuckin look at the thread itself......i posted my opinion and told him to vote.....whatever man...if u think i talked to the judges TELLING them to vote for me...u got another thing comin...later
                      Last edited by Eyerone; 08-02-2001, 06:42 PM.
                      Rhyme & Reason
                      Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
                      #classreunionmuzik
                      Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

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                      • #12
                        i didnt say u talked to the judges i said u told purple haze,,,that u think u won it and told him to judge for his self,,,any way drop it

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                        • #13
                          Vote...

                          Vote = Eyerone.

                          Purplehaze about summed it all up.

                          I did like some of Emyhr's lines...
                          "Yo i just had a idea if u took the R out of ur name u still get that EyE ONe/"
                          - That was pretty clever.

                          and

                          "As the old saying goes this aint no threat its a mother fucking promise/
                          Everytime the best on the board gets mentioned u always say EYERONE that PROM this/

                          - I was feeling that shit.




                          ...but all in all, Eyerone's verses flowed better and hit harder...and those similies & metaphors...hot damn.

                          Want an example?
                          "We own these streets/
                          in this field trip, fuck lunch son, im *packin* my heat/
                          And like i said IM THE BEST get the fuck off my jock/
                          U wouldnt have the *Right Stuff* if u were New Kids on the Block/
                          In my future im blowin up like M- 80's/
                          *Kill u* wit *Murder Murder* leave u wit *Brain Damage* like Slim Shady/



                          I'm a stuck, starving artist.
                          Vincent Van Going nowhere.
                          Sold my silver souls to the devil.
                          Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
                          Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
                          Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
                          Into the full view.
                          Do you see me as suitable...
                          to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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