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  • --VOTE--sween dog -VS- Invince--VOTE--

    aight....quick and simple

    1 verse
    20 bars MAX
    first to 5 votes, no crew/dickryde

    ima key sumthin up now, then post within a half-hour....

    peace
    playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

  • #2
    oh rite man

    lets do this, i might hav to post my verse tomorrow dependin on how long i hav

    peace
    Only a few of us left

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    • #3
      why yu leavin soon, im startin ima post within 10 fo sho....

      peace
      playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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      • #4
        **warm up**

        son, im outta yur leagues, i beat yu, yah dont have to READ-THE-REST/
        do ya SEE-THE-TEXT?then u see that in 2 bars, I made you BLEED-TO-DEATH/

        ** lets do this **

        son, ive HAD-IT-UP to here^, with whack emcees who havent RAPPED-ENUFF/
        even if yu "REWINDED" yur "shit talking", yu still could "BACK-IT-UP"/
        yur out there tryna do some league battles, but now yu ACT-LIKE-A-JUDGE/
        while im LAUGHIN-IT-UP, yu probly back there wit ya boy, PACKIN-THE-FUDGE/
        yur rhymes is so COLD, fool,i can SEE-FOG, nobody gayer than SWEEN-DOG/
        dayuuum, this kid and good nuff' fo' ninja turtles, hes a TEEN-FROG/
        damn son, yu whacker, then a whack-tack-a-tack yu only beat LUNATIK-n-BULLET?/
        but fool, i not only say that yur BULL-SHIT, yur also A-PRICK-n-ya-FULL-OF-IT/
        leavin yu useless, like a HANDICAP or a computer thats VIRUS-INFECTED/
        rip of yah legs so yu cant walk, now yu lose ya vision, cos yur EYES-DISECTED/
        yur ILLITERATE, so i guess its BACK-TO-SCHOOL for you, or HOOKT-ON-PHONIX/
        i took out ya brain, but if yu cant find it, ima say: "LOOK-YUR-ON-IT"/
        SWEEN-DOG, i could kill yu with a pair of SCISSORS or a TREE-BRANCH/
        ima be DOIN something meaninful, while yu doin nothin , jas FREELANCE/

        ** you got 1 life left **

        yu take forever for a few wack bars, how long does it HONESTLY-TAKE?/
        haha! sweendog, was just humiliated and murdered on AUGUST-THE-8TH/

        ** GAME OVER **
        playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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        • #5
          Hmmmm

          Not Bad, thats gonna take sum beatin, i'll post mine tomorrow after a get back from work.
          off to bed now

          peace and good luck
          Only a few of us left

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          • #6
            off to bed? its 5:00pm here, where yu live???

            peace
            playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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            • #7
              uppin
              playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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              • #8
                Lets get this shit started

                nice verse it will take sum beatin, good luck


                Yo,dawg, i understand u tryin to do yr best, but u could'nt hit hard if i gave u an titanium fist//
                Yr moanin about, who i've beat,but your that wack, u dont hav a defeated list//
                so u wanna be big, callin tha best of tha boards, well go through me first, go on, i insist//
                coz i can beat u anytime, anyplace, even when im pissed/
                i will kill u with my bare hands, even tho yr invincible//
                i'll slam ur freestyle rep and life though a steel table//
                put u in a wheelchair, then u will hav yr own toilet for the disabled//
                then i'll raid yr house, jus to finsh u off, hang u from ur ceiling, with yr telephone cable//
                Lunatik,Bullet, dawg your next to add on, with yr senselees rhymes//
                i'll hav u a fuckin rematch. so i can add u 2 times//
                ur seriously fucked, coz ur playin with dangerous minds//
                when ur still a fuckin kid, man, Beggin mummy to go on sum rides//
                im afraid yr not dope enuff, with yr pre-written flow//
                i will skin yr naked arse, from yr head to yr toe//
                and to celebrate, i'll go fuck a juicy arse hoe//
                Now ur defeated yr can take yr shit and go//
                coz my words r as sharp as a knife//
                oh sorry, i did'nt mean to embaress u dawg, but hey thats life//
                Tha invincable has been lyrically pissed on, on august tha ninth//



                Thats mine
                Lets hav the votes please

                GOOD LUCK
                Only a few of us left

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                • #9
                  UPPIN

                  COME ON VOTE


                  PEACE
                  Only a few of us left

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                  • #10
                    yo yo yo nice battle,

                    sween this was tight,

                    im afraid yr not dope enuff, with yr pre-written flow//
                    i will skin yr naked arse, from yr head to yr toe//
                    and to celebrate, i'll go fuck a juicy arse hoe//
                    Now ur defeated yr can take yr shit and go//
                    coz my words r as sharp as a knife//
                    oh sorry, i did'nt mean to embaress u dawg, but hey thats life//
                    Tha invincable has been lyrically pissed on, on august tha ninth//

                    but you took long while to respond to invicible and he's shit was a blind verse. so based on that i will have to say that invicible wrapped this one up.

                    heres what i liked invicible

                    yur out there tryna do some league battles, but now yu ACT-LIKE-A-JUDGE/
                    while im LAUGHIN-IT-UP, yu probly back there wit ya boy, PACKIN-THE-FUDGE/
                    yur rhymes is so COLD, fool,i can SEE-FOG, nobody gayer than SWEEN-DOG/
                    dayuuum, this kid and good nuff' fo' ninja turtles, hes a TEEN-FROG/

                    vote=invincible

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                    • #11
                      Yo my dawgs, that was a real tight battle but my vote goes yo sween, it flows much easier and has sum good shit in there,

                      Vote = sween

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by sikotik
                        Yo my dawgs, that was a real tight battle but my vote goes yo sween, it flows much easier and has sum good shit in there,

                        Vote = sween
                        wouldnt it flow better if all bars were same lenght? cos if one is like longs as hell and the next is short, how does that really flow? anyways...

                        1-1 uppin

                        peace
                        playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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                        • #13
                          Re: Lets get this shit started

                          Originally posted by sween dogg




                          im afraid yr not dope enuff, with yr pre-written flow//
                          i will skin yr naked arse, from yr head to yr toe//
                          and to celebrate, i'll go fuck a juicy arse hoe//



                          look invincible dogg, no beefin or out, i think shit like that flows nicely, i know i aint the best MC's but i dnt like it wen peeps can ahndle losin a vote and tryin to pick faults with someones judgment, just leave that shit out, it aint called for and it aint needed

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                          • #14
                            naw its cool, im jas sayin "that i dont understand why mine didnt flow well" , i mean i did it quickly, and didnt proof-read.... but i thought it was good...

                            peace
                            playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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                            • #15
                              yo

                              1-1 , this shud be a good match
                              Only a few of us left

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